Top Cat
04-12-2005, 07:33 PM
MY HEART CALLS OUT
YET STILL I HAVE NOTHING
SLIT SLIT SLIT
THE UNNECCESARY THINGS ARE BROUGHT OUT
HAPPILY THEY WERE UNNECCESARY
PASSIONATE LOVE
NEVER COMES TO THE DARKNESS OF MY NOON
TO EMBRACE DEATH IN ITS MOST DEAD FORM
WHICH IS DEAD
I LOVE YOU BUT I WANT TO DIE
SLIT SLIT SLIT
STICKY LIQUID RUNS DOWN AND SOAKS THE SHEETS
YET OCCASIONALLY NOT REALLY
PERHAPS IT IS BETTER IF I DIE
NOT THAT I WILL
SOME PEOPLE WOULD RATHER LIVE AT NIGHT
SLIT SLIT SLIT
AND SUCK THE BLOOD FROM THEIR VEINS VAINLY
OTHERS HOPE NOT TO BECAUSE IT IS A POOR ATTEMPT AT DEATH
AND IT WOULD BE BETTER AS A VAMPIRE
SLIT
SLIT
SLIT
THE END

it is my most beautiful piece

KREAYSHAWN
04-12-2005, 08:10 PM
can I use it in my band. their name is "MY HEADLESS DARLING"

Top Cat
04-12-2005, 08:20 PM
you may but only if u credit me by using these alternative lyrics:
MY HEART CALLS OUT
YET STILL I HAVE NOTHING
SLIT SLIT SLIT
(TOP CAT'S LIFE IS IN FLAMES SCARLET TEARS OF BLOOD ROLL DOWN)
THE UNNECCESARY THINGS ARE BROUGHT OUT
HAPPILY THEY WERE UNNECCESARY
PASSIONATE LOVE
NEVER COMES TO THE DARKNESS OF MY NOON
TO EMBRACE DEATH IN ITS MOST DEAD FORM
WHICH IS DEAD
I LOVE YOU BUT I WANT TO DIE
SLIT SLIT SLIT
STICKY LIQUID RUNS DOWN AND SOAKS THE SHEETS
YET OCCASIONALLY NOT REALLY
(TOP CAT WROTE THIS HIS PASSION IS INFLAMED)
PERHAPS IT IS BETTER IF I DIE
NOT THAT I WILL
SOME PEOPLE WOULD RATHER LIVE AT NIGHT
SLIT SLIT SLIT
AND SUCK THE BLOOD FROM THEIR VEINS VAINLY
OTHERS HOPE NOT TO BECAUSE IT IS A POOR ATTEMPT AT DEATH
AND IT WOULD BE BETTER AS A VAMPIRE
SLIT
SLIT
(TOP-CAT 4 LIFE)
SLIT
THE END


ok d00d?

mr. patterson
04-13-2005, 08:33 PM
man you rule it makes this little poem look shit:

BLACK HOLE SOUL

deep dark hole that is my soul,
i drown within thee,
i mope a little,
then i cry,
i ask why,
why do they not understand,
people hate,
skaters skate,
that girl's called kate.

so shit i've gotta go wear a black slipknot hoody and mope

Kuro
04-13-2005, 08:51 PM
Ahem, my greatest work:

......death.

Thank you!

mrmonkeyman
04-13-2005, 10:04 PM
mr. patterson hitting us with antifunny right there

Dragoncurry
04-14-2005, 05:34 AM
STICKY LIQUID RUNS DOWN AND SOAKS THE SHEETS


Hahahahahaha. Man that was the greatest line ever. Shadow's lines used in other people's poems make them MAD funny.

mr. patterson
04-14-2005, 01:29 PM
mr. patterson hitting us with antifunny right there


MMM being irritatingly grumpy there... what's wrong little fella, can't find wee little n00bs to call cunts... awwww, listen if you want me and you could go bother iloveaeris, then go get some icecream... would you like that champ?

BellaMorte
04-28-2005, 05:19 AM
now dont we just all love poetry? o.O

The wind is blowing at my hair
Rustling it without a care
My tear stained eyes sadly close
As the bouquet loses its blood red rose

The wind is blowing at my dress
Gently whispering, soft caress
My blood stained hands sadly close
As the bouquet loses its sunny yellow rose

The wind is blowing at my fears
Blowing away my bloody tears
My cut up lips sadly close
As the bouquet loses its pure white rose

The wind is blowing at my soul
Blackening and deepening the empty hole
My pain stained heart will sadly stop and close
As the bouquet loses its final beautiful black rose


w/e......stay (sic) maggots

mrmonkeyman
04-28-2005, 09:49 AM
can I use it in my band. their name is "MY HEADLESS DARLING"
MINE HAS ALREADY COPYRIGHTED IT, THIER NAME IS DARK VENGEANCE OF THE BLACK