Drake
06-27-2003, 10:08 PM
First post it gonna be my story. Yes this has been posted on one other board but the other board is mean. FFshrine is nice so please don't remove this because it's on another board, I wan't some good feedback and a bit of critiszm. ^_^;;
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Note: To any reader who may view this story you will be aware of my age. I assure you this story will contain creative violence and sex, which may disturb some readers. I assure you that the thoughts and views expressed by the characters are not of my own, and only of creative aspects.
Orion
Chapter 1: I met this girl�
Fallen like a soldier in battle I lay clutching my wound my lover had delivered to me. Lay spread out in the bathtub I listened to the sound of draining blood behind me. I felt it down my back as it crawled its way out of my stomach and down the side of my leg, then crawling backwards down the tub to freedom. The change I endured in these short years started with a line of taunting towards me, then three words to trigger me off. Surprised even I was I did not do what I had expected. For I lay here draining after finally finding my lover once again. My story I assure you, is one you have heard before. I travel the path given to me slowly and I slip into each outfit of insanity as it is delivered. Each time I stop I expect my journey is over only to discover it has started again. The deeper it goes, the more you will question weather I make sense but in my mind, in my world it makes perfect sense as the journey unfolds. Again I lay waiting for the answer, will my journey continue? But let�s start at the beginning, where I think my story might have begun and as you read you will be aware of where this story will go.
Opening my eyes to the world was like closing them to darkness. No differences between awake and asleep except the brittle depressing fact that being awake and alive was a punishment. Lay there I did. Hours upon hours, only my self to keep the sanity. From my cold used mattress on my young stiff back I watched the ceiling, waiting for an answer. I guess there had been a question before that answer, but I�m so far gone I can�t even remember what this question was. I breathed slowly, consciously aware of each breath leaving me, never to return.
It�s always interesting how you can feel so alive by yourself, be such a sensitive emotional person. By my self I was brilliant minded, an amazing lover and that dark ambition which in some peoples eyes could be appreciated. Then I go back to the real world, and in the first second the poisonous burning spices of real people corrupt all my perfection. So much to say to the world, yet when I�m really face to face with society I can�t say it. I�m so scared that the right words can�t escape my throat. All the world hears is my angst filled bitching or my gothic silence heard and seen from the corners of useless classrooms or rundown dirt filled sidewalks. That�s all a possibility, but to be simple, the world just plain doesn�t want to listen to me. There�s that line again. �That�s life for ya, tough.� Every time I hear that line from a lowly mortal my muscles tense up, and my hand yearns to be holding that black cold metal, yearning to pull that trigger.
Was I yearning for death or just acting it? Waiting for somebody to take notice? Nobody ever took an interest. So until a point in my short-lived life I just lost all care of attention. I fed the anger within me the rage and hatred of the aftermath to those beloved eye candies I spent most of my time tasting. I was incredibly amazed at how simple it was to create something so devastating. Watching that screen, clicking that button over and over again and listening to the screams that followed. Did the games make my life like this, or did I just use them to help? It wasn�t that I was unconscious to this effect; I was well aware of what I was becoming and every so often I would feel an awful pain in my stomach. But I had no control, or at least I didn�t want it. I wanted to be something that everybody feared. I didn�t want love; I wanted terror in my grasp: to choke it and hear it scream was all I wished for more and more each of those long pointless days.
I had a skill for writing incredibly. I never even cared about what it was my pencil moved to create. I just wrote away like those helpless primates, chained to their desks forced to type and type that dribble that eventually would be called success. Ironically those monkeys were not far off from us. Chained to our desks by the limits of what we had to pay and whom we had to watch.
I was 15 years old with short crisp brown hair and dark deep green eyes. My height was not a factor for I simply never stood up to care. I remained quiet in school and never even looked at my classmates; I didn�t need attention but I always had that lingering hope that somebody soon would take interest in that passionate human being that was me. An interesting event, which remains in my memory as the starting of my wrath, was when a girl slightly younger then me attempted to converse with me. She sat next to me and asked me the questions I had answered to myself--thousands of times.
