I wrote this for my english monolog. I got a 6a 4 it which is alright but my dumba$$ teacher siad i should have done better and told me off!

Thoughts fly through my head as I tumble from the sky,
Hurtling for the cold, hard floor.
My wings don�t respond to my plight,
They hang helpless.

Wind sweeps back my hair from my face,
I close my eyes tightly shut.
I let myself scream,
But nothing comes out.

I don�t feel pain as I hit the floor,
I just hear a dull thud as my limp body is dropped.
My wings still won�t reply.
I don�t open my eyes.

I try and clear my mind,
To grasp a clear picture.
My body begins to numb.
I must try to move.

My fingers tingle painfully,
And a warm, thick, liquid seeps from my head.
I open my eyes and sit up.
Where am I?

Is this earth? No, it can�t be�.
But I remember it so clearly�this is earth.

I thought it was really good but hey i can't win against my teacher! :)

Hey, that was really good! You're teacher must really suck if he/she doesn't appreciate your creativity 'cause that's what counts!