Well... this is about me sucking in ff8 game. enjoy.


Chapter 1: Led my way the a FF8

"Ana... mom said come clean the dishes when she gone to work!," I wince from my brother yelling over the bed when he came in. I swear if he yell at me with is dam elephant mouth, am gonna take that voice box outtake his throat and smashes to pieces. Harshly, I hate washing dishes its gawky, yucky, and gross. I hardly thought my mom never want me to wash dishes I hated. A knock was banging on my door, moaning at my sleep he came in with his weird smell (he didn't take a shower since he staying over) pulling my cover reveal my brown skin, wearing a night cap (so my hair want get messy), yellow shirt attached with a pocket on the front, and a blue short pants. "I don't wanna wash dishes. She can do it herself!," I my brother yelled, "stop talking to our mother like that girl you need to do something since you lazy around the house all day!," you know what, am sick and tired of his sappy retard mouth. Telling me over and over about my health. Hell no, about that. He can slender himself over to Stateboro. Not listen to his conversation, I gladly punch him in the back for waking me up with my beautiful dream of all cost. He rub his back because it hurts like hell. After suffering loser, I hurry on dress, went the bathroom to brush my teeth, comb my hair, then walk to the kitchen where my father was laying on the cough walking tv land channel. "Hey daddy," "hey noodle," answered back with a (he call me noodle every time I came in from school) smile weak, I look over the sink seeing dirty dishes on there. [I]'GROSSNESS!' blow my mind off, gratefully I pretended to for get the dishes. Walk back the room, turn on the tv showing ed, edd'n, and eddy.

"Maybe I'll start playing ff8 its been long time since I play it," turning the channel to L1, while getting the dis 1 from case, placed on playstation 2 as it sled open and back in, and finally ready to play it. The part was started where Squall was in the infirmary room with a bandage around his forehead (Seifer was training battle with him. That jerk hurting poor Squally). Just about to, the screen went black. 'What the hell!? Must be the power went out again,' ignore my thoughts, I went over it to see was wrong. It went on again, making think this is some kind of joke. Before I knew, went closer to the tv feeling some dwarf from somewhere from my room. Feeling gloomy to everything, a strong wind pull me in harder. My whole body went through the screen like a ghost from the dead. I mean am look like a ghost that die from hell? Nope I feel like a reaper take person soul. Seeing funny color, pulling past some tunnel, not seeing my family again except for my brother he suck. It was like there nothing there. Nothing but pitch black from reality. "............" cautious and afraid I felt dizzy from my head. It hurts feeling a big lump in my head from the side. 'Wait... I can hear water waving something. Birds chirping? This is my world no more.'

My eyes shock open to corner of a rock, blurring vision came to me as focusing on the sight of a blue fuzzy figure. As it came through, I was on a beach beautiful breeze beach. Lifting my body since am laying on the sand, "Oh my god!� Am wearing black mini sweat jacket with long sleeves reach to my hand, dark blue tank tube underneath the jacket, dark green cargo pants attach with pocket on my thighs, black belts straps around my waist, black moogle beanie, and some black combo boots. Plus my hair is very long in the back that curl up to my waist and the right is short as the other long. But thats not all... am carry two shurikens: one is magic shuriken and the other is spiral shuriken. This is my perfect day in my entire life.

After struggle around the field, I spotted a school just beyond the road, "Balamb Garden!? I must been it... gasp... FF8!" I squeal so excited. Jumping and twirling, flip backwards and forwards, feels like at happy. Well, I hurry in to the entrance to see what it look like. Picking my pace with my ninja skills pasting a few students along the way, I accidentally bump into something. It was the headmaster Cid himself. I got myself fast bowing down to him as a apologize, "oops... I mean am sorry I was going to fast... and uh..," he cut me off by getting up wipe himself from the floor, "it okay young lady, say I haven't see you around here," crap... oh man what should I do! I got it maybe I tell him am from another world... naah he won't believe me so I lie.

"Am new here from.... Timber yeah Timber I from Timber." I lied. "Timber... hmm. Well welcome to Balamb Garden am headmaster Cid. And you are?" "Ana Dekle, sir. Am fifteen-year-old," he think of my last name, "Dekle? Are you relative to a student name Seifer Almasy?," I just gave him a confused look. Me relative with Seifer that blond headed scar face jack ass. "No, sir?" He just look at me for once, but he know am not, "Oh just wandering. Let me take you to class on B1," I nodded. We head off the elevator climbing that stairs, it opening by itself went in as he push the button. It took us up to B1. As it stop, step out knowing that am afraid of heights walking down the hall to the end. They was nothing on the hallway, but there a room there on the right side. Accurate not to embarrassed myself from other student, but Squall will be there. Me and headmaster Cid went in see other students take there sits, starting to look at me and whisper over me. I take a look around the room till I spotted Squall head down not look at me, then over the Seifer. That nasty boozer. But glance back to Squall who knowing that he staring at me. I quickly look back to the instructor, Quistis Trepe, who standing toward us. Soon he left me alone with the other students and Quistis now telling the students about me, "class we have a new student in our room today her name is...," I cut in before she say it, "Ana Dekle that my name," said it with a cheerful speech. They laugh at my intelligent way because am funny and I like to make someone laugh.

"Settle down, settle down. Well Miss Dekle, why won't you sit by..... Squall," I was like... oh man god am gonna sit by the handsome sexy character Squall. I was too hyper that I pick up speed as fast like a rabbit, take a sit by Leonheart didn't see me coming before sitting down. Everyone eyes wide on me seeing my ninja skills, doubt they knew it will coming. Quistis clear her throat walking back to her desk. Announcing about the seeD test coming up today.

