Well my friend wrote this first and the next part I post. I have to get some other stuff done to I have ot get off but I put more up later. =) Well here it is. =)

Quest to save the Planet
A young woman in a pair of jeans and a white tee shirt shook her head as she leaned back in her chair. Diana Wellard twirled several strands of her straight brown hair as she studied the notebook before her. Yes the equations for blowing up the reactor were correct, but whould the other AVALANCHE think so? THe AVALANCHE were rebels against the power company that held the world in it's grasp. ShinRa, the power company, was slowly destroying the planet with their mako reactors. THe AVALANCHE were fighting to keep the planet from being destroyed. They blew up the mako reactors.
"Surely this is not how our lives have to be." remarked Diana to herself. Slowly she stood up and hid her notebook. Diana leaned against the doorway of her shabby little house as several drunks staggered by, voives raised in an attempted song.
"Pur pockets are empty, but our bellies are filled with wine!" babbled one as they passed Diana's little shack.
"Fools," muttered Diana as they continued down the street. Her eyes rested on the plate that over shadowed them, the place where the rich of Midgar lived. Power was unbearably expensive, and only the rich could afford it. The poor were forced to live in the slums. The slums was directly underneath the plate. It was a dark place with only the neon lights on stores and the small lights on the plate to provide light. It was filled with all the imaginable sinners. Drunks, drug addicts, the innocent poor, and those that didn't want to be found were lumped together and live in its hideous conditions.

that's cool Rikku Love is also great at that yup

Nice short story. ^_^

Here's moreit comes right after the first.

Diana's parents had been killed in a riot, leaving Diana to fend for herself. She had met her cousin, Cecilia, at the riot. Cecilia was a young child whose parents had been annialated during the riot. As soon as Cecilia's parents had been killed Diana had scooped up Cecilia and run. Diana tried to provide for Cecilia and herself. She srepped into the street as she heard the pattering of feet grow louder.
"Cecilia!" Diana's voice rang out as she put her arms around the little girl's shoulder and lead her into the small house. "Cecilia, I have told you not to be out late-what is your reason?"
"Tanya told me not to go for awhile," Cecilia looked up innocently.
"Tanya?" Diana's mind began to race. "Why?"
"Tanya said the Turks were doing something, and I should wait a while before I came home," Cecilia offered. "Please don't be angry." Diana nodded.
"I'm not. If Tanya told you not to go, then you did the right thing." She set a bowl of soup in front of Cecilia. "Come here and eat your supper." A knock on the door interrupted the dinner. Diana jumped up and stood, frozen in time, as she listened intently.
"The Turks," Cecilia whispered.
"Hush," Diana answered as the knock sounded again. Diana opened the door and saw a couple standing there. They were Diana's age, and Diana recognized them. The girl had lovely blonde hair that reached the middle of her back, and her male companion was tall and had light brown hair.
"Comi in," Diana opened the door to them. The girl entered first, and her escort had to duck to enter the low doorway. "Tanya, I heard you-"
"Shh!" Tanys shut the door. "Now continue."
"I heard you sent Cecilia home late," Diana continued. She turned to Cecilia. "Way don't you go to my study, okay?" The shild nodded and hurried off.
"That's true," Tanya carefully sat down as she didn't want to catch her blonde hair on the chair. "I didn't want the Turks to see Cecilia and...well...I just didn't want her to get hurt."
"Yeah," Diana replied, "did you see what the Turks were doing?"
"No but Erik was there, he ran to my compound to tell me. Good thing was there." Tanya gestured to her male friend.
"Well, thanks for protecting her," Diana smiled with relief, "but what brings you here?"
"The equations for detonatiing the reactor. Barret want ot know about your progress," Tanya answered. "So?"

Hehe I'll post more in abit.

that was better than the first congrats I can't wait for ur next one

"Well, I've gotten most of it done. I don't want the Turks to know that I am working with the AVALANCHE." Erik spoke up.
"You need to hurry, though."
"But don't rush the equation," Tanya interrupted.
"I can finish it now if you want," Diana offered.
"That would be good," Erik replied.
"Okay then," Diana hurried off and returned shortly with her notebook. She settled neatly on the floor and buried herself in the equation.
After several moments of the sound of a pencil scratching at a page, Tanya looked at her watch. Finally, Diana looked up and handed several sheets of paper to Tanya.
"Here," Diana sighed. "From what I can tell, it should work." Tanya too the papers and leafed through them briefly until Erik nudged her.
"Tanya," Eril began, "we have to go."
"Now?"
"Yeah! Everyone is waiting for us at the reactor. Barret wants us to meet him at your compound before we go to the reactor."