�Why don�t you talk much?� she asked, looking over my arm as I attempted to concentrate on my drawing. I didn�t answer, I cared not of this question and from whom it came. However, I was curious as to why she was talking to me - let alone looking at me. Pausing, I quickly began playing back my memory to hear again what was before her words. I realized those giggling idiots were watching her. They found me fascinating to waste their time on. Waving it by in my head I once again completely ignored the figure next to me and I continued to draw.
Then it struck my stomach as the words flowed from her mouth into my stream of thought. Bursting out laughing she corrupted me with the words, �You�re a fag boy.� I slowly turned my head and stared at her. Looking into her eyes I felt my anger rising and my blood boiling. My stomach felt like a raging pot, brewing the soup of my angry soul itself. A thousand thoughts flashed through my mind but one in particular stood out: jabbing my pencil into her neck seemed most forfeiting. Rather crude, but in my mind it worked well. I stopped to realize what I was angry at. A mere four words were enough to trigger me to these thoughts.
I gazed at her with a grin on my face � small, but noticeable. She laughed again and said, �Oh! I suppose the fag boy intends to use his DEPRESSED rage to brutally hurt me. That fucking look won�t get you anywhere but six feet under. My boyfriend would beat your ass till you were eating through a straw if he saw you looking at me like that, fag.� At this point it was the worst it had ever been. I was far past the point. All I was to do is thrust with everything I had and I�d have her eye on the end of my pencil like a shishkabob. Then something happened right there. My stomachache simply left. That pain holding me from doing the unthinkable stopped. No more did it sit boiling in my stomach. I was confused at first. My rage was still there and I wanted to rip this girl�s throat out more then ever but I wasn�t in pain. Then I realized where I had arrived. I had traveled far down that cold dark jungle river, standing in the brutally hot humidity, both sides equally evil. I had arrived at my destination but I was not there to destroy the only true evil left. I was there to stay, to learn and to use the painless darkness given down by those who attempted to pierce my heart. I was at home in my heart, and it felt more amazing then anything I had ever remotely thought of. There and then I managed to ignore this girl once again but only to wait for a better time.
As the days went on my knowledge of myself grew and grew. I was no longer afraid of anything. Not myself, not my enemies, nothing. My imagination was at its peak and I couldn�t help but wonder what I was going to do to them. So many choices; I felt like a kid in a candy store. I could stand them up and blow their brains out as they plead for my forgiveness, I could skin them alive and tie them up then throw pounds of absence salts on each one of them. What I would give to hear them cry right before I ended their sad lives. To feel their warm blood rolling down my pale white skin would be my body tasting heaven. No regret, no feeling whatsoever. I could do anything to anybody and end myself and never even look back.
With all the words rushing through my head I could barely contain my excitement. I quote, �I want to kill as many as you mother fuckers as I possibly can. I want to go to some downtown area and just shoot as many of you fuckers as I can and blow everybody up.� I wasn�t as crude thinking as him but it was close.
Then it happened. Around one month of my dark joyful experience and growth yet another girl arrived next to me. She was new to this school, but I had no interest in speaking with her. Amazing that her assigned seat was next to mine. Her name was Rachel Vishon. Even I was surprised at how incredibly beautiful she was. Just slightly shorter then me, long dyed jet-black hair, slightly full bright red lips. Colorful peach skin and a beautiful body. Nevertheless I had no time to even deal with her. I was busy in my newly created world and there was no time for anybody unless they were brutally murdered.
