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Um, right. I warn you, I'm no poet :uh?:
In other words.. I did not look at the number of words, it doesn't rhyme, it doesn't have some sort of rhytm or whatever poems have.. It's just something I needed to get out =\
And if it's very crappy, blame CF for making me post it =P

blame me, spit me out
just for once, hear me out?
you cry, you're afraid
of me?
or of losing what you have?
you are sad, really
after all this time
you still did not get over it
you won't see it's done and over with
you can't see I don't want back
what I lost to you
you don't believe I'm happy for you
you still believe in the lies
that they told you
you believe I did all the damage
go ahead and believe it
I no longer care..

*hides* XD XD XD
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Nymph. . . ish not a bad poem. . . really. ^^.

It's like. . . an abstract expression of your feelings. I like it. It a poem with a different kind of flava. I like the rythum, and the way in which you phrased the words suited the piece.

Keep it up Nymph. :D

Iris...don't like that...no offense...

Nice poem you got there though. It vents out your intermost thoughts, eh? Don't be ashamed...aren't we Shriners supposed to be nice (mostly)?

And congrats to CF to getting her to post it!

Well that certainly was not bad for someone who isn't very poetic. Expression of feelings, like others said, is great value in a poem. And believe me, others will agree. Just take some practice, and poetry really isn't hard to get at. ^^

Going off top for a sec..

quote by Prinsesa: Iris....don't like that...

How could you not like Iris? She's all l337! I mean, Capcom didn't bother to explain how she got into X4, but then again, MMX games ALWAYS have some character that pops up, unexplained. Iris made MMX4 what it is...the best MMX. Sooo, Iris is really an awesome l337 character who (as TK would say) is own you. Not yelling at ya' Prinsesa, just stating my opinion. :)

is not bad for a non poetic at all.
Very nicely said above, an abstract expression of feelings.
Feels angry and agressive,
I like it.
:D

Woah, that poem was great Nymph. It remined me of Linkin Park's songs kinda and that's a very good thing to me. *Claps.*

Encore, encore! ^_^