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GiantPlaidMonk
10-25-2012, 05:47 PM
So I figure I’m the LAST guy on earth to think of this kind of thing, but I was participating in a community art challenge and started theming the entries to the Final Fantasy world for poops and giggles. Entry 1’s requirements were a "Helium-filled dog floating too close to a cactus" and Entry 2’s was "The Great Pumpkin"

Uber-noob to the webcomics world, so feedback and crits would be awesomely welcome.



Enkidoh
10-27-2012, 09:36 AM
Hello, welcome to the Shrine! 😀

Those comics are awesome! I like the teaming of a moogle with a Black Mage who isn’t just a parody of BM from 8-Bit Theater, 😉 Not to mention, using poor Angelo (from FFVIII) as an airship! :p Utterly twisted, ridiculous, over-the-top, and brilliant! 😀

If I can make a slight suggestion though, it would be funnier if the moogle actually spoke with the characteristic ‘kupo’ at the end of every sentence, especially if done in an ironic way. He just doesn’t seem to be a moogle without going "Kupokupo!" when flustered. 😉

Anyway, great work! 😀

P.S. I’ve moved this to the Art section by the way as it would be more appropriate there.


superzellz
10-28-2012, 01:51 AM
It’s Great!

GiantPlaidMonk
10-30-2012, 05:58 PM
As a show of how newbie a newbie can be, I didn’t even know about 8-Bit Theatre until your reply haha.

Love your feedback Enkidoh – I’ll definitely rework Mogmi’s dialogue a bit if I ever decide to do anything with these.

Thanks very much!


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