As the weeks carried on I sat next to her in my English, Math and horrid Business Tech classes. I sat and listened to the hundreds of guys flirting their charm to her and from her to me, not a word. It came to one day in English when she noticed a peace of dark poetry writing I had left next to my crippled notebook. Unaware due to being lost in fantasy I didn�t notice her leaning for my shoulder to read it. I only became aware when I smelt the scent of cinnamon and peach textured breath as it crossed my face. I turned slowly only to see that brown beautiful eyes staring back at me. She grinned at me and turned around, continuing her assignment. Sitting there I found myself quite stunned for some reason. Butterflies were in my stomach and I had no idea what to do, if anything. I tried to return my train of thought but before I could even dare I felt something on the top of my leg, grasping it gently. My stomach jumped but I remained calm and slowly looked down. Her right hand managed to move its way onto my leg. I watched as she squeezed gently and I found myself making a slight jump. I looked over to see her giggling at me and watched her slowly bring her hand back.
�Not many people touch you, do they?� she asked me as she looked back onto her paper. Still stunned I tried to bring my self-control. Quickly I became aware that I had given her my attention and my darkness had oddly stepped aside for those few moments.
As I traveled home I remained excited just from the thought of her touching me like that again. I thought more and more about it until I came to another depressing conclusion. In my situation in my world she was only there for her own laughter. Taking advantage of me like they all have done just to get a good laugh in the end. I couldn�t help but feel utterly humiliated by myself that I could even remotely find myself aroused by what she had done. Once again, my mind had returned to its cold dark train of thought. Feeling this way was the only answer, for I was protected by it. Nothing could harm me; I was invincible until death. That night was the same as always, sitting there writing away thoughts and ideas then using my lighter to burn them in my hands. Being the pyro I was I had disabled the smoke alarm in the corridor outside my room. I could burn what I wanted, and then open the window to let most of it into the open air. I had no more care of safety. I just practiced ways of hurting people. I found yearbook photos of those boys and girls I had loathed. I cut them out one by one and taped them to the wall. I gazed at them for hours, with that sour smirk on my face picturing how good it would feel to tear out each person�s organs one by one. I would gut the guys first and make the girls watch as I dug my way into each of those mammals with a dull hunting knife. I would throw what I could get onto the floor in front of each of them like they do in Sushi bar restaurants. Pallets of pathetic male human meat, being wasted for my entertainment.
After enough of thinking up these brutal fantasies they became worn down. More boring each time as they lost their edge. I was no longer achieving satisfaction from the games or the fantasies. I still yearned for blood but nothing was good enough anymore to satisfy my killer instinct. Eventually I began to throw in skirmishes making the killing harder each time. Making it as realistic as I could I was forced to fight battles in my own mind just to do the utmost damage each time. They became more realistic, and my mind was overwhelming with power. Building possible outcomes and predicted events I had to build strategies of how to achieve catastrophic damage. I had drawn out battle plans and found ways of prepping before the big battle each night: myself against society. I used a model of the real world to support my fantasies, which worked incredibly well. Questioning each act I went as detailed as finding out how I would gain the weapons necessary for the rampages, finding ways of keeping it all in secret so nobody would know about what I was planing.
The more powerful these fantasies became the more powerful my mind could calculate outcomes. I became incredibly fascinated in how humans and justice systems would react to certain events. Each week I took a visit to the public library, taking out books on historic military actions and how police ended rampages. The more I read the more I found ways of avoiding being captured.
The next week my mother informed me that she had to go away on a business trip for a month. This was not unusual for me since she had gone on these trips many times. This time she informed me that I was to take care of myself and the house. Each week she sent me a check for groceries and a little money for me to spend on what I desired. I remember how excited I was. Blasting heavy and death metal 24/7 and doing whatever I wanted. Fortunately we lived in an area where nobody cared how loud the other houses were. There was at least one shot heard each month, parties constantly, cops busting drug dealers and gang fights.
Once again I sat there in English class, trying my very best to ignore her scent, which continuously shot it�s way over to me. Every time I whiffed it I fell into paradise. I had decided not to write or draw anymore next to her. I had no need to be humiliated by her charms once more. Ignoring the assignment handed out I just sat there in my same old black outfit, cargo, baggy shirt and a shiny chain around my wrist.
