okay, as i'm most proboly gonna be making more of these i should start a thread, heres the one i use in my sig...


Broken� my life�
Tears� that I can�t shed�
My heart pours with love�
But no one can feel it�
Why must I be this way?
My soul in so many pieces�

I�m a life inside a broken puppet�
Crying to get out�
But no one can release me�
I cry for love, and warmth�.
But no one can hear me.

wow, that's pretty impressive. You made that yourself??

It's just sad to leave alone :(
I like this poem ^^ (It's far better than mine thought :o )

well, i like the poem :)

thanx for the comments people, and yes i did make that last one myself :) heres another one i made before, its not as good as my last one though:

Broken

One day you will find me,
Laying there so ill,
My life, my dreams, and time it seems,
Broken, standing still.

This gaping hole inside me,
Breaking me in two,
My mind, my soul, is so confused,
I think again of you.

How can I live?
My minds a wreck,
My body, barley here,
I lay in wait, sadness,
Trembling with fear.

Well,It's still nice for me ^^ i like it
Keep it up,sir!

Dude, your poems are really cool...esp. Broken, that broke my heart. ^_^.

i made a new poem just now, its not very good, it only took a few minutes:

Freedom

I can feel it inside me,
Slowly drifting away,
The love is fading,
My body feels light,
My soul is returning.

Your spell doesn�t work anymore.
Soon I will be my self,
Back too normal,
I come out of this stronger,
Wiser.


Only a fool holds onto a lost love.

new poem,

My body is torn apart,
To many conflicting feelings,
Emotions run wild,
Just looking at your name breaks me inside�
So why I cant I stop thinking about you?

Even though you�re so close to me,
I cant have you back,
And it�s killing me.
I try to forget you,
Try to let you be,
But I cant.
My heart wont you let go.

Originally posted by ice!~neko
new poem,

My body is torn apart,
To many conflicting feelings,
Emotions run wild,
Just looking at your name breaks me inside�
So why I cant I stop thinking about you?

Even though you�re so close to me,
I cant have you back,
And it�s killing me.
I try to forget you,
Try to let you be,
But I cant.
My heart wont you let go.

wow, timmay that's great, neva knew ya were a hidden poet... one question... does this have to do with a certain sumone i know? (this is ashley, ;p) i haven;t seen ya on msn in ages either.

heres a new one i started writing, i'll proboly finish it later:

Trapped in this confusion,
My mind in so many places,
I don�t know what to think,
I feel so sad, and yet so happy,
My body broken in two.

I�m a soul drifting in the abyss of space,
Not going anywhere,
Just floating,
My body is dead,
My heart is shot,
What I thought was true,
Turned out false,

Will I ever find a way out?
A way into the light,
Will I continue drifting?
Further away from what is real.

A New Beginning

Pull away from the darkness,
And move into the light,
Rid myself of this heartache,
Continue with life�

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here is a poem i just wrote today, its a little freaky i know, what with all the rhyming XD.

Break out

Sometimes I feel like, I just want to curl up and die�
Punch a hole through this wall, I wonder why.
So break out, and take out, all that is wrong.
Wash the burnt taste out my mouth,
I must be strong.
All I�ve been through,
From the start throughout,
The time I spent with,
Just shun me out.
Break out of my shell, causing hell,
I�m alone in this world� I can�t be helped.
I�m gonna break,
My insecurity taking over
I�ve fallen over, and I cant up.
I�ve had enough�

1 new mini poem and 2 new poems ^^;


Screw relationships,
So full of heart ache,
Why bother?
You can spend a week in bliss, and a month in hell.
An endless cycle, you love her; you hate her� it just goes on and on.
Throw into the mix, depression and jealously.
it just doesn't make any sense.


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Why did I act like I did?
I caused too much pain, broke my life in two.
No way to reclaim what was lost.
Its all my fault,
I didn�t see it at first,
I was a fool to look past.
Now I�m paying for it,
How long will this torture last.

I could have stopped it,
Stopped this nightmare from starting,
But it�s to late for me now,
I can feel myself falling,
Drifting from this world, alone again.

The Knife

I look at these scared hands,
Scared not with a knife of steel,
But with a knife of words�
I look in the mirror,
I look inside me,
I carry the knife�
I hold the power to destroy me.

� I have destroyed me.

I cut myself down,
Tried to stop what I was feeling.
I look back at the last few months�
Filled with so many different emotions,
So many new feelings:
Love, happiness� depression and jealousy.
I created these feelings, but I can�t take them away�
My heart wont let me; my body wont let me,
My scars show this.

oh, Tim Tim, soo soo sad, :(. ya poor confussed lil bugga *huggies*, here sum light *gives ya a flashlight* ;p, just remember friends are usually the light that save ya.