I'll post more of this tomorrow.

Nice job! So far, you keep everyone on thier seats with your story.
I just want to make a few comments. Your structure is good, but you failed to start a new paragraph whenever a new person spoke, without saying they spoke first. Other than that, so far, so good! Nice job! =^)
Keep it up! =^)

Hey Blue Yuna!
Good job on the story, I can't wait to read more :)
There are a few spelling mistakes, but nothing a little editing couldn't fix.

So is this the one I'm drawing the picture for?

nice fanfics

thanks for all the comments I'll post more when I get the chance I don't have the notebook that it's in with me so I can't do more now
and if I've made mistakes please point them out (gramatical and spelling) so I can fix them thanks^^

thanks for all the comments I'll post more when I get the chance I don't have the notebook that it's in with me so I can't do more now
and if I've made mistakes please point them out (gramatical and spelling) so I can fix them thanks^^
yeah I can't wait for that one I hope you post it soon^_^

"Oh," Tanya turned to Diana, "you coming?"
"Uh, sure, just let me put Cecilia to bed first." Diana disappeared and returned several minutes later. "Let's go."
Diana, Tanya, and Erik slipped outside into the night. Diana shivered as a chilly wind blew across her face. "I bet President ShinRa is nice and comfy up on the plate!" Diana thought. President ShinRa was the head of ShinRa Company. He was a rich old man who fought against the AVALANCHE because of their opposition of his use of Mako energy.
Several drunks stumbled toward the group. Erik grabbed one and threw him to the side of the dirt path that was used as a road. Tanya punched another in the jaw, and Diana kicked one in the stomach. Tanya laughed as the neared her compound.
"I hope dealing with ShinRa is that easy!"Diana entered followed by Erik and Tanya.
"Barret, I..." she stopped as she saw a young man with dark hair, sitting next ot Barret. "Elliot! your supposed to meet us at the reactor! What are you doing here?!"Elliot stood up.
"I'm afraid that our plans to blow up the reactor will have to be canceled."
"What!?" Diana turned to Barret. "We can't cancel! Wedge, Biggs, Cloud, Jess, and Tifa are meeting us there!"
"Diana's right," Tanya spoke up.
"Wait a sec," Erik interrupted, "Elliot, why do you think we need to cancel?"
"I think President ShinRa has an unpleasant surprise waiting there for us." Elliot answered. Barret stood up.
"Well, if Mr. ShinRa has a surprise for us then we'll have a surprise for him! We can't just leave the others up on the plate by themselves!"
"So, are we still going to blow it up?" Tanya asked.
"You could bet your grandma we are!" Barret opened the door, and Wedge, Biggs, Cloud, Jess, and Tifa entered. Barret laughed. "Okay, let's go together then."
agian I'll post more later.^^

"Oh," Tanya turned to Diana, "you coming?"
"Uh, sure, just let me put Cecilia to bed first." Diana disappeared and returned several minutes later. "Let's go."
Diana, Tanya, and Erik slipped outside into the night. Diana shivered as a chilly wind blew across her face. "I bet President ShinRa is nice and comfy up on the plate!" Diana thought. President ShinRa was the head of ShinRa Company. He was a rich old man who fought against the AVALANCHE because of their opposition of his use of Mako energy.
Several drunks stumbled toward the group. Erik grabbed one and threw him to the side of the dirt path that was used as a road. Tanya punched another in the jaw, and Diana kicked one in the stomach. Tanya laughed as the neared her compound.
"I hope dealing with ShinRa is that easy!"Diana entered followed by Erik and Tanya.
"Barret, I..." she stopped as she saw a young man with dark hair, sitting next ot Barret. "Elliot! your supposed to meet us at the reactor! What are you doing here?!"Elliot stood up.
"I'm afraid that our plans to blow up the reactor will have to be canceled."
"What!?" Diana turned to Barret. "We can't cancel! Wedge, Biggs, Cloud, Jess, and Tifa are meeting us there!"
"Diana's right," Tanya spoke up.
"Wait a sec," Erik interrupted, "Elliot, why do you think we need to cancel?"
"I think President ShinRa has an unpleasant surprise waiting there for us." Elliot answered. Barret stood up.
"Well, if Mr. ShinRa has a surprise for us then we'll have a surprise for him! We can't just leave the others up on the plate by themselves!"
"So, are we still going to blow it up?" Tanya asked.
"You could bet your grandma we are!" Darret opened the door, and Wedge, Biggs, Cloud, Jess, and Tifa entered. Barret laughed. "Okay, let's go together then."
agian I'll post more later.^^
shinra is cool again nice fanfic^_^

