Bunny
01-22-2002, 07:55 AM
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Ha! you thought you lost me!I'm BACK! o.o.. ! Well ,while I was gone I started on my first original ficcie, [I had written alot of GW and FF ones in the past] I just wanna know whatcha think of it ^_^!!

Welcome To My Wasteland
By - Bunny aka Kara-chan

You know that feeling you get that is impossible to explain? the same feeling, different aura each time you feel it? that's exactly how Kainin felt every time he opened his eyes, not happy nor sad, a nuetral emotion. Each morning began the same, memories of torment flooding with every accustomed movement he made.Dressing everyday with a melancholy sigh in his ripped jeans, t-shirts and various gloves, hats... other mind numbing items only to keep his mind from reality, that world he hated since he left home, or since home left him. Living in a run down hotel had seemed to numb his sense of fear, lord, the owner looked like a shaved cow with an attitude.

It had been about three years since he had left his family to become a bounty hunter, a rather depressing past of his was the fact he was only hunting one man, the one who killed his little sister right before his eyes, every step he took since that day filled him with more rage than he could handle, but he never seemed to crack. The routine was just to wander into the local bar, wait to see someone willing to make a deal, a will pay for death deal that is, none of those he killed meant anything to him, the bounty was just a thorn in his side, only alive for his hell bent revenge.

"Gyah! Is life always this screwed up?!"Cypher sat up in his small bed, his shoulder lenght black hair clinging to nightmare soaked skin, his claw like fingers still tearing at the sheets, the young girls' screen still echoing endlessly in his mind. Swinging his feet over the edge onto the cheap carpetng her laid his face in his palms, the echoing sadness still so very evident in his mind, the same scene repeating its self forever, shaking his head he stood up. Looking around the medium sized room he smirked, he gave up his great old life for this, constantly hunting, constantly being hunted, a single sigh escaping his lips before he headed to the bathroom for a quick shower, his normal daily routine making its self at home within him once more.


Tell me what ya think!

Dark Messenger
01-22-2002, 07:01 PM
Thats pretty dark for someone with such a colourful sig and name, but its still quite good.

Bunny
01-22-2002, 09:53 PM
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Thankies! Yea.. I know it's a bit dark... but! I'm planning on making the main character [His name changed a few times.. o.o;;;] a bit happier ^_^

ice!~neko
01-22-2002, 11:23 PM
thats great!... you realy captured his emotions and the way he was feeling well. good work, i hope to see more :)