got the poetic mood...but from what im prducing i must be either really depressed and on the verge of suicide or i have a serious problem here lol...yeah anyways here tis

Two

do you remember me? the malice that kept you cold,
your still two, remember that,
i�m still here, don�t forget.
i�m the second face, remember me?

i saw the way you smiled at them,
the way you hugged them with the warmth you never had.
and i still watch waiting until you realise that no one is your friend,
that i�m the spite that kept you in the dark.

you feel me there don�t you? aching against your skull,
you want to push away, I want to push away,
want the loneliness, want the frozen,
want the malice that�s know as the second face.

two. one and one, sides put together,
the darkness and the light,
your candle is burning out,
don�t have a hope, don�t have a way

do you remember me? the malice that kept you cold,
your still two, remember that,
i�m still here, don�t forget.
i�m the second face, remember me?


well thats it give good plentiful comments lol i want them

love you all
Aeo

Well, it's certainly a very dark poem, but well written all the same. I like the way you have written it, and it has a very affective feel to it. Good work, I'd like to see more from you.

that is a dark poem but it doesn't stop it from being very effective and deep. I like your style, i don't know how to explain it but your make your poetry quite well...i don't know, strong? Yeah, anyway i think you should write more because you have talent, in my opinion anyway.

taKi aFiRm

Heh, I liked the dark theme in your poem *Aeowen_Elf* and you really know how to write about it. Great job! *Claps* ^_^

Nicely written :) I like the emotion expressed into it.