Where's MMM when you need him?

Chapter 2: Hot hot baby and deported to land part. 1

"You all know about the seeD test that was going around so don't get to excited," she glance to Seifer, "oh and Seifer, don't hurt your partner over training next time," he scowl over Squall stilling staring at the desk. Bang the his desk with his fist. I was pissed off to his attitude of his clenching my fist so hard won't me to kick his ass. I was off guard by Quistis speaking, "you all dismissed excepted for Squall and Ana will you two come here just a second," everybody went off, using my ninja hearing Seifer was snickered at me. I was about to pop him, till I felt a hand on my shoulder stop me. I look back see who holding my off it was Squall, nodded his head "no" that make me pissed off more.

"You two didn't go to Fire Carven yet have you?,"

I shook my head. Underdog to Squall saying in his mind, 'I was going to but Seifer.'

"Is something the matter Squall?," said Quistis, but I cut her off again, "naah don't worry about him he just went to lala land," I snicker, look at him shooting me a death glare. Shoot I do the same. Quistis shook her head from our emotion ways, "Well if you two done, meet me at the entrance gate by noon. You may go to your desks if like," she walk out the room living me and mr.coldhearted here alone. So I decided to went back the my desk to get my GF who know what will happen with out them in battle. The screen lift up from the computer, checking to see everything new. Squall came where I was and turn on his computer too. I finally attend Shiva and he attained Quetzalcoatl to unanimous my GF I possibly look at him so more till he caught me staring at him, "what?," he said in a low voice, "nothing and stop staring at me!," "..........." he sigh, "yeah whatever, am going." I snapped on him leaving him to his own space. Storming out the classroom feeling rage and burden my two shuriken around, since I hardly notice I flung it toward the hall went straight to that girl who just come out of nowhere! "HEY LOOK OUT!" she look and gasped dodging my shuriken other side of the hall. It squint back toward me from side of the corner. Quickly flip backwards carefully not to get cut, I finally grab it till it cut my wrist. Blood oozed drop on the floor, I winch in pain. I shouldn't get two shuriken anyway. Fell into my knees, hiss and cussing I noticed the girl that I shout at came over me.

"Hey are you alright?" said the girl. "I was asking the same thing. Am sorry about my weapon it went out of me," I apology, while stand myself up. "That okay am the one who sorry not knowing where I was going. So are you from that class over there?,"

"Yeah it over anyway." Uh oh, she about to say...

"Really? WOOOHOOO!," she squeal over my ear. "Um... yeah so what your name?" "Am Selphie Tilmitt. I just got transport to my Trabia Garden and you are?" This is my chance to show my style,"You Miss Tilmiit, are staring at the great ninja, Ana Dekle, from Timber," Selphie laugh so hard on the floor, "you mean the great dumb ninja who almost kill someone," turning around, Squall was laying his back on the wall arm cross on his chest, legs criss cross to the side. He almost pissed me off again. I went up to him and said, "you got something say, Mr. am-so-dedicated-about-nothing," I hissed at him, "no," "good then," I stomp over the Selphie she still giggling over my introducing. She ask me about showing around in garden, "well sure I'll take you a tour," "what if you a new student in this school then why did you know about other rooms?," Squall gave me a confusing look.

Oh man now am stuck. I can't tell them that I already knew this before I got this game their think I psycho, "well... you see," I sweat dropped, "you know what.. I think I hear headmaster calling me bye!," I speed off fast. Past through some guy in green shirt about cards, I stop and tell him can I have them then he handed to me. Look back see Selphie and Squall on my tail, pressing the buttons to go down. Then it went down. "Whew... thought they gonna know am not around here," "not around here what?," I jumped off my skin, hearing someones voice in my head. I turn and there they were inside the elevator. "When ya get in here?" "haste," "oh," 'Curse Squall and his magic!'

As we made it to the bottom, Squall grab my hood know that am going to leave again, "you said your not around here don't you?," "no don't be silly. I say am not around from this.... school yet that right school," he finally let got of my hood, shot him a glare look. Selphie was confused from what I said before. After showing her the direction stand in the middle of the floor, I forgot about my wrist was bleeding so I went to the infirmary. I look inside the office see if Dr. Kadowaki was in here, "may I help you," I turn around see Dr. Kadowaki standing there with his white coat on, "yes I injured my wrist with weapon can you do something for it because am late for my seeD test," took a look on my wrist, "well since you cut yourself, I do believe I have some bandages for that," went to her desk got out some bandage and rubbing alcohol. Grabbing my wrist with her hand, carefully pour the alcohol on me, "this may sting a little," I hiss, burning the blood on my cut. Tears started to came out my eyes. Bandaging around the wrist tightly so it want get loose. Finally, she was done. I thank her as I left.

"Boy, I hope Quistis want get mad about be late. But maybe I got to cafeteria for once." 'Seifer, Fujin, and Rajin will be there.' Now walking in the cafeteria, I saw Fujin talking to Seifer about drinking some water of something. I know that goof ball Rajin with them too.

"SEIFER. DRINK!"

