Identity is a Metroid-Based fan fiction which introduces a new character, new planets and a new adventure to the FGP. Work on Chapter One has started, but not finished, so here I am, bringing all of you a teaser...

Rain dripped through the hair of a young man, he stood tall on the cliff, wind blowing past his face. He breathed a heavy sigh of relief, the rain was soothing and cooled his body down. He pulled up his arm and studied his armour; it was FGP armour, standard issue, with a blaster on his right hand which could be modified, as well as room for modification on his boots. A high pitched buzzing sound filled his head and made him feel dizzy for a few seconds, lightning flashed and lit up the expansive area, another flash filled his eyes, revealing a figure in his head for a split second, a monster, with an almost jelly-like outer body.

He clutched his head and grit his teeth, a severe stinging pain shot through his brain. The screeching sound flew past him again, it was coming from a building, on the cliff face before him. He put his hand around his blaster arm and leapt down�



�Chapter One Out 15/04/03

Your so descriptive RS, cant wait to see what the story is about, anticipating 4/15

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Wow that was great for a intro...I cannot wait till a full installment. If you didn't know, I'm a huge metroid fan. I never thought of a fan fiction would work for it but now I finally get to read one :D

very good intro and very descriptive....
im also a very big metroid fan and id like to see another story similar to samus'
get working rs... i cant wait.... XD