The scent got stronger and I heard her soft voice, �Where do you live?� My heart shot up into an uncountable amount of beats per second. My stomach did its same turn but I tried not to look at her.
��Near Paroth Station�the ghetto,� I replied, trying not to look at her. I finally gave in and locked my eyes with hers. Again I found myself falling into paradise as I gazed into her beautiful eyes. She was wearing a thin black jacket that was half-unzipped, revealing a white tank top and tight dark blue jeans. As I quickly gazed down I noticed that she had her stomach pierced recently, as it was red and inflamed.
�Me too. But I know I haven�t seen you down there ever, I would have remembered,� she looked over at my chest and noticed my necklace resting there over my black shirt. It was a silver chain like the one on my wrist but long and smaller. Hanging off of it was a small silver triangle with a sword through it. The one my father gave to me long time before he died.
She leaned over and gently balanced herself by placing her palm on my chest while her other hand held the silver triangle. Her eyes were fixated on it. My whole body was excited but I contained all of it to work up my next reply, �I don�t go out much��
She looked up at me, �I can tell,� she said, pushing herself back and letting go of the necklace. �Do you live with your parents?�
�My mother�she�s away on a business trip for a month. I have the house to myself right now,� I watched as she grinned.
�Kinky. Having a lot of parties are we?� she said, nudging me with her elbow.
I smiled softly then felt it fade away and then shook my head, �No�I don�t have any friends to have parties.�
�How does a hot guy like you not have any friends?� Once again she managed to turn my stomach over and I even felt my self-blushing. Feeling humiliated by the obviousness of how much I was turned on I pulled my heavy black jacket from the right side over my groin area slowly, trying not to let her notice.
I looked at the desk and noticed the writing �faggot� written multiple times in permanent red marker. Surprisingly enough, the quality of the writing they used was quite remarkable. Unfortunately it was incredibly memorable.
She nudged me again urging a response and I managed to slowly reply with, �People think I am a freak. I act weird and in return they are afraid of me being different. However; since they are power hogs they develop the urge to control what they are afraid of, and the only way to control what they are afraid of in their eyes is to attack it deeply. It�s not something they notice, it�s an automatic system built into their minds from their parents most likely.� I looked over again at her noticing her frozen, still smiling but paused with a look of pride.
Rachel began to use her fingers to twirl around her jet-black hair. Coming to thought she replied, �What an answer�I take it you think about this stuff a lot?�
�When you have nothing better to do but lay in bed for over 5 hours straight till you fall asleep, you attempt to make meaning out of what doesn�t make sense. I hate them� I really do� but I still am curious to wonder why they do what they do,� as I gazed at her I noticed how much she was marveling what I was saying. A deep excitement was jumping around inside of me, I never thought that anybody cared about this sort of thought.
�I guess over time you start to respect them more?� she dropped her hand down from playing with her hair and reached it over to play with the side of my jacket.
I began to make a slow laugh with a sinister tone then paused to say, �Actually I gain less respect for them and all human life the more I think about it. Eventually you start to realize how basic functioned humans really are. If a 123-page book labeled, �Psychological Labeling for Dummies� can narrow down every last possible function for a human to demonstrate then humans really aren�t that special.
��But a human being wrote that book.� She replied, moving her hand over to my leg.
