Merl
02-09-2002, 07:15 PM
this ones tifa lockheart's, she asked me to post it for her:

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Laying on my pillow wondering,
when is the next time I will see you, feel you, know you
Wanting to hear you breathe
Wanting to see you sleeping next to me

Trying not to succumb to the battle within,
knowing that "temptation" is always the sweetest fruit that I cannot refuse.

The succor of your sweet kisses I imagine will leave me breathless.

Knowing that I cannot have you but yet I want you anyways.

Much more than physical, seems spiritual, a meeting of the minds.

Is it love?

I want to know..
I want to know though scared to find out...
but yet and still...
I want to get to know what this could be.

chihuadog
02-13-2002, 02:43 AM
Yeah, it looks like one of her works, alright. It's good, as I was expecting. The poem kind of gives me a fuzzy feeling. It's a very sweet poem, in my opinion.

Meliadoul36
02-13-2002, 02:56 AM
oh my gosh!!! That is a really good poem. Please tell her that this is one of the best i've ever read. Poetry is pretty cool.

Drea
02-13-2002, 08:16 PM
hmmm... thanx meliadoul... :)

socks are kiff
02-13-2002, 11:29 PM
.. like lake baykal (the world's deepest lake)
:p

seriously good stuff. kind of makes me wish i still had some of my old stuff. tifa, you're bringing back some memories here...

not sure yet if that's good or bad. :p

but good poem anyway.

given it a name yet?

SSJ
02-14-2002, 12:54 AM
Thats great tifa! I'm not a huge fan of poetry but I love to read a good poem. Keep up the awsome poems!:)

Drea
02-14-2002, 04:57 PM
hmmm... thanx ppls for the feedback....thanx shadow, and ssj much appreciate.... :D

didja guys check out the poem I did to follow up Deus Immortale's poem kalled "How Angel's Fall?"

(some of my best work.... if I do say so myself...)

N e wayse though... Shadow; I thinkI'll title my untitled poem "Wanting You." .. though I can't edit it though, because I asked Deus to post it for me....

Look for my more poems... I should be posting some more soon......