Hinamizawa Days 1.

nevermind

delete this thread

Just out of morbid curiosity, I clicked the link. I regret it. I scanned two paragraphs and found that it’s written on a 2nd grade level.

Give up on writing and start reading more until you understand how it’s done.

Prak I added your msn, how come your never online?

also lol.

Just out of morbid curiosity, I clicked the link. I regret it. I scanned two paragraphs and found that it’s written on a 2nd grade level.

Give up on writing and start reading more until you understand how it’s done.

…Seriously I am not that good a writing..
does it matter what level its written on. i dont want critisizm on the way i write. i AM only 13!

If you don’t want criticism, don’t post it for others to read. If you show it to people, you invite criticism.

And I don’t know or care how old you are. It really doesn’t matter.

Wow a member even younger than me.

If you don’t want criticism, don’t post it for others to read. If you show it to people, you invite criticism.

And I don’t know or care how old you are. It really doesn’t matter.

>:O I Only wanted people to read because i thought they might like it, but with people critisizing the way i write i dont like it!

Anyways can someone delete this thread FFS :-\

If you don’t want criticism, your writing will always be shit. Criticism does a lot more to help you improve than compliments do.

And no. We don’t usually delete threads here.

You idiot of course you need criticism, especially since your writing was awful, take my burnout review for example, Prak called it a total fanboy review, did I complain and whine like a baby and ask for the thread to be deleted? no I took his advice and improved the review, maybe if you got your head out of your ass and took his advice you may learn something, young whippersnaper.