I began to get even more excited but I attempted to keep my cool and continue the conversation. I tried to get my thought together and I replied with, �Yeah, but ask yourself why he or she wrote that book? He or she spent three years of their life studying psychology, then nine years in the same med school at a well-known university which ended up costing them over a hundred and twenty grand. Are they impressed with their education? No, they feel they�ve wasted their money so they decide to get that money back that their parents and him or her slaved for. So he or she gets a job as a psychiatrist just as he or she had dreamed of doing all this time.�
I paused for a second then continued, �But what does he or she desire even more? Money, of course. So he or she spends their time diagnosing people, and eventually one of the patients comes in and asks, �Tell me in English what�s wrong with me, dock.� So our friendly noble shrink described to the patient exactly what the problem is. The patient understands and by noble rights from our shrink, of course he charges money. The patient is charged an extra 40 bucks. Those 40 bucks were made slowly at a crummy job with a boss who in the first place generated this psychological problem through unhealthy environments. So in the end the patient pays money in which the exact money he pays with is what the base of his problem is. Not to mention he gets recommended some nice large pills to stuff down is throat. That�s an extra 94 dollars a week right there for some nice fancy drug manufactured in a US plant which imports 50% of its chemicals from their own labs and the other 50% of its chemicals from a Colombian licensed chemical drug plant which is paid through the bloody taxes of it�s people. These people make approximately 94 cents a day to make 44 marketing dollars of chemicals combined with American chemicals to create a 94$ drug. This drug is used by a man who is paying the very money that is making him go insane to make him better which the end fucks up his liver and gives him a food filtering problem.�
Again I took a short pause for a breath, �Now comes down to our shrink. He or she wakes up one morning and says, �Hey, maybe I can expand my knowledge like the decent person I am to the people of the world to make them understand what�s wrong with them.� So he or she writes a book with their 40 dollar an hour time. Then a company with the copyright name of dummies decides to publish it with a contract to the writer of $19.0456 a book sold. Next thing you know a 29.99-dollar book is out on the market. People are buying this book as a translator for high end English used by their shrinks because these people being treated don�t have a $100 000 dollar education. No irrelevant education means they don�t understand what the fuck their psychiatrist is saying.�
I noticed after my long sentenced speech that Rachel had stopped completely, gazing at me with this odd excited look. As if I had just spoken dirty to her. �How about this, Deronik�� Finally somebody had said my name right. As fucked up as a name it was she said it right, �Me and you can be friends. Me and you can have a party at your house, just the two of us fucked off our asses babbling on shit for hours.�
I gave her a confused look then asked, �Fucked off our asses?�
�You know�stoned, high�fucked off our asses? You�ve been high before, right?� she asked, looking at me strangely.
�Err�No I haven�t,� I replied slowly.
She laughed then lifted up her bag, �Then I guess tonight you�ll just have to have to smoke a lot.�
�T�tonight?� I stuttered feeling my stomach go crazy with excitement.
I watched as she smiled and noticed her putting on her jacket. She then threw her hair out of her line of site, �Yeah, meet me on the field and we�ll go right to your house. I hope you have a stereo system, a nice TV and a fuck load of food.�
June 4th, 1989. An easy estimate of over 10 000 protesters in favor of democracy stood in the Chinese made concrete Square in Beijing. The result? A division of the Chinese red Army named �the peoples liberation army,� liberated over 7000 protesters from their freedom seeking lives. Shot by the bullets they slaved for in their factories, or crushed under the steel treads they welded with their own sweat and blood. Leaving a landfill on the square of 7000 dead and another thousand or so wounded. I remember feeling the adrenaline rush as I fantasized about it, so many times. I fantasized being the ones in power, the ones who commanded it.
Unfortunately, much of my life I felt as if I was always being crushed by the steel tank treads of society; the last thing I would see before my sleep would be that thousand ton steel beast sitting on top of my newly rotting corpse. The only problem was the next morning I woke up in the same old uncomfortable ideally made Concrete Square, only to be crushed by the treads again, or shot down by the bullets I made.
These feelings were starting to slowly leave me as I spent time with Rachel. I halted fantasies more and more and I wasn�t as bloodthirsty. Still I remained with that cold blooded killer instinct which never felt sorrow, never saw regret and strained with its finger on the edge of the trigger, just waiting to fire at it�s closest target.
