Ark Mune
05-14-2004, 06:37 PM
Something I wrote lastnite at around 12:00 when I couldn't fall asleep.

It just came to me outa the blue. Needs some ajustments.


I have plans to rid the world of drugs, but i'm only one guy//
You spend all your money, your time and life getting high//
Messin round with yo brain, making you believe you can fly//
You must realize, this lifestyle is gonna make you die//
before your time, I wont care, I will watch eveyone else cry//
then turn around and laugh, making everyone else sigh//
Im not done, dont make me give you a black eye//
this shit your tellin people that your clean, is clearly a lie//
this battle your playin with people and drugs isn't a tie//
your losing bitch, its time to stand down and say bye//

That is currently all I can think off. I am still working on it. Improvements will come in the future.

Cloud's Final Heaven
05-14-2004, 10:00 PM
ok

Ark Mune
05-14-2004, 10:28 PM
Please dont post ur poems in other peoples threads unless you are asked too.

I want to find out what people think of my rhymes. So remove ur poem A.S.A.P.