its been along time since i bothered wirting a poem, its kinda fitting that it just so happened to be about writing (in a way)

the message in this is kinda hard to find, its about how you keep turning back to somone you 'love', and how you wirte about them. its kinda hard to explain what i mean but mabye if you read it you might find it a little easyer :).


And still I fall

So here I am again, lost in my own mind,
In my own thoughts,
I consume myself in a world of disbelief, and misinterpretations.

-And still I fall

Here you are again, the centre of my thoughts,
Controlling my machine like mind.
No matter what I do, the cycle continues,
No matter how far I run, you always find me.

-And still I fall

Like a record that skips a line, and rewinds itself
Back to start the song again.
The memories so clear, and yet so blurred,
Blurred not by time, but by my mind�
The pain so hard to find.

-And still I fall

Breath becomes tight as I try to escape,
Escape into this sea of words,
To love, to hate� what�s the point?
I will always fall, always fail�

This false love will fail more.

Very nice Neko. You put the words in a very nice order.
Hrm, I understood the turning to your love part but... not how you write about them. But complex meanings in poems are a sign of a good poet. It makes you think about the poems.

Cool. I like the repition and the way it flows. Keep up the good work.