nice Blue Yuna!

that's a nice story!

Good Job! i liked it

Great fanfic! Again, very well written.

Barret laughed "Okay, let's go together, then."
As the AVALANCHE stepped outside, Barret motioned for silence. He turned and faced the group.
"Guys, we have to move quickly." Barret said. Tanya interrupted him
"Sorry, Barret, but I have a bad feeling about this one."
Diana spoke up. "I can't leave Cecilia at home while we debate lets get going!"
Barret nodded. "Come on." After fighting their way through the train station, Cloud placed a charge on the reactor and they quickly left.

CLoud ws racing along rooftops until her reached the old church. The roof was shabbier than most of the other building's roofs were.
"It's onld...so will it hold my weight?" Cloud thought. "The Turks might be following me...I better just go!" Cloud jumped onto the roof and gingerly moved across it. He felt part of it give underneath him. The roof collapsed and Cloud fell and landed in a flower bed inside where the auditorium once was.
"My flowers!" a girl exclaimed. Cloud began to open his eyes. "Where did you come from-" she noticed the large hole in the ceiling. "Oh, my! Are you hurt? What where you doing up there?" Her voice dripped with concern. Cloud sat up. He knew he had seen her before but he couldn't remember where. "I'm Aeris by the way," She held out her hand. Cloud gentle shook it. Aeris lept in her heart she was sure that her was the one that had bought the flower from her the other day. He left without a word but there was no forgetting that face. Maybe she liked it because it reminded her of Zack. She couldn't be sure. "Would you do me a favor?" she asked.

:laugh: heh heh sorry to everyone that has been reading this it's been a really really really long time since I posted me and my friend almost have the entire thing done now. People have come and gone blah blah blah. I've been really sick so I've had minimal internet time. Sorry again and thanks to all those that read it I'll post some later tonight. I have some other stuff to do right now.

"What?" Cloud rubbed his head trying to get it to stop throbbing.
"Would you mind being my bodyguard? You look strong enough. Would you please." Aeris sat back on her heels.
"Sure but why?" Cloud looked at her.
"Well you see..." a knock sounded at the door. Aeris stood to her feet. "Oh, no! The Turks! They've come back to get me! Oh, please you have to help me!" She helped Cloud stand to his feet. Just as he got his balance the Turks slammed through the old church door.
"Come on," Cloud pulled Aeris toward the front of the church.
"There's a passage that leads to the roof behind that door over there." Aeris pointed to a door that was barely hanging on it's hinges.
"There she is, go get her!" They heard one of the Turks yell when the Turks entered the auditorium. Aeris went to look behind her.
"Don't look back." Cloud quickly instructed her. She nodded and continued running. Cloud kicked open the door and the two dashed through it. Inside the room was a large wooden pathway structure that went to the roof.
"We have to be careful not to go the wrong way. If we do than we'll have to back track." Aeris pointed to some dead ends. They carefully chose their path to the top. Once they ran into a gap in the path. Cloud quickly jumped across, but Aeris hesitated. She looked down at the not so near ground.
"Come on jump," Cloud waved for her to jump across. She stepped back.
"Ummm, ummm,"
"I'll catch you, now hurry before they catch up!" Cloud held out his arms. Aeris swallowed hard, got a running start, closed her eyes, and jumped.