After school I headed out to the field. My chains clanked as I walked through the boiling sea of green blades, with the scolding sun on the back of my neck. I looked forward and saw Rachel looking back at me, smiling. I returned the smile and picked up my pace. I reached her and then we continued to walk out of the field towards the bus stop. We chatted peacefully about her mainly. She had been expelled from many different schools from writing they continued to find on her. Depressed psychotic type writing, with no real propose but to plan out the different ways of killing people. Apparently she was much like me, just a little too careless with what she had been open about. Going to many different anger management classes she behaved herself and showed incredible signs of improvement until one of her shrinks had her re-inserted into this school. One of the lines that struck me hard is when she said, �I behaved myself like the good little girl I was. But the thing is, once you believe in violence no training or brainwashing will wipe that clean. It�s there, and you�re going to act on it one day.�
As she said this I stopped and I looked at her, saying, �That�s their excuse�or�his excuse.�
She looked at me with a faint grin, �Yeah�it is. I got caught so many times and I can never fulfill what I want to achieve.�
�For one thing what he did was foolish. He had no control; it was just crude planing with crude devices. I myself may have that in me but I also have the brains to know that there are other ways. I�m not one for killing innocent people; it�s just not my thing. I fantasize about it, I come close to it, but I have better ideas, which don�t involve killing innocent people. I don�t care to go down as the guy who lost his cool and went all out just because he was made fun of�not to mention, next time you read about him, look at his pictures. Look at his eyes, look at his smile - it�s so fucking obvious that he wasn�t just dark hearted and a cold-blooded killer. He was fucking insane. All murderers are labeled as insane, but in reality he had no control over himself. It was just constant fantasy, which always resulted in over 1000 people dying just by him running around shooting people.� I looked over and saw her nodding slowly in realization.
We continued to walk until we reached the subway and from there on in it was a quiet trip. All we did was look at each other and smile.
Orion was my creation. As insane as it was people followed and it worked. Perfectly organized by me and perfectly followed out by most of the players. It was flawless and untraceable for the longest time. I had written it down on 9 sheets of graphite covered lined paper and left it in my desk inside my room. She must have grabbed it after she voluntarily gave me a hand job. I was so fucked and after coming I didn�t even notice I was alive, let alone her grabbing all the papers in my desk. Amazingly she did not do anything treacherous, but she gave me a gift. She gave birth to my dream. My dream of all dreams was Orion, the game that fed all killer instinct with in all that wished to play. To my surprise, she found a lot of players.
I removed my jacket and knapsack then tossed it onto the shiny varnished wooden floor. Rachel followed my lead but bent down to neatly place her jacket out of the way. I threw my shoes off and walked over to the couch. I sat down and watched at the front door to see Rachel bent over untying the laces to her scuffed up black boots. She finally removed them and headed over to where I was sitting and placed herself directly next to me. Looking at her busy eyes I marveled at them not noticing the items she was pulling out of her bag. After a few seconds I looked over to the coffee table and noticed 3 tiny zip lock bags packed full of weed, a black box the size of my palm and a black velvet CD case.
�Do you have a brother, Deronik?� she asked me, letting herself fall back onto the couch. Slowly she began to move up into a cuddle with me.
Realizing what she had asked me I remembered just what the story behind that was. I looked down to see her head laid down over my lap and her eyes gazing back at mine. I made a brief sigh and tried to let the words escape, �My family is so fucked up it�s not even funny. My mom�s in her 50�s and she had me practically recently.�
Rachel nodded her head then moved her hand up to paw at my necklace, ��but�do you have a brother?�
I paused and felt my face going blank in memory. Not as if I was sad but as if I had just remembered what I was missing in my life, what I should have had. �I did�have a brother. He was killed in a Special Forces training operation in friendly deserts. Got hit by an anti tank round. He didn�t even have a corpse left; just fragments of him scattered around the desert,� I said, looking over at the shelf to see an old photo of my brother with his friends.
�Miss him?� she asked gazing up at me as she continued to run her fingers down the chain of my necklace. Rachel moved even closer to me and ran her other hand down my chest down to my stomach.
My breathing began to get heavier and once again I had found myself aroused, hoping she wouldn�t notice. I gazed back at her, trying to decipher through her eyes what her motifs were. �No. I�ve lost a lot of people in my life and eventually you get used to that telegraph showing up at your door.� I noticed her hand moving down the right side of my body. She moved it over my right hand, which sat on the couch and clutched it, like a baby. She then squeezed it in and locked her hand with my and squeezed gently.
