Allure
04-17-2002, 09:42 PM
Here's a poem a wrote a while back. I'd be happy to post more of my poetry if there's an interest. And constructive critiscm is most appreciated.
She walks alone.
No one to greet her,
No one to direct her,
No one to stop her.
A fallen angel has been canned.
Eyes bright but seeing nothing;
They only deceive her.
Fools have played this game
Too many times.
And yet, they win.
Every time.
She won't take that.
Her heart can't stretch anymore.
It's not made to feel so much.
She stumbles,
Memory blocking her way.
If only, if only.
Why do you grow so cold?
So cold.
And yet, wrapped in this confusion,
This aching, wanting, needing,
Paralyzing her from going any farther.
A fallen angel has been canned.
We can't take back the thoughts we've had,
She owns her life, but no one knows.
Her secrets are her own as well.
If she can't tell them, she can't live.
But who does she tell?
If she's blind already, who can see her?
Ears deafened by the shrieking sirens
Cannot hear those painful cries.
Arms burdened by responsibility
Cannot support the weak.
Laughter peeks around the corner of her mind,
But frightened by the torment of her thoughts,
It runs away.
A fallen angel has been canned.
It takes a lot of energy to live a lie.
But somehow she finds some remaining strength,
And her pace quickens along the narrow, winding street.
She's running to a place where no one goes.
Her feet, the petals of a flower,
Do not make a sound.
She can't turn back now.
Too many wasted times were caught in her hand,
And thrown away.
Chances that would never show themselves again.
Forgotten by everyone
But her.
Too many times.
If only, if only.
Why do you grow so cold?
So cold.
She falls to the ground,
And the pain of memory grips her swollen heart.
Why can't they see, she cries.
They know what to look for.
But they'll never know
What to find.
A fallen angel has been canned.
Pillows of forgiveness seem so far away.
To search for anything truthful..
No, that couldn't be right.
It's too hard.
So how do you find the truth in a haystack of lies?
Too many answers to so few questions.
How can we find the time?
She doesn't have it anymore.
They take too much of her.
And now, pain isn't enough.
They want something else.
Where does the day go?
If only, if only.
Why do you grow so cold?
So cold.
And yet, they will never find what they're looking for.
And so she falls to her knees in the darkened street,
Wishing that everything would change,
And that everything was the same.
And with her head in her hands,
She quietly begins to cry.
A fallen angel has been canned.
It's me they want.
She walks alone.
No one to greet her,
No one to direct her,
No one to stop her.
A fallen angel has been canned.
Eyes bright but seeing nothing;
They only deceive her.
Fools have played this game
Too many times.
And yet, they win.
Every time.
She won't take that.
Her heart can't stretch anymore.
It's not made to feel so much.
She stumbles,
Memory blocking her way.
If only, if only.
Why do you grow so cold?
So cold.
And yet, wrapped in this confusion,
This aching, wanting, needing,
Paralyzing her from going any farther.
A fallen angel has been canned.
We can't take back the thoughts we've had,
She owns her life, but no one knows.
Her secrets are her own as well.
If she can't tell them, she can't live.
But who does she tell?
If she's blind already, who can see her?
Ears deafened by the shrieking sirens
Cannot hear those painful cries.
Arms burdened by responsibility
Cannot support the weak.
Laughter peeks around the corner of her mind,
But frightened by the torment of her thoughts,
It runs away.
A fallen angel has been canned.
It takes a lot of energy to live a lie.
But somehow she finds some remaining strength,
And her pace quickens along the narrow, winding street.
She's running to a place where no one goes.
Her feet, the petals of a flower,
Do not make a sound.
She can't turn back now.
Too many wasted times were caught in her hand,
And thrown away.
Chances that would never show themselves again.
Forgotten by everyone
But her.
Too many times.
If only, if only.
Why do you grow so cold?
So cold.
She falls to the ground,
And the pain of memory grips her swollen heart.
Why can't they see, she cries.
They know what to look for.
But they'll never know
What to find.
A fallen angel has been canned.
Pillows of forgiveness seem so far away.
To search for anything truthful..
No, that couldn't be right.
It's too hard.
So how do you find the truth in a haystack of lies?
Too many answers to so few questions.
How can we find the time?
She doesn't have it anymore.
They take too much of her.
And now, pain isn't enough.
They want something else.
Where does the day go?
If only, if only.
Why do you grow so cold?
So cold.
And yet, they will never find what they're looking for.
And so she falls to her knees in the darkened street,
Wishing that everything would change,
And that everything was the same.
And with her head in her hands,
She quietly begins to cry.
A fallen angel has been canned.
It's me they want.