Oh the suspense builds. Will she make it? Will it all end there? What's going on with the rest of AVALANCHE? You'll have to wait to find out. *laughs evilly*

Great job, Blue Yuna!

Aeris landed safely in Clouds arms.
"I told you I would catch you now come one." Aeris had no time to pull herself together before Cloud pulled her toward the exit to the roof. He helped her onto the roof and they again started running. Cloud nimbly jumped to the next roof but Aeris took her time. She had to push herself just to get to the next roof top. After they had gotten away from the church Cloud stopped. "Why don't you rest. I think we lost them." Aeris nodded and sat down on a nearby chimney. "Why were they after you?"
"Well...I...I knew one of them well. I...we had a fight because I wouldn't go with him to his base. He said the next time he'd come back it would be with the rest of the Turks." Aeris softly replied.
"Why did they want you at the base?" Cloud asked.
"I...I'm a Certa or Ancient. He said they needed me for something, but he couldn't tell me what. So I told him to leave because I wasn't going to go back to the base if I didn't know why I was going. That's when he got mad and told me he'd be back." Aeris stood. "I don't want to talk about it right now so let's keep going." Cloud led Aeris to a final roof top where they slid to the ground.
"Over there," Cloud pointed to a beat up building, "you'll be safe there. My friends are there." Aeris followed silently into Tifa's bar.

Well, that was the end of my friend's part that was edited and cut and added to by me. Next, heh is my part, heh, :laugh: if I can find it. :laugh: I think it's in my locker so hopefully I'm right, heh. :laugh:

Read every other post ever posted about bad grammar, repetitious writing, generic storylines, more inventive words, etc, etc.

Finally I found the missing part and can update my fanfic here is where we get my section. It'll kinda go back and forth after this. Enjoy

"There you are! We thought the Turks had got you or something!" Tifa put her hands on her hips. "Barret's down below waiting for you. Oh, and who's that?"
"Uh," Cloud rubbed the back of his head, "Tifa this is Aeris, Aeris that's Tifa. You can stay up here, Aeris, I'll be right back." Before Cloud could call the arcade game lift up, Diana came up on it.
"Oh, you're hee, Cloud. Barret was ready to send out a search party. The conversation was getting heated so I left. Barret should be coming up soon." Suddenly a loud booming voice came from under them.
"GET OFF THE STUPID LIFT!" Diana hopped off, and it promptly went down.
"By the way, Cloud, who's your new friend?" Diana pointed at Aeris.
"Oh, this is Aeris," Cloud introduced them. Diana reached out her hand.
"Hi, Aeris< I'm Diana." She smiled. Aeris giggled and shook Diana's hand.
"Nice to meet you, Diana." The lift zoomed up with Barret on it.
"CLOUD, MAN! There you are! They were getting really worried and wanted me to send out a search party. Was it those stupid Turks?"
"Nice to see you to, Barret. Uh, yeah, I ran into some trouble." Cloud rolled his eyes.
"I knew those stu...."
"Barret, this is Aeris." Diana cut him off pointing out their guest.
"Cloud, did you bring her here?" Barret eyed Cloud. Cloud just nodded expecting to be chewed out. "Oh, well...Tifa!" Barret called to Tifa who stood behind the bar counter.
"Whadda ya want?" She leaned on the counter.
"Um, water?" Aeris smiled sheepishly. Tifa leaned back.
"Sure." She grabbed a glass and tossed it to a little girl sitting on the counter. "you heard the lady, Marlene." With that Marlene jumped off the counter and got the glass of water. She them took it and set it infront of Aeris.
"Enjoy!" Marlene's high pitched voice squeeked.
"Thank you." Aeris replied as Marlene hopped back onto the counter.
"Hey, guess we're just in time for the party!"
"WAH!" Barret jumped back. When he turned around, he saw Tanya, Erik, and Elliot. "Don't scare me like that! I don't like scarin' the guest!"
"Sure thing, Barret." Elliot rolled his eyes as he walked over to Diana. "Hey." He brushed a quick kiss on her cheek. She blushed pale pink.
"Hi, Elliot. Oh, Elliot, this is Aeris, Cloud brought her."
"Hello, I'm Elliot" He also held his hand out to her.
"Hello, pleased to meet you, Elliot." Aeris shood his hand warmly.
"Hi, I'm Tanya. This is my boyfriend Erik." Tanya pointed to the brown haired guy that had his arm around her waist.
"Hello," Aeris smiled.
"Barret! Barret! Barret!"
"WAH!" Barret jumped a foot off the floor. Biggs flew up the lift. "What's with everybody scarin' me!" Barret raised his voice.
"Barret!" Biggs again called.
"WHAT!" Barret yelled. Biggs froze for a moment.
"Uh, well, uh..."
"Talk!" Barret growled.
"Wedge just saw that ShiRa is planning to drop the plate in sector 7!"
"What!" Erik stepped forward. "That's gonna kill hundreds of civilians!"