"........" he sigh. I walk in getting the looks on Seifer, he started to break me out for some reason. Fujin look at me. That pale face, silver short hair with that eye-patch on her. She look goofy on it. Wandering my mind, Rajin came up to me with a confused look, "hey your that new student from Timber right?," "yeah gotta problem with that?," he took a step back from my rudeness. Yes fear my powers MWAHAHAHAHA! I was kidding. Anyway, Seifer came up to me with stern look on it, "your name is Ana Dekle, right?," "yes, why?" he took a deep breath to answer something, "this is crazy but, your my sister.� UWHATTTTT!!!

"You mean to tell me that am your sister?"

"Well am sure am mean I didn't seen you in awhile seen seven years ago."

"Bad news man, because am don't remember that sorry,"

Suddenly, a boy rush in to the cafeteria like the wind. It seems his here for the hot dogs. "Hey.. is there... anymore... hot dogs," he catching his breath tired. The lady was sold out of hot dogs He grunt hearing there was no more hot dogs Pouting along out the cafeteria. Me and the others look at him weirdly.

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'? y'know'

"Splendid, that student broken the rule of running. We'll go arrest him for good." (Man can't remember the words from the game so I have to made up what they saying.)

Seifer said bye to me so on with his goons. Now it was time to meet up with Instructor Trepe who is now waiting on me at the entrance. Dang, hope Squall want get mad at me for this. It was long way to get to the entrance. Maybe I should get some air ride in this school. Sometimes it different to be necessary from choosing some support things from your head am mean Seifer is my brother who that hell wrote this crap. After an hours, I finally made it at the entrance and Squall and Quistis are waiting there. Wait... Quistis is not wearing her instructor uniform she wearing her battle clothes. Holy moly. And why did Squall giving me the looks now. I glance him back tell him get off back look. He ignore me like crap. That son a of....

"Your late!"

"Oh am sorry am late Mr. attitude." He growl underneath his teeth, I intended to do the same, "knock it off you two," Quistis cut in. I pouted and walk off letting them follow me. Walking alone the grassy fields, a bite bug attach me behind not knowing it came out from nowhere, "you stupid bug! Feel the wrath of the great ninja, Ana!," got out my two shurikens charging toward as I cut a damage on it. Squall use draw on it he got 7 fires.

'Hey how come I didn't do that?'

I focus on my magic, cast draw on the little bastard. "Oh cool I have 5 scans," "good for you. You getting the hang of it," Quistis said, whip her weapon at the bug. I went sideways to get it straight, hurl over the right, flung my magic shuriken at the bug. Slash and fell on the ground, the battle was over. (yeah I know it was short battle. ) "WOOOHOOO WE DID IT!," I shout as loud as Selphie did. Squal pluck his ears from my shouting, "can you be a little more hyper please. You give me annoying," stop jumping around hiss at his some more. Hearing some giggle from instructor, calmly sank myself on the ground embarrassed. Peril to get any monster around, we made it the carven. Kinda feel nervous going in, with the heat of hell. Two guard blocking the cave, seeing us standing, " objective to obtain a low-level GF a See D member must support. Are you ready?," "I'm ready," Squall answer. I nodded mean am ready too I think. "Am there support, Instructor No. 14, Quistis Trepe," other guard spoke up, "select a time limit. Choose one suited to your abilities challenging, yet reasonable."

"I say 20 minutes," I spoke before Squal giving the stare. 'Ha loser!'

He rolled his eyes on me. Oh no he didn't roll his eyes on me. Child you need to stop. "Very good. Good luck."

They let us past through letting Squall led us girls. The cave is hot like hot sauce. My cousin always put hot sauce on his food, and it burn her tongue. She really need to stop doing that. Anyway, listen of Quistis commotion that giving me a headache all the way to a crater. Ifrit came out with a roaring tone. Blocking my ears from the noise, I hear someone talking to me in my mind.

'Hey Ana.'

'Uh who are you?'

'Its Shiva silly your GF.'

'Oh hi, so wuz'up.'

'Ifrit is weak against ice attacks. He hated ice attacks.'

'I know that.'

'Sure you do so call me if you need me.'

'Okay peace.'

'Oh and one more thing.'

'What?'

'Look out because Ifrit is casting fire toward you!'

'He casting what?'

(Final Fantasy VII- Still more fighting)

Am back to I was seeing that monster casting fire toward. Dodge the magic, flip curl over the rock. I stuck my tongue at it, then shock a bird. Squall attack with his gunblade it took the damage. I use draw on Ifrit, glow circle twirling around me, blue aura came swirling over my body (doing Yuffie casting style). Eight cures, sweet! The others were busy holding off the hell monster so I call Shiva, "yo Shiva! Need help around here!," "okay, be there about an second," for waiting on Shiva, cot wheel over then flip on the right, flung my two shurikens together. Consider, he a clang plunge through the beast arms. It roar was pain. Yes feel pain! Feel more blood! Then, alter over to Squall, Shiva appear giving Ifrit a chill his temper. He froze like icicle. I shout are her for giving that hot headed a freeze. We thumbs up and disappeared back to my mind.

"They have Shiva!," Ifrit muttered. Squall summon Quetzalcoatl, dark clouds gather around the above, lightening thunder come to gather, it came down out f the dark clouds. Make a barrier around Ifrit, electric shocks snap everywhere in the barrier, then it let it out a bangs. Ingenious, that will take the damage, I wasn't paying attention till Ifrit taunting us with horrible voice, "Mere mortals! You will never defeat me even that spunky little ninja!" uh oh no one call me spunky. I was in rage, temperate, and hatred. Dark aura rise beneath my feet, my hair started to stick up wildly, my teeth grow sharp from the bottom. They look at me like am started to exploded, but this is for real. Twitching and shaken, I look up to everybody, gasp and scared even Ifrit was scared. "No one... no one... call me, SPUNKY!!!," something felt my body with more power, it was my limit break. I-I can feel the power that great strength. But I know what this limit break. I squint off the edge rock, landing on the ground hard as it felt it shaking. Rise my right arm as high with my spiral shuriken, I heard Squall said "uh oh" before scooting over the side. Quistis caught the look she too do the same.

