Faramir
09-06-2002, 11:12 AM
Well, here's my latest drawing. Enjoy.
http://groups.msn.com/TheLairoftheBlackDragon/originaldrawings.msnw?action=ShowPhoto&PhotoID=375
Feedback appreciated btw.

April
09-06-2002, 08:51 PM
that's pretty cool Faramir, nice linework and the hair is really shiny! The folds on the clothes are nice and the expression on his face is kinda sinister ^^;;

One crit though, he's kinda wonky, like he's leaning to the right on the picture ... when you're composing your figures try drawing a central vertical line and work around it to prevent your characters leaning to the side ... I also thought that about your Meccha piccy in the other thread, they're both wonderful drawings, I envy your clean lines mine are so sketchy XD

Faramir
09-07-2002, 11:56 AM
Thanks for the comments, I appreciate them. I think when they got scanned, the coulda been tilted slightly!

Tayste
10-07-2002, 11:51 AM
Hmm.. You could have more detail on his face, generally it looks like it was done in 10 minutes. Theres no detail on it at all, however the hair was good. To do a really good drawing you need to take alot of time over it but again, this comes will alot of practice and experience with drawing, so well done. If your thinking of taking art further you will improve but this is good for a quick job!