I'll continue my section of the dropping of the plate later. (don't worry it won't be a month 'til I post again)

"Split up! Evacuate as much of Sector 7 as you can! Then, meet up at the plate!" Barret barked out orders. Everyone started to leave.
"Stay here, Marlene, okay." Tifa looked into the child's eyes.
"But I don't don't like being be myself." Marlene whined.
"I don't mind watching her." Aeris offered.
"Will you stay with Aeris?" Tifa asked. The little nodded her head yes. "Good," Tifa pat her head and walked out the door. When she stepped out the door, Diana grabbed the sleeve on Tanya's blue longed sleeved-shirt.
"Cecilia," Diana's voice was filled with worry. Tanya shooked her head and pulled Diana along.
"We can't go back now. Come on, she'll be fine. She knows to go to old Miss Claire if you're late. The can't evacuate Sector 7 on their own." Tanya let her go. Diana started running with Tanya.
"You take the market and I'll go to the houses next to it." Diana pointed in the direction she would go.
"Gotcha, let's go!" They ran off in thier seperate directions to evacuate Sector 7. They all met back up under the plate just as Barret had directed.
Charges were set all up and down the main support.
"Man, this is stupid! Those stupid ShinRa people don't know what they're doing!" Barret spumed. Tifa started up the stairs.
"Come on, Barret, they just want to put us down. Let's go get them before they can!" She lead the charge up the stairs. When they reached the under portion of the plate no one was there.
"hey! You stupid Turks! Show yourselves!" Barret waved his gun arm in the air. Suddenly, a small black helicopter flew up.

"Ah, just in time to get pounded." Barret said smugly.
"Do you really think you can defeat us before this blows? a voice came ocer a loud speaker on the helicopter. "If you'll notice it's set to blow in five minutes. You'd never make it in time, and if you try to run we'll open fire. Either way you're all done for." There was a slight chuckle. "So how do you want to die?" Barret was about to jump forward and try to take out the helicopter when Jess, Biggs, and Wedge jumped infront of everyone.
"Hurry! Go! We'll hold then off!" Wedge called out.
"Are you idiots!? We're not gonna let you just throw away your lives!" Barret yelled.
"No! He's right. Go! Hurry to where it's safe!" Jess added. Aeris burst up the stairs.
"Tifa! They got Marlene!" She cried. Tifa looked at Aeris then back at Barret.
"Don't worry, she's in a safe place." Again the voice from the helicopter boomed. Tifa clenched her fists.
"How could you do somethin like this to a little girl!" Tifa's fury evident in her voice.
"She's living with rebels and appropiate measures have been taken to eliminate said rebels."
"Whatever! Come on guys! Let's get them!" Tifa rushed forward, ready to fight. Before she got far Biggs pushed her back.
"You guys go! We'll handle this!" He yelled.
"But you'll all be killed." Cloud said.
"Don't make out sacrifice for nothing! If you stay here you'll die too!" Jess replied. "Who will watch Marlene?" Tifa and Barret looked at each other.
"Marlene! Come on! Let's go find her!" Barret charged down the stairs followed by Cloud. Tifa, Aeris, and Diana came next, but Diana stopped at the top.
"Are you coming?" She called to Elliot, Erik, and Tanya. Tanya looked at Erik. He smiled.
"You go on we'll be alright." His voice calm despite the circumstances.
"Erik, you can't stay! If you stay you'll be killed for sure! How will I go on without you?" Tanya pleaded.
"We'll meet again someday." Erik rubbed her arm.
"No! Don't stay! I need you now!" Tanya wrapped her arms around him. Erik pulled her back.
"You'll find someone until we meet again."
"But...but..." Erik placed a quick kiss on her cheek then joined Wedge, Biggs, and Jess. Tanya paused then reluctantly joined Diana at the top of the stairs. Diana met Elliot's gaze. She was going to speak, but instead ran into his arms.
"You'd better go before it blows." Elliot whispered in her ear.
"I'd rather die with you than live alone." She cried against his shirt.
"You can't leave Tanya by herself. If you two stick together you'll be fine. come on now, go with Tanya. You know I hate goodbyes." Diana looked up at him.
"Elliot...I...but..." Elliot leaned down and kissed he, cutting off her words. He quickly pushed her back.
"Now go." She walked to the stairs and turned bacd. Elliot nodded. With that she and Tanya started decending the stairs. They jumped off the third landing to run to safety. Sortly after they joined the others they heard a loud explosion and crash. The whole slums rumbled.
"NO!" Diana yelled facing Sector 7. They had watched it falling. No one saw what happened to the others though. Tifa put her hand on Diana's shoulder. Diana turned into Tifa's shoulder and started crying. Tifa rubbed her back. Tanya's lip started to quiver, and suddenly she fell onto the kiddie slide that was beside her, silently crying. Aeris tried to comfort her, but Tanya pushed her away. Aeris looked at Cloud with a sad face.
"Why...why's everyone...crying" Barret said between sniffs. "We got...work...Aw! Forget it!" Barret started bawling.