"Landscape!"

Bang

Hit the ground, bounders rise ruffle toward Ifrit took at long gasp. He went up the air then came down with more damage. After I cool down, the poor injure Ifrit was slump down on the ground moaning and grunting. I was too tired on the ground with more damaged on my injury's. "For me to lose to a ninja with comrades," he said it softly, "very well, I'll join you humans,". Off you go Ifrit in to the GF boxes, I let Squall have him. Shoot he might hurt Shiva in my ming. He thank me and I smile. I hurry to cure myself from the damage.

"Where did you learn that move?" Quistis question me.

"Oh just something I think us. Every time when someone made me mad, I get on with them seasonly." I ask her. "Oh I see." I sigh, "can we go am started to feel burning in here," she laugh, Squall slap his hand on his forehead.

Pasting through some monster again, we made it at the entrance feeling tired and hungry. I let out a long sigh from the seeD exam. "Well I see you look tired, Ana, why don't you take a little rest before the next exam up. Your room is number 121 where Squall room at," I nodded, look over the Squall. Squall started to look at me again hearing that my room right beside his. I snickered, roll my eyes at me one more time. Soon this is over, we left back inside. Lead behind Squall, look at his cute walk. Shattered crazy over him, he stop and look back want am doing till bump into him. I feel so foolish bumping into Squall Leonheart.

"Is there problem?"

"Uh.. oh no nothing."

"Whatever."

Smack my lips, folding my arms to my chest. How rude to him was my problems is he the one who got problem. My room was so beautiful. I have a couch in the right side on the wall, a queen side bed on the left corner of the wall from the window was, a desk to do my drawings and work, one bathroom, a tv, and a fridge from the side. This is my room. I squeal and twirl, laying flatter on the soft warm bed. 'Okay remember, the next exam coming so don't over sleep,' gently close my eyes, letting the tiredness taking over. Neglect not be late for the exam.

After three hours, I felt a hand shaking me from my sleep, "mm mm.... five more minutes, mom," "am not your mom," I snap opening, a figure was standing front on me. It was Squal. "What time is it?," "time for the exam," "exam?," he nodded. I pointed that my uniform on was hanging on the wall. Hurry on dress, brush my hair, tie my bandanna around my forehead, then headed out with Squall. Soon after, Quistis was waiting over at the direction stand, "Squall. Ana. Over here!," we came to her. She greeted a smile, I do the same. Squall does nothing, "Squall and Ana, I'm announcing the squad assignments. You two are great back at the cavern, so I assign you both in the squad," I groan. She glimpse at me with a worry look, "something wrong?," " yeah, why do I have to be with him in this squad?!," pointed at Squall, giving me a death glare simply the same as me, "I can't change it, sorry," I whine more on the floor. Dark aura was above my head. Both shook their heads. I know am whining, but this is impossible with Squall. God shoot me now and I bet that bad mouth Zell want be in this squad. Wait let me check.

"Instructor? Is Zell Dincht in our group too?"

She check her list.

"Why yes he do. How did you know?"

"Just a hunch." I whine.

Giving me a simple look, she tells that am know every stuff I knew. "Well in that case, Zell Dincht will be in your squad. Quite the lively fellow." Accord that, Squall scoffs himself about that, "Lively? He's just loud. Can't I switch members?" "me too," I scowl. She sigh to determent to our childless play, "I afraid that's not impossible," she looks over Squall's shoulder, "over her Zell!," the blond spunky boy flip over us till he about the land on me. Shock where he not seeing me, I flip over the side till he landed on his feet. I swear was about to hurt him, but Squall how me off. He look at me and Squall smiling.

"Whoa! I'm with YOU?!" He exclaims.

"You don't get along with Seifer, do you? Heard he whooped you pretty bad this morning."

Cautious not to laugh over to Squall ass whooped from my brother. If his is. Zell glance over to me with my laugh look. He smile and wink at me. How up now, this ain't right he wink at me well to tell it to truth he suck.

Squall piped up, "We weren't fighting, we were training that's all," I blurter out, "yeah, like when he got that scar on his forehead," I laugh, as he shot me a more dark look. Zell almost raised a brow, "I bet you he doesn't think so. Look, Seifer's just being a pain in the ass. All you have to do is ignore him," "that's no of your business, Zell," rolling my eyes at him. He smack out me, to feel like at miss bossy pant. Well I show him who bossy. Quistis clear her throat to get our attention.

"Um, that Seifer you're talking about... he's your squad leader."

"SAY WHAT?!!!" scream of Zell and Ana head off. She nodded. Squall thinks he not happy. Too bad Squall stuck with the leader of doom. "It can't be change," oh lord Quistis why girl why! Lord, I was about to let out a shout, Seifer walk in with his two stooges: Fujin and Rajin. Their the only friends that he had in his life. Dam them! Dam them all! Seifer arm around me on my shoulders you know to keep a little sister on his squad don't won't to get heard. Am only fifteen dang it. (By the way, my birthday was on the fifth. I just turn fifteen. WOOOHOOO!!!) Feeling nourish, Quistis tell something to Seifer, "you're the squad b leader, Seifer. Good luck, Seifer," he frown, grip me close to him, "now instructor, never said good luck to leader," his goons agreed and so am I, duh he my brother so I have to agreed with him, "oh okay then, good luck Seifer," Quistis finish her speak. I giggle a little not letting him know. "Add Instructor Trepe to the list," me, Zell, and Squall look at him with a question faces. Quistis clear her through of course she been going with us in the exam.

