Ellie
09-08-2005, 02:01 AM
I know why you are here
I know why you take it all off
I know why you beg for me
I know why you are reaching
you're hands out to me
I know what you fear
Being alone with yourself.



Well let me know what you think I typed it up from memory so its not the best sorry.
Prak
09-08-2005, 02:21 AM
Well let me know what you think

Talk about asking for it...


so its not the best

Perhaps not, but it's a definite contender for worst.

It says absolutely nothing, has no flow, and your grammar leaves much to be desired. Poetry in general sucks. Yours doubly so.
Balam
09-10-2005, 02:00 AM
hey, no one has been writting here
shade17
10-07-2005, 12:24 PM
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April
10-07-2005, 06:59 PM
Don't bump up threads ,that haven't been posted in for a month just, to post a bunch of question marks.

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IceAngel100
10-26-2005, 01:27 PM
what the heck was that all about?!
April
10-26-2005, 02:36 PM
Can people here not take a hint?

How about - don't bump up nearly month old threads TO ASK INANE QUESTIONS.