Diana sat in her compound quietly, the shock of losing Elliot was almost unbearable. She buried her face her hands and felt the tears roll down her cheeks. Cecilia burst into the room with a smile.
"What's wrong, Diana?" the girl asked innocently. Diana remembered that she hadn't told Cecilia about Elliot's death. She picked Cecilia up and put her on her lap.
"Cecilia," Diana began "Cecilia, there is something I have to tell you. You know about the plate falling don't you?"
"Yes, it killed lots of people," Cecilia replied promptly, trying to stay on Diana's lap. Cecilia was getting almost too big to sit in Diana's lap anymore.
"One-one of those people was...was" Diana stopped.
"Was?"
"Was Elliot." Diana burst into tears again. "He saved my life, and Tanya's, and everyone else's, and now he's dead."
"I'm sorry, Diana. I know how much you liked Elliot." Cecilia played with Diana's hair. Diana wiped the tears way with the back of her hand.
"As if it's not enough that Jess, Wedge, and Biggs died, Erik and Elloit had to die too!" Diana muttered.
"Diana," her cousin interrupted,"Elliot wouldn't have wanted you to be so upset."
"You're right, Cecilia." Diana smiled faintly.
"When will you teach me to blow up reactors?" The question was sudden.
"Oh, Cecilia," Diana laughed and gave her a squeeze. "Some day soon, when your older, I'll teach you, okay?"
"Why not now?" Cecilia hopped off her lap.
"Because-next time Tanya and I go, we'll take you." Diana agreed. She stood up. "I'm going to Tanya's house, okay?"
"Okay," Cecilia watched Diana leave.
Diana moved silently down the street. The dark night like affect made by the plate overhead and the foul smell of the slums only added to Diana's misery. She quickened her pace to get to Tanya's faster. Diana knocked on the shabby door of Tanya's house.
Tanya opened the door a crack to see who was there. When she saw Diana she opened the door the rest of the way.
"Come on in, Diana." Tanya forced a smile.
"Hey," Diana entered.
"What's on your mind?" Tanya offered her a seat on some boxes thrown together to make a couch.
"Elliot," Diana answered as she slumped down in tears next to Tanya on the couch. "I didn't want to cry in front of Cecilia."
"So you came to me," Tanya finished.
"Yes," She replied. Tanya sighed as she stood up. She walked afew steps forward rubbing her arms.
"I lost my boyfriend too, ya know." Tanya turned and looked at her.
"Sure I do;I know you lost Erik," Diana said, "I just didn't want Cecilia to see me crying, and I get yelled at for it." She rose to leave.
"No wait," Tanya uncrossed her arms, "I'm not yelling at you. That's Barret's job not mine."
"You're not angry?" Diana sat back down.
"No," Tanya again sat next to her, "it's hard, but I know Erik wouldn't want me to be angry with you. He wouldn't want me to be hiding in depression again, either."
"Elliot wouldn't want me to cry this much." Diana sighed.
"Okay," Tanya said, "if the guys wouldn't want us to be this upset then we shouldn't be...for them, right?"
"Yeah, you're right...as usual." Diana smiled slightly. The two dried their cheeks, and Tanya invited Diana to join her in the kitchen.
"You probably haven't eaten." Tanya remarked.
"I've been mourning," Diana replied, "so of course I haven't."
"Me neither, so let's eat something," Tanya found what little food she had and set it out for her and Diana. "Have you heard the news?"
"Maybe," Diana picked up some bread, "depends on the news."
"About Rufus ShinRa?"
"Who is he? The name sounds familiar but I can't place it. I know of ShinRa Company, is that it?"
"No that isn't it. I guess you haven't heard." Tanya shrugged. "Rufus ShinRa, the late President ShinRa's ony son. Rufus ShinRa is now the owner of ShinRa Company due to the strange death of his father."
"Oh, I see. About how old is he?" Diana asked.
"I don't know...twenty-six possibly, why?"
"I was hoping he'd be older, more mature and responsible."
"Good luck," Tanya commented after swallowing hard
"Is he really that bad?" Diana leaned across the table toward Tanya.
"It's hard to say, he took some private boat on a cruise right after he was inaugurated or something like that. That's where the others went, but he's back and they aren't."
"Rich people," Diana rolled her eyes.
"Not all rich people are bad," Tanya curbed Diana's statement.
"Really? Who's rich and good?" Diana was genuinely curious.
"Your family was," Tanya said, "you lived on the plate until you went bankrupt. Do I need to go on or-"
"Hph," Diana sighed.
"Shh!" Tanya held up her hands for silence. She slowly stood listening.

