Relics III – The Lyrical Album

Just so you know, I’ve been working on an album of only lyrics, since I am not musically inclined… I’m gonna post a couple songs here and there as I come up with them. One I have come up with is this…

1. Step Aside

*Short beginning solo/slow tempo*
*Increase tempo*

Kill all the comers that bring you down
Make them feel dead inside their crown
Because every day I see these faces
It’s like every memory are only retraces
Stupid motherfucker can’t take me out
I stand on my feet bitch, now take my clout
And this is what is happening every day
Step aside, motherfucker, get outta my way!

Bridge: Step aside!
Step aside!
Step aside!
Step aside!

Chorus: I’m on the brink of self-destruction!
My morality is in deconstruction
Thirst for violence, I’m salivating
Step aside bitch, or I’m infiltrating

Keep your eyes and ears open at all times
Be ready to defend at the drop of a dime
You ain’t got no time to negotiate
So fuck ’em up before they penetrate
My systems are down, I’m on overload
You can’t uncover my secret passcode
And this is what is happening every day
Step aside motherfucker, get outta my way!

Repeat Bridge

Repeat Chorus

My fists are swinging at you
I said get the fuck outta my way
Down to hell is where I’ll take you
So what the fuck you think you’re gonna say!

Chorus out.

It’s got a good beat to it, and the lyrics really show off your anger well;

"Step aside!
I’m on the brink of self-destruction!
My morality is in deconstruction…"

Nice work.
What type of music would it go along to/genre of music would it fit into? I see it as a kinda’ Rap/Metal hybrid.

Think… Cross between Reveille and Dry Kill Logic….

I see what you mean. These lyrics would fit perfectly into that catergory of music, good stuff.

Keep em’ comin’!

I’m not very good on commenting on songs but I think if that song had instruments playing in the background I would probably find myself playing that song on repeat. It’s very good but the only problem I can see with the song is that some people might compare it to other bands music. When you think about that’s only expected and fair because people get their inspiration from the bands they listen to.

What goes around comes around..

Gods in the Skies – 5/8

There are gods in the skies tonight… x4

Excellent, I can feel your ignorance
Decaying my blood cells like a pestilence
Malevolent, I smell your evil fragrance
Staining my nasal cavities with decadence
And I will stand by and deliver the veracity
I won’t let you fuck us, I got the capacity
To look through your mind, I can see your lies
No use in giving me your trivial alibis
There are gods in the skies tonight
They tell me what is real
They tell me who is contrite
They show me how to feel
Don’t piss in my eyes, it won’t make me blind
Don’t scream in my ears, my hearing will be fine
Don’t bullshit me, I have common sense
Because I can feel your fucking ignorance.