@Blue Yuna-They suck a little but I just wanted to have something to show you.
I changed the T-shirt to a sweater in the pic from the start of the story (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/15832336/).
and, here she is from the end of the story (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/15832019/) with different hair.
I did these as thumbnail sketches about 5 minutes ago and scanned them way too big. I’ll hopefully have something good up soon.
edit:-since you specified colours I did this (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/15851895/). again it sucks almightily and is a really bad scan.
@ Blue Yuna- i have to do some essay for school today so i’ll try to finish another pic for tommorow.