"Anyway, you're all assigned to Squad B and I'll be the instructor in charge. Teamwork is of the utmost importance, so let's get through this exam, everyone," all the attention was getting to me like crazy. Punching my fist in the air, making Seifer let go of me while am doing my cheering. Sensing that everyone was look at me, I went over the Seifer putting my face on his warm muscular chest. Yes am embarrassed don't ask about that. Okay, Seifer turn to all of us am still on his chest, "Listen up and you too Ana!," "aawwwww!," I got off his chest walk back to Squall side, "Teamwork means staying out of my way. It's a Squad B rule, so don't you forget it," "yes sir!," I blurted. He smile of my impression. Squall rolled his eyes, Zell was getting confused.

Meanwhile, headmaster Cid join the group to begin his boring speech, "It's been a while. How's everyone doing?" Cid answer, "we feel good," I said. They look me like at having fun. "This exam will involve 13 members from Squads A through D... You will be proceeding into a real battlefield, and obviously, the battles are for real. Life and death, victory and defeat, honor and disgrace; each of these go hand in hand." I know Zell was getting nervous beside Squall. Scary cat, anyway back to Cid speech, "There's only one way or the other. 9 See D members will accompany you. Should you fail, these members shall get the job done. They always do. So that's one less worry on your minds. The pride of Balamb Garden! The elite mercenary force, See D! Learn from them, obey their commands, and accomplish the mission. Prove yourself worthy of becoming a member of See D Best of luck to you all."

Finally it was over, we dismissed to the car lot as I know was being dragged by Seifer. Soon we got in this military car or van, Fujin and Rajin are driving can't figure it out who driven. Car started to ride and off we go.

Chapter 2: Hot hot baby and deported to land part. 1

"You all know about the seeD test that was going around so don't get to excited," she glance to Seifer, "oh and Seifer, don't hurt your partner over training next time," he scowl over Squall stilling staring at the desk. Bang the his desk with his fist. I was pissed off to his attitude of his clenching my fist so hard won't me to kick his ass. I was off guard by Quistis speaking, "you all dismissed excepted for Squall and Ana will you two come here just a second," everybody went off, using my ninja hearing Seifer was snickered at me. I was about to pop him, till I felt a hand on my shoulder stop me. I look back see who holding my off it was Squall, nodded his head "no" that make me pissed off more.

"You two didn't go to Fire Carven yet have you?,"

I shook my head. Underdog to Squall saying in his mind, 'I was going to but Seifer.'

"Is something the matter Squall?," said Quistis, but I cut her off again, "naah don't worry about him he just went to lala land," I snicker, look at him shooting me a death glare. Shoot I do the same. Quistis shook her head from our emotion ways, "Well if you two done, meet me at the entrance gate by noon. You may go to your desks if like," she walk out the room living me and mr.coldhearted here alone. So I decided to went back the my desk to get my GF who know what will happen with out them in battle. The screen lift up from the computer, checking to see everything new. Squall came where I was and turn on his computer too. I finally attend Shiva and he attained Quetzalcoatl to unanimous my GF I possibly look at him so more till he caught me staring at him, "what?," he said in a low voice, "nothing and stop staring at me!," "..........." he sigh, "yeah whatever, am going." I snapped on him leaving him to his own space. Storming out the classroom feeling rage and burden my two shuriken around, since I hardly notice I flung it toward the hall went straight to that girl who just come out of nowhere! "HEY LOOK OUT!" she look and gasped dodging my shuriken other side of the hall. It squint back toward me from side of the corner. Quickly flip backwards carefully not to get cut, I finally grab it till it cut my wrist. Blood oozed drop on the floor, I winch in pain. I shouldn't get two shuriken anyway. Fell into my knees, hiss and cussing I noticed the girl that I shout at came over me.

"Hey are you alright?" said the girl. "I was asking the same thing. Am sorry about my weapon it went out of me," I apology, while stand myself up. "That okay am the one who sorry not knowing where I was going. So are you from that class over there?,"

"Yeah it over anyway." Uh oh, she about to say...

"Really? WOOOHOOO!," she squeal over my ear. "Um... yeah so what your name?" "Am Selphie Tilmitt. I just got transport to my Trabia Garden and you are?" This is my chance to show my style,"You Miss Tilmiit, are staring at the great ninja, Ana Dekle, from Timber," Selphie laugh so hard on the floor, "you mean the great dumb ninja who almost kill someone," turning around, Squall was laying his back on the wall arm cross on his chest, legs criss cross to the side. He almost pissed me off again. I went up to him and said, "you got something say, Mr. am-so-dedicated-about-nothing," I hissed at him, "no," "good then," I stomp over the Selphie she still giggling over my introducing. She ask me about showing around in garden, "well sure I'll take you a tour," "what if you a new student in this school then why did you know about other rooms?," Squall gave me a confusing look.