It's a preety cool story, is it based from Final Fantasy? ^_^

time to get pounded eh? LOL

It's a preety cool story, is it based from Final Fantasy? ^_^
yup yup FFVII


time to get pounded eh? LOL
I thought it sounded like something Barret would say^^
And now the continuation...
It happened so swiftly. The door fell down and the Turks swarmed in. Rude had a hold on Tanya and Reno had Diana. Tseng tore through Tanya's belongings. Quicky, Tseng turned to Elana.
"Elana, go to her compound." He pointed to Diana. "Brig whatever you think is valuable." As Elana left, Tseng flipped open every diary, notebook, and folder that Tanya had. Reno noticed a folded piece of notebook paper in Diana's pocket. He pulled it out and read it carefully. It was information on one of the reactors.
"Tseng," Reno studied it.
"What?"
"You might want to look at this." Reno handed Tseng the paper. He was studying it when Elana burst in with Diana's notebook.
"Tseng!" He turned and faced her.
"What have you got?"
"A notebook, and you might want to take a look inside. It's full of equations for explosives." Elana triumphantly handed it to Tseng. He took it and scrutinized it.
"Enough explosives to blow a reactor, good work, Elana." Tseng looked at their two captives. "Let's take them to Rufus-he might be interested in our find."

Diana and Tanya found themselves led into a large office. A wall length window ran behind the desk. Rufus ShinRa sat at the desk, leafing through Diana's notebook. When he was finished he looked up at Tseng.
"What about this?" Rufus held up the paper Reno had discovered.
"Reno found it in her pocket." Tseng anwered. Rufus went back to the notebook and a container of explosive materials.
"And these?"
"Elana found the notebook at her compound. The explosives were found in a search of the others home. We would have gotten rid of them, but we figured you would want to see the masterminds behind the explosions." Tseng replied. Tanya looked around for any doors. If she could make a break for it then maybe she could get to the others. The only door was the door they came in. If she could make i. Tanya smiled mischievously. Using Rude for support she kicked Tseng in the back with both her feet. Tseng turned around to punch her. Tanya ducked her head. Tseng missed and hit Rude, causing him to let go of Tanya. She dashed toward the door, but Reno grabbed her.
"Let me go!"
"Why should I?" Reno replied. Tanya fought to get free.
"I would stop fighting if I were you." Tseng's voice froze Tanya. She turned around and saw Diana leaning over Rufus's desk with Tseng's gun pressed against the back of her head. Diana had reached for her notebook when Reno let go of her. "Bring her over here, Reno. She should be more agreeable now." Reno grabbed Tanya's forearm to bring her in front of Rufus's desk. With his free hand Tseng grabbed the arm Diana had used to reach for her notebook and twisted it violently behind her back.
"Ahh!" Diana gasped in pain.
"Leave her out of this! You're business is with me! I'm the one that tried to get away!" Tanya pleaded for her friend. Tseng put his gun back in its holster inside his jacket.
"You've got spunk," Rufus finally spoke, "and you're a skilled fighter from what I've seen here... Tseng."
"Yes, sir?"
"Can you use another Turk?"
"Sir?"
"She's perfect wouldn't you say?"
"I don't quite understand, sir." Tseng's face told his confusion.