�Just breathe, Deronik. You�re trembling,� I noticed that she was right and I started to monitor my breaths properly, keeping a steady rhythm. Eventually I calmed down. I looked into her eyes and then something incredible happened. I felt at peace, for some reason I had just melted right there and I was totally open to her. No more fear or nervous shakes, I just felt like I could lay there with her for ages. I gave a faint smile to her and noticed what she was waiting for.
She pushed herself up closer to me slowly, as if she was trying not to scare me. She got closer and closer till she was level with me. She had moved into a position where her left leg and right leg were spread out over my lap. There she sat, locked with my eyes totally level. I felt her hands moving up towards my upper body till she let her left hand rest on my chest. Her other arm moved around my back and I felt her fingers gently running up the back of my neck. She placed her palm on the back of my head and pulled me closer to her. I could now very much smell that unique breath she had as she pulled me closer. Once again I fell to her needs. I let my arms wrap around her and I gently held her. She pulled her arm out from between us and then placed it on my right shoulder, letting her hand dangle over the couch. Now I was the closest I had ever been to a girl. Not only that, I was as calm and mellow, as I had been when I laid in my bed all those long nights.
I looked into her eyes and now could see what I had begun to love about her. In her eyes laid how much she wanted me but also how independent she was. Right at that moment she had gotten me. She was one of those girls who just knew how she could have you fall in love with her forever. Right there I in my mind I fell to her like a slave. And I was from that moment on her protector. She moved in slowly and gently shut her eyes, placing her lips against mine. At first I felt in shock, but quickly I adapted to what she was doing. I too shut my eyes and focused on it. Without warning I felt her tongue slip into my mouth. Again I was in incredible shock and I felt for a second like I was going to into a fury of violent coughs but then once again I adapted. She began tracing patterns inside my mouth with her tongue, and I could only accept what she was doing. For the next twenty minutes I remained in paradise hoping for more and more each second.
Finally she pulled away from my mouth and smiled. Rachel then moved back and stood up, turning around to pick up the black velvet CD case. She walked over to the side of the room where the stereo system was and took out an album. I watched her finger press the eject button. The player�s mouth popped open and she slid it in. Pushing it shut she reached her hand over and turned up the volume.
There was a clicking noise in the player then the first song came on. Naturally I had figured she would play heavy metal and there I came on. Heavy metal with those heavy beats blasting through the house. I had just recently got a new sub-woofer and it was all worth the money. She smiled and dropped the case from her hand, letting it fall to the yellow tinted carpet. Her hand moved to her pocket and she pulled out a lighter and walked over to the table. I moved over to the table to see what she was doing. I simply marveled at her actions for the next five minutes as she carefully rolled a joint.
She stood up holding it in her hand and fell back onto the couch next to me. �You�re going to have to smoke half of this to get anything, Deronik. You ever smoked anything before?� she asked, pulling the lighter up under the end of the joint. I shook my head and she nodded in return slowly, adding a small laugh to it. She pulled back the wheel on the lighter and there was a loud click and nothing else. Once again she tried and then she finally got a large flame going. It quickly turned the end of the joint black, and I could smell very strong a scent I had never smelt before. Sitting up she placed herself over me and held it near my lips. �Do it slowly, suck it out then inhale it and let it rest, then exhale. Okay?� I nodded my head. I reached my hand up and took it, and tried to imitate how they did it in the movies. I placed the end of it on my lips and began to suck. Immediately there was this hot burning sensation on the top of my throat and I just as soon coughed it all up.
Rachel laughed at me and I let myself settle. Once again I sat up and tried again, this time I got it without any problems. I did as she said: I let it come down into my lungs and then waited. Then with a huff I exhaled all of it. �Okay. Keep going till half of it is gone.� I did as she told me, slowly taking it all in. Eventually I started to feel slightly sick after I reached the halfway point. I handed it back to her and leaned back, letting it all settle. Rachel began to do it herself, professionally.