Oh man now am stuck. I can't tell them that I already knew this before I got this game their think I psycho, "well... you see," I sweat dropped, "you know what.. I think I hear headmaster calling me bye!," I speed off fast. Past through some guy in green shirt about cards, I stop and tell him can I have them then he handed to me. Look back see Selphie and Squall on my tail, pressing the buttons to go down. Then it went down. "Whew... thought they gonna know am not around here," "not around here what?," I jumped off my skin, hearing someones voice in my head. I turn and there they were inside the elevator. "When ya get in here?" "haste," "oh," 'Curse Squall and his magic!'

As we made it to the bottom, Squall grab my hood know that am going to leave again, "you said your not around here don't you?," "no don't be silly. I say am not around from this.... school yet that right school," he finally let got of my hood, shot him a glare look. Selphie was confused from what I said before. After showing her the direction stand in the middle of the floor, I forgot about my wrist was bleeding so I went to the infirmary. I look inside the office see if Dr. Kadowaki was in here, "may I help you," I turn around see Dr. Kadowaki standing there with his white coat on, "yes I injured my wrist with weapon can you do something for it because am late for my seeD test," took a look on my wrist, "well since you cut yourself, I do believe I have some bandages for that," went to her desk got out some bandage and rubbing alcohol. Grabbing my wrist with her hand, carefully pour the alcohol on me, "this may sting a little," I hiss, burning the blood on my cut. Tears started to came out my eyes. Bandaging around the wrist tightly so it want get loose. Finally, she was done. I thank her as I left.

"Boy, I hope Quistis want get mad about be late. But maybe I got to cafeteria for once." 'Seifer, Fujin, and Rajin will be there.' Now walking in the cafeteria, I saw Fujin talking to Seifer about drinking some water of something. I know that goof ball Rajin with them too.

"SEIFER. DRINK!"

"........" he sigh. I walk in getting the looks on Seifer, he started to break me out for some reason. Fujin look at me. That pale face, silver short hair with that eye-patch on her. She look goofy on it. Wandering my mind, Rajin came up to me with a confused look, "hey your that new student from Timber right?," "yeah gotta problem with that?," he took a step back from my rudeness. Yes fear my powers MWAHAHAHAHA! I was kidding. Anyway, Seifer came up to me with stern look on it, "your name is Ana Dekle, right?," "yes, why?" he took a deep breath to answer something, "this is crazy but, your my sister.� UWHATTTTT!!!

"You mean to tell me that am your sister?"

"Well am sure am mean I didn't seen you in awhile seen seven years ago."

"Bad news man, because am don't remember that sorry,"

Suddenly, a boy rush in to the cafeteria like the wind. It seems his here for the hot dogs. "Hey.. is there... anymore... hot dogs," he catching his breath tired. The lady was sold out of hot dogs He grunt hearing there was no more hot dogs Pouting along out the cafeteria. Me and the others look at him weirdly.

'?'

'?'

'?'

'? y'know'

"Splendid, that student broken the rule of running. We'll go arrest him for good." (Man can't remember the words from the game so I have to made up what they saying.)

Seifer said bye to me so on with his goons. Now it was time to meet up with Instructor Trepe who is now waiting on me at the entrance. Dang, hope Squall want get mad at me for this. It was long way to get to the entrance. Maybe I should get some air ride in this school. Sometimes it different to be necessary from choosing some support things from your head am mean Seifer is my brother who that hell wrote this crap. After an hours, I finally made it at the entrance and Squall and Quistis are waiting there. Wait... Quistis is not wearing her instructor uniform she wearing her battle clothes. Holy moly. And why did Squall giving me the looks now. I glance him back tell him get off back look. He ignore me like crap. That son a of....

"Your late!"

"Oh am sorry am late Mr. attitude." He growl underneath his teeth, I intended to do the same, "knock it off you two," Quistis cut in. I pouted and walk off letting them follow me. Walking alone the grassy fields, a bite bug attach me behind not knowing it came out from nowhere, "you stupid bug! Feel the wrath of the great ninja, Ana!," got out my two shurikens charging toward as I cut a damage on it. Squall use draw on it he got 7 fires.

'Hey how come I didn't do that?'

I focus on my magic, cast draw on the little bastard. "Oh cool I have 5 scans," "good for you. You getting the hang of it," Quistis said, whip her weapon at the bug. I went sideways to get it straight, hurl over the right, flung my magic shuriken at the bug. Slash and fell on the ground, the battle was over. (yeah I know it was short battle. ) "WOOOHOOO WE DID IT!," I shout as loud as Selphie did. Squal pluck his ears from my shouting, "can you be a little more hyper please. You give me annoying," stop jumping around hiss at his some more. Hearing some giggle from instructor, calmly sank myself on the ground embarrassed. Peril to get any monster around, we made it the carven. Kinda feel nervous going in, with the heat of hell. Two guard blocking the cave, seeing us standing, " objective to obtain a low-level GF a See D member must support. Are you ready?," "I'm ready," Squall answer. I nodded mean am ready too I think. "Am there support, Instructor No. 14, Quistis Trepe," other guard spoke up, "select a time limit. Choose one suited to your abilities challenging, yet reasonable."

"I say 20 minutes," I spoke before Squal giving the stare. 'Ha loser!'

He rolled his eyes on me. Oh no he didn't roll his eyes on me. Child you need to stop. "Very good. Good luck."

They let us past through letting Squall led us girls. The cave is hot like hot sauce. My cousin always put hot sauce on his food, and it burn her tongue. She really need to stop doing that. Anyway, listen of Quistis commotion that giving me a headache all the way to a crater. Ifrit came out with a roaring tone. Blocking my ears from the noise, I hear someone talking to me in my mind.