"She's a good fighter, she's fast, she could be useful. Make sure you teach her the ropes."
"Um, yes, sir,"
"As for you," Rufus looked at Diana, "you'll work directly under me."
"What!?" Diana voiced her disagreement.

Well that's all for now. If you ever see Tien then it's supposed to be Tseng. I'll try my best to write it as Tseng but the original has it as Tien. So please remember Tien=Tseng. ^^

i think so too ;)

"You'll stay here and work for me." Rufus looked at the group. "You can leave" Tien let go of Diana and the turks walked off. Tanya wriggled free from Reno's grasp just enough to grab Diana's hand.
"No," she barely whispered. Diana grabbed Tanya's other hand that was reaching for her only to be pulled from her grip by Reno.
"Tanya," She whispered back. Tanya was almost to the door, she had accepted her fate and was walking with only Reno's hand on her shoulder and Elana flanking her on the other side. Tanya looked back before exiting the office.
"Hate can never win; love always prevails. Hate is the equivilant to evil; love is the equivilant to good." Before she dissappeared on the other side of the door, Tanya called out what Erik and Elliot used to always say. Diana them dissappear and turned to Rufus.
"If you think I'm going to cooperate with you, you're wrong." she said.
"Did your friend teach you what she did here?"
"None of you business!" Diana crossed her arms. Rufus leaned back in his chair.
"I'll take that as a yes." He smirked. Diana slowly took a step back.
"What if she didn't and I taught her?" Rufus waved his hand, but Diana kept inching backwards.
"It doesn't really matter. You're both rebels and that's a solid fact."
"Whatever, you can think what you want."
"Hm,"
"What?" Diana stopped.
"Oh, nothing," Rufus steepled his fingers. Diana stepped back again only to be stopped by an obsticle. She slowly turned aroung to see the blue SOLDIER uniform of one of the guards.
"Heh, uh, hi?" She stammered. Rufus burst out laughing. Diana turned back around and glared at Rufus. "Oh! You knew he was there the whole time!"
"Of course," Rufus's laughter slowed.
"Why didn you tell me when I asked?!"
"You didn't ask me it directly."
"OH!" Diana's anger came out in her voice.
"Calm down, you didn't think I wanted you to just step out my door, did you?" Rufus rested his hands on his desk.
"I wasn't trying to just step out your door!" Diana attempted to defend herself.
"Really?" Rufus didn't believe her. "What's the reason you were stepping back then?"
"I...uh...I wanted a better view out your window," Diana finished lamely.
"You'd have a better view over here, right next to it." Rufus pointed to the floor next to him.
"Or an even better view fromoutside ," Diana said hopefully. She tried look past the guard to the open door.
"Don't even think about it," Rufus replied, "evenif you succeeded in getting out my door, I'd have another guard on you before you could take another step."
"I wasn't..."
"Young man," Rufus addressed the guard as he stood up, "please take out new friend to her office."
"Yes,sir," The guard pulled Diana in the direction of the door.
"Stop! Let go of me!" Diana tried to shrug him off. Rufus chuckled to himself as the door shut behind Diana.

I would take time to read the whole thing, but I don't care enough. I read the first couple of parts, didn't really intrigue me that much.

It good ^_^ but how much longer is it?