Eh I didn't mean for this to sound like a love poem but it turned out that way. I meant it to sound like a state of being set free from the burdens of life. I think I coulda done better too. =o
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Reflecting on these memories
Emotions that cannot be understood
From heights as high as Heaven's lovely grace
Flipping through the pages like a well written book

Searching for something precious and rare
A true love not polluted by poison
hidden so deep, almost forgotten
the feeling stronger than logic and reason

On that day this joy was given
Hearts touched and spirits flew
Tender love exchanged, the world's rules broken
Safe and protected the love was as the wind blew

It was bright and intense but soothing
exciting new feelings came
and that shattered the past and made way for the future
true love ensured nothing would be the same

United it became stronger, love was held strong
peircing through the darkness burning up the unclean
Finally the hidden treasure was found
and the soul was set free again

I tried poetry once and and it turned out like crap I think that was good. . . . . very good

You are pretty good at poetry. :APPLAUSE: ENCORE ENCORE:)

o.o ahh, well i don't really write that much poetry, anything else I have either stinks or is unfinished, so you'll have to wait til my lazy ass gets inspired. XD If you want an encore, just read the poem over again. :p