Here I'll be posting some of the song lyrics I've writen and sometimes performed... enjoy...

The Truth Within

[Slow Rap]

When this all began,
(I believed your every word,)
I'd get lost in the ever present glow in your eyes,
(I was dellusional,)
My mind wasn't there,
I'd just hear you say it,
then believe what I heard.
You never tried,
(To meet me half-way)
to comprimise.
Everything had to go your way,
(I can't pretend anymore)
All the time,
(I'm running from the truth)
I can't do this anymore,
(I'm trying to find the truth...)

[Pre-Chorus - Slow Lyrics, Getting Faster]

This isn't how I wanted it to be,
how I felt it would end,
but there's no turning back now,
I'm on my own now!
I don't know who to trust anymore!
I'm trying not to break,
trying to vent it out slowly,
but this is just too much,
you take the best from me!

[Chorus - Aggresive Lyrics]

I'm trying to find the truth,
within this rubble of lies,
collapse of trust.
I'm trying not to break,
but I'm so tired of this deceit.
I was running away at first,
but now there's no turning back,
just let me go.

[Slow Rap]

When this all ends,
(I don't think I'll trust again)
I don't think I'll ever be the same,
just a twisted and burnt remainder,
with my old name.
Don't try to help me,
(I'm not running from the truth)
I'm not gonna pretend no more,
(I won't pretend)
I won't do this no more...
(I've found the truth!)

[Chorus x4]

[Fading voice]
When this all ends...

A/N: The lines in the rap sections in brackets are singing in the background.

Like I've said before and I will say it again great song Kaspar. Very similar to Linkin Park and I guess (know) that you got your ideas for the song from there. I wished I could heard you perfom it though and that more people will post in this thread because they're really missing out on a good piece of writing.

Well done..

Very ambitious work RS. Not every day we see such talent. You seriously have the qualities to become anything you wanna be. I would love to see you make this into a real song. I bet it would be awesome to hear. Anyways, your song was well written and very meaningful. Reminds me of a lot rap I heard before. (artists expressing themselves and how the feel inside.)

I loved this song a lot, it's up there with the rest your other works. Great job ;)

Karma

[Fast Rap]

Don't worry,
I'm okay
I'm alright.
Just broken inside,
but I'm fine,
just fine.
Now,
lets' see you get through this shit,
all the crap you put me through.
Because you're a CRIMINAL,
stealing my heart,
stealing my soul,
and running away.
Because you're a CRIMINAL.

[Slow, Soft Chorus]

I can't believe that you plead innocent,
to a crime you blatantly commited,
but don't worry,
I won't shoot you,
I won't harm you.
I'll let fate play it's part through the day,
time go by and when the cycle ends,
it'll all come back to you,
that's what we call Karma.
So just don't worry.

[Fast Rap]

Don't turn your back on me!
The jury's watching,
analyzing your every fucking move,
HAHA! I am the judge and hury,
and the verdict is clear;
guilty as charged!
Maybe I'm paranoid,
or maybe I just know something you don't.
The facts are here, lay out before you.
But you still deny it!
Now hon' I don't like violence,
and I don't want violence.
But look right here,
this blade on my wrist,
now this is a knife,
this will kill.
Looky Looky,
well I've gone a bit crazy it seems,
but this life just isn't working out for me,
this Karma thing just ain't going my way.

[Chorus x3]

[Whisper]

Karma, you do something bad, it's gonna hit you back...

Great song Kaspar. It's a bit dark the theme but without it, it would just be worthless. Encore, encore..

A bit depressing but I enjoyed it. The thing is with your poems and songs is sometimes there are bit hard to endure. They seem so sad and hurtful which I find difficult to stomach sometimes. I had a rough time growing up so it sometimes brings back painful memories that I wish we gone...

You song really displays who you are and the tough life you lead. That only means your very strong inside...your lucky to have such a good quality.

Keep up the great work! Encore!