'Hey Ana.'

'Uh who are you?'

'Its Shiva silly your GF.'

'Oh hi, so wuz'up.'

'Ifrit is weak against ice attacks. He hated ice attacks.'

'I know that.'

'Sure you do so call me if you need me.'

'Okay peace.'

'Oh and one more thing.'

'What?'

'Look out because Ifrit is casting fire toward you!'

'He casting what?'

(Final Fantasy VII- Still more fighting)

Am back to I was seeing that monster casting fire toward. Dodge the magic, flip curl over the rock. I stuck my tongue at it, then shock a bird. Squall attack with his gunblade it took the damage. I use draw on Ifrit, glow circle twirling around me, blue aura came swirling over my body (doing Yuffie casting style). Eight cures, sweet! The others were busy holding off the hell monster so I call Shiva, "yo Shiva! Need help around here!," "okay, be there about an second," for waiting on Shiva, cot wheel over then flip on the right, flung my two shurikens together. Consider, he a clang plunge through the beast arms. It roar was pain. Yes feel pain! Feel more blood! Then, alter over to Squall, Shiva appear giving Ifrit a chill his temper. He froze like icicle. I shout are her for giving that hot headed a freeze. We thumbs up and disappeared back to my mind.

"They have Shiva!," Ifrit muttered. Squall summon Quetzalcoatl, dark clouds gather around the above, lightening thunder come to gather, it came down out f the dark clouds. Make a barrier around Ifrit, electric shocks snap everywhere in the barrier, then it let it out a bangs. Ingenious, that will take the damage, I wasn't paying attention till Ifrit taunting us with horrible voice, "Mere mortals! You will never defeat me even that spunky little ninja!" uh oh no one call me spunky. I was in rage, temperate, and hatred. Dark aura rise beneath my feet, my hair started to stick up wildly, my teeth grow sharp from the bottom. They look at me like am started to exploded, but this is for real. Twitching and shaken, I look up to everybody, gasp and scared even Ifrit was scared. "No one... no one... call me, SPUNKY!!!," something felt my body with more power, it was my limit break. I-I can feel the power that great strength. But I know what this limit break. I squint off the edge rock, landing on the ground hard as it felt it shaking. Rise my right arm as high with my spiral shuriken, I heard Squall said "uh oh" before scooting over the side. Quistis caught the look she too do the same.

"Landscape!"

Bang

Hit the ground, bounders rise ruffle toward Ifrit took at long gasp. He went up the air then came down with more damage. After I cool down, the poor injure Ifrit was slump down on the ground moaning and grunting. I was too tired on the ground with more damaged on my injury's. "For me to lose to a ninja with comrades," he said it softly, "very well, I'll join you humans,". Off you go Ifrit in to the GF boxes, I let Squall have him. Shoot he might hurt Shiva in my ming. He thank me and I smile. I hurry to cure myself from the damage.

"Where did you learn that move?" Quistis question me.

"Oh just something I think us. Every time when someone made me mad, I get on with them seasonly." I ask her. "Oh I see." I sigh, "can we go am started to feel burning in here," she laugh, Squall slap his hand on his forehead.

Pasting through some monster again, we made it at the entrance feeling tired and hungry. I let out a long sigh from the seeD exam. "Well I see you look tired, Ana, why don't you take a little rest before the next exam up. Your room is number 121 where Squall room at," I nodded, look over the Squall. Squall started to look at me again hearing that my room right beside his. I snickered, roll my eyes at me one more time. Soon this is over, we left back inside. Lead behind Squall, look at his cute walk. Shattered crazy over him, he stop and look back want am doing till bump into him. I feel so foolish bumping into Squall Leonheart.

"Is there problem?"

"Uh.. oh no nothing."

"Whatever."

Smack my lips, folding my arms to my chest. How rude to him was my problems is he the one who got problem. My room was so beautiful. I have a couch in the right side on the wall, a queen side bed on the left corner of the wall from the window was, a desk to do my drawings and work, one bathroom, a tv, and a fridge from the side. This is my room. I squeal and twirl, laying flatter on the soft warm bed. 'Okay remember, the next exam coming so don't over sleep,' gently close my eyes, letting the tiredness taking over. Neglect not be late for the exam.

After three hours, I felt a hand shaking me from my sleep, "mm mm.... five more minutes, mom," "am not your mom," I snap opening, a figure was standing front on me. It was Squal. "What time is it?," "time for the exam," "exam?," he nodded. I pointed that my uniform on was hanging on the wall. Hurry on dress, brush my hair, tie my bandanna around my forehead, then headed out with Squall. Soon after, Quistis was waiting over at the direction stand, "Squall. Ana. Over here!," we came to her. She greeted a smile, I do the same. Squall does nothing, "Squall and Ana, I'm announcing the squad assignments. You two are great back at the cavern, so I assign you both in the squad," I groan. She glimpse at me with a worry look, "something wrong?," " yeah, why do I have to be with him in this squad?!," pointed at Squall, giving me a death glare simply the same as me, "I can't change it, sorry," I whine more on the floor. Dark aura was above my head. Both shook their heads. I know am whining, but this is impossible with Squall. God shoot me now and I bet that bad mouth Zell want be in this squad. Wait let me check.

"Instructor? Is Zell Dincht in our group too?"

She check her list.

"Why yes he do. How did you know?"

"Just a hunch." I whine.

