eternal

eternal.

life into me flow and breathe,
rest your head on my lap,
and cry,
cry for the children,
the homeless and poor,
cry for the people,
remembered no more,
trust in eternity,
put your faith in me,
your sword in my hand,
i’ll fight for the troubled in this eternal land.
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i just did this to see if anyone likes my poetry. please rate it.

very col…

bitches

bitches

That realy isn’t nice. People have their own tastes, and you shouldn’t mouth them off for voicing how they feel on a poem. You could say you thought the poem was good ect. but calling people bitches is just mean…

There’s one good thing about it, so far I can’t see spelling errors.

And I show respect where it belongs, this is just a poor poem.

bitches
Are you the bastard who voted ten?

People – stop annoying him.

np~