Kemtach2999
01-13-2005, 12:50 PM
This actually came to me last night, just as I was dropping off to sleep, Its short but...


When darkness turned to blackest night,
Four Warriors came, all bearing light,

For round their neck hung precious gems,
The ancient gods had granted them,

Their path was clear, their journey started,
Not for the weak or faint hearted,

They journeyed long and battled well
And soon the Fiends were back in hell,

Last was Chaos of evil might,
But he was vanquished in the fight,

The crystals power showed it's hand,
And the Warriors restored Light to the land.

mrmonkeyman
01-13-2005, 04:31 PM
...lord.

Pat
01-13-2005, 05:39 PM
dont worry

mmm is just too happy for words because he loves rhyme

Kemtach2999
01-13-2005, 10:38 PM
:laugh: I'm not worried at all ;)

Rhyming isn't for everyone, but then neithers poetry, this is probably my first and last attempt...

Aerith Gainsborough
01-17-2005, 10:34 AM
I like it, and I like rhymes too.... :laugh:

BizarroSephiroth
01-17-2005, 04:22 PM
I liked the poem, Kemtach2999

Detonate
01-17-2005, 05:13 PM
Well done. I honestly liked it a lot. =) My best bit was "They journeyed long and battled well
And soon the Fiends were back in hell,"

chewey
01-17-2005, 05:17 PM
MMM was just praying to the good lord, that one day, he too could appreciate rhyming. PRAISE THE LORD

Squall_Bahamut
01-17-2005, 05:54 PM
i like it very good!

neosavedtheworld
01-17-2005, 06:17 PM
I liked it. It reads like some of the short poems found in The Lord Of The Rings books. Must admit though...I haven't played FF1.

Terra Fire
01-17-2005, 06:21 PM
same here en't played FF1 yet and i know what you mean about LOTR it sounds like sumtin outta it :)

Kemtach2999
01-19-2005, 05:10 PM
Thanks you lot, I really appreciate it! ^.^

Jasmijn
01-19-2005, 06:33 PM
Good work, daddy!

Kemtach2999
01-19-2005, 06:56 PM
Thanks kiddo! :-D

Hogan
02-14-2005, 05:22 AM
OH NO AGEPLAY!

April
02-14-2005, 01:59 PM
There's no need to ressurect month-old threads just to make unamusing comments, thanks.

KREAYSHAWN
02-14-2005, 03:30 PM
It's not really that old.