Giving me a simple look, she tells that am know every stuff I knew. "Well in that case, Zell Dincht will be in your squad. Quite the lively fellow." Accord that, Squall scoffs himself about that, "Lively? He's just loud. Can't I switch members?" "me too," I scowl. She sigh to determent to our childless play, "I afraid that's not impossible," she looks over Squall's shoulder, "over her Zell!," the blond spunky boy flip over us till he about the land on me. Shock where he not seeing me, I flip over the side till he landed on his feet. I swear was about to hurt him, but Squall how me off. He look at me and Squall smiling.

"Whoa! I'm with YOU?!" He exclaims.

"You don't get along with Seifer, do you? Heard he whooped you pretty bad this morning."

Cautious not to laugh over to Squall ass whooped from my brother. If his is. Zell glance over to me with my laugh look. He smile and wink at me. How up now, this ain't right he wink at me well to tell it to truth he suck.

Squall piped up, "We weren't fighting, we were training that's all," I blurter out, "yeah, like when he got that scar on his forehead," I laugh, as he shot me a more dark look. Zell almost raised a brow, "I bet you he doesn't think so. Look, Seifer's just being a pain in the ass. All you have to do is ignore him," "that's no of your business, Zell," rolling my eyes at him. He smack out me, to feel like at miss bossy pant. Well I show him who bossy. Quistis clear her throat to get our attention.

"Um, that Seifer you're talking about... he's your squad leader."

"SAY WHAT?!!!" scream of Zell and Ana head off. She nodded. Squall thinks he not happy. Too bad Squall stuck with the leader of doom. "It can't be change," oh lord Quistis why girl why! Lord, I was about to let out a shout, Seifer walk in with his two stooges: Fujin and Rajin. Their the only friends that he had in his life. Dam them! Dam them all! Seifer arm around me on my shoulders you know to keep a little sister on his squad don't won't to get heard. Am only fifteen dang it. (By the way, my birthday was on the fifth. I just turn fifteen. WOOOHOOO!!!) Feeling nourish, Quistis tell something to Seifer, "you're the squad b leader, Seifer. Good luck, Seifer," he frown, grip me close to him, "now instructor, never said good luck to leader," his goons agreed and so am I, duh he my brother so I have to agreed with him, "oh okay then, good luck Seifer," Quistis finish her speak. I giggle a little not letting him know. "Add Instructor Trepe to the list," me, Zell, and Squall look at him with a question faces. Quistis clear her through of course she been going with us in the exam.

"Anyway, you're all assigned to Squad B and I'll be the instructor in charge. Teamwork is of the utmost importance, so let's get through this exam, everyone," all the attention was getting to me like crazy. Punching my fist in the air, making Seifer let go of me while am doing my cheering. Sensing that everyone was look at me, I went over the Seifer putting my face on his warm muscular chest. Yes am embarrassed don't ask about that. Okay, Seifer turn to all of us am still on his chest, "Listen up and you too Ana!," "aawwwww!," I got off his chest walk back to Squall side, "Teamwork means staying out of my way. It's a Squad B rule, so don't you forget it," "yes sir!," I blurted. He smile of my impression. Squall rolled his eyes, Zell was getting confused.

Meanwhile, headmaster Cid join the group to begin his boring speech, "It's been a while. How's everyone doing?" Cid answer, "we feel good," I said. They look me like at having fun. "This exam will involve 13 members from Squads A through D... You will be proceeding into a real battlefield, and obviously, the battles are for real. Life and death, victory and defeat, honor and disgrace; each of these go hand in hand." I know Zell was getting nervous beside Squall. Scary cat, anyway back to Cid speech, "There's only one way or the other. 9 See D members will accompany you. Should you fail, these members shall get the job done. They always do. So that's one less worry on your minds. The pride of Balamb Garden! The elite mercenary force, See D! Learn from them, obey their commands, and accomplish the mission. Prove yourself worthy of becoming a member of See D Best of luck to you all."

Finally it was over, we dismissed to the car lot as I know was being dragged by Seifer. Soon we got in this military car or van, Fujin and Rajin are driving can't figure it out who driven. Car started to ride and off we go.

One word:

Ugh.

sorry post it twice. trying the delete.

you should seriously work on yout style...i don't think the word 'yucky' should be used in any serious literature either ^^

you should seriously work on yout style...i don't think the word 'yucky' should be used in any serious literature either ^^
I disagree. If you are trying to create a sense of character using words that you would not use in a formal letter or something similar can help to reinforce the impression, in this case I feel it works okay. Had it been said in a third person narrative, I would probably agree with you though.

Ftr, I just ctrl + f'd "yucky", so I have no idea what this is like as a whole and don't really care for reading it.

I disagree. If you are trying to create a sense of character using words that you would not use in a formal letter or something similar can help to reinforce the impression, in this case I feel it works okay. Had it been said in a third person narrative, I would probably agree with you though.

Ftr, I just ctrl + f'd "yucky", so I have no idea what this is like as a whole and don't really care for reading it.

Don't...it's not just the one word, but the character depth isn't expanding by these words...it's not even applicable in the context

this is...incredible

Please get a better mastery of the English language before you try to post literature in this Shrine. We're all very critical, if you haven't noticed. Also, there's an "edit" button at the bottom of your post, so you may want to delete as much of the double post as possible.

This made me crack up so much. Thanks for making me laugh. No offence but the getting sucked into the game idea is really lame. You're better off creating your own characters instead of narrating the entire game. Not to mention the fact that your story is badly written and doesn't make sense.