This peice took me about two days. I thought the chick looked pretty cool when I drew her. Its my first real water color I've done. Its pretty good for me since my painting skills seek some improvement. I wish it was a little bigger I had to size it down quite a bit...Well, tell me what you think.

i love it!:) the colors are a great pick. its a shame u had to size her down, but u didn't have a choice. it still looks great though.:D one thing i wanna know how in hell did u do that?! with the water colors i thought they were hard to work with??:confused: well keep up the fantastic work.;)

Great drawing Cygnus~ There's nothing much to say without sounding cliched so I will stop there. The drawing is perfect (in my eyes anyoo) ^_^

Keep up the good work! =D

Thanks you guys! I really appreciate it! :D Maybe some people could post a little more�apparently 13 people have looked at it but didn�t care to give me a critique. :( I really need alot of different insights to tell me how I could improve...

An excellent work you have done Cygnus. The woman is well proportionned(word? sp?) and very detailed.

Only one thing : the background. Compared to the woman, the background seem it needs a little work, but I'm sure you wanted to show more the woman than the background =P.

It is hard to find any flaws when it is well done like that.

wow.... id kill to have your skills.... ;_;
but ya.... XD
i like the colors and the fluency of it...
and the hair.... wow..... i cant do hair for the life of me.... ^_^

Excellent costume design, especially her hat thingie. The hair really gives this art attitude, and I love the background with the stone-ish color thingies. The hands are proportional to her body (many can't do that properly in realistic anime), good job!

The only things I can really see that you could work into your next drawing are fine wrinkle details. The button thing that connects the two sides around her belly should look like they're tugging at the fabric a bit. It almost always looks better when wrinkles are based on surrounding/close objects rather than just air. It takes tons more time and practice, but it's worth it! (I suck at this myself, but I do know what I'm talking about ^^;;)

This piece has lots of color, the face is well done, and the overall appearance is nice. Oh, and her underwear is sexy! :D

this pic totally kicks ass! ...gotta love them colours:)