Sorrow



Chronos
07-14-2002, 07:50 PM
I wrote my first poem in grade 4…i matured early from early divorse of my parents, heh, i suppose thats no excuse..just thought i’d share my poem.

Sorrow
sorrow is blue like a dead blue flower
and also like the appearance of the deep blue night sky.
it takes through my mind like the sight of an ocean.
and makes me think of falling into a deep blue sleep.


Setsuna Yuna
07-15-2002, 08:27 AM
Your poem is very metaphoric. You wrote it in the 4th grade? I think I wrote poems a lot better when I was in the 4th grade. ‘Sorrow’ seems to remind me of more emotions than just sadness. I think it was a nice short poem. 🙂

Chronos
07-15-2002, 11:12 PM
Originally posted by Setsuna Yuna
I think I wrote poems a lot better when I was in the 4th grade.

And modest too:eye:


Deja
07-27-2002, 09:53 AM
That’s a very good poem, Esspecially to have been written in 4th grade. ^_^

In 4th grade I’d prolly have written about boy bands or sumthin… X_x an odd child I was..

ahem ahem, anywayz, a very nice poem 🙂 I wanna see more of your poems, Chronos, cuz I know you gots more. Dun try to deny it!! 😉

😀


Autumn
07-30-2002, 05:48 AM
Heh, that’s really emotional. I can’t believe you wrote that when you were so young, but don’t take that the wrong way. It’s a very good poem so keep it up!

*Hugs.* Have any more? ^_^


Setsuna Yuna
08-03-2002, 07:34 AM
Originally posted by Chronos

And modest too:eye:

Ack! I didn’t mean it that way…it was supposed to be a compliment. I was trying to say that the poem was good because I used to write poems when I was in 4th grade and they were better than the ones I write now… >.<

Please dun hurt me…:Sad:


Beautifalmaiden
08-26-2002, 02:44 AM
CHRONOS!!! you never told me you did poetry, and you never told me your parents were divorced too!!!wow, I learn more things about you…. almost everyday!!! write more, I want more!!!!!!

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