Soon after I started to feel my eyes becoming full and heavy. Before I knew it my train of thought was not a train of thought anymore; it was an explosion of thought. I stood up for no reason, but then the funny thing was by the time I had stood up I was still getting up. I looked down at her and laughed for no reason. �Wow�fuck where am I going?� I said, looking down at her. She burst out laughing and I noticed her eyes were shiny and blood shot.
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Note: To any reader who may view this story you will be aware of my age. I assure you this story will contain creative violence and sex, which may disturb some readers. I assure you that the thoughts and views expressed by the characters are not of my own, and only of creative aspects.
Orion
Chapter 1: I met this girl�
Fallen like a soldier in battle I lay clutching my wound my lover had delivered to me. Lay spread out in the bathtub I listened to the sound of draining blood behind me. I felt it down my back as it crawled its way out of my stomach and down the side of my leg, then crawling backwards down the tub to freedom. The change I endured in these short years started with a line of taunting towards me, then three words to trigger me off. Surprised even I was I did not do what I had expected. For I lay here draining after finally finding my lover once again. My story I assure you, is one you have heard before. I travel the path given to me slowly and I slip into each outfit of insanity as it is delivered. Each time I stop I expect my journey is over only to discover it has started again. The deeper it goes, the more you will question weather I make sense but in my mind, in my world it makes perfect sense as the journey unfolds. Again I lay waiting for the answer, will my journey continue? But let�s start at the beginning, where I think my story might have begun and as you read you will be aware of where this story will go.
Opening my eyes to the world was like closing them to darkness. No differences between awake and asleep except the brittle depressing fact that being awake and alive was a punishment. Lay there I did. Hours upon hours, only my self to keep the sanity. From my cold used mattress on my young stiff back I watched the ceiling, waiting for an answer. I guess there had been a question before that answer, but I�m so far gone I can�t even remember what this question was. I breathed slowly, consciously aware of each breath leaving me, never to return.
It�s always interesting how you can feel so alive by yourself, be such a sensitive emotional person. By my self I was brilliant minded, an amazing lover and that dark ambition which in some peoples eyes could be appreciated. Then I go back to the real world, and in the first second the poisonous burning spices of real people corrupt all my perfection. So much to say to the world, yet when I�m really face to face with society I can�t say it. I�m so scared that the right words can�t escape my throat. All the world hears is my angst filled bitching or my gothic silence heard and seen from the corners of useless classrooms or rundown dirt filled sidewalks. That�s all a possibility, but to be simple, the world just plain doesn�t want to listen to me. There�s that line again. �That�s life for ya, tough.� Every time I hear that line from a lowly mortal my muscles tense up, and my hand yearns to be holding that black cold metal, yearning to pull that trigger.
Was I yearning for death or just acting it? Waiting for somebody to take notice? Nobody ever took an interest. So until a point in my short-lived life I just lost all care of attention. I fed the anger within me the rage and hatred of the aftermath to those beloved eye candies I spent most of my time tasting. I was incredibly amazed at how simple it was to create something so devastating. Watching that screen, clicking that button over and over again and listening to the screams that followed. Did the games make my life like this, or did I just use them to help? It wasn�t that I was unconscious to this effect; I was well aware of what I was becoming and every so often I would feel an awful pain in my stomach. But I had no control, or at least I didn�t want it. I wanted to be something that everybody feared. I didn�t want love; I wanted terror in my grasp: to choke it and hear it scream was all I wished for more and more each of those long pointless days.
I had a skill for writing incredibly. I never even cared about what it was my pencil moved to create. I just wrote away like those helpless primates, chained to their desks forced to type and type that dribble that eventually would be called success. Ironically those monkeys were not far off from us. Chained to our desks by the limits of what we had to pay and whom we had to watch.
I was 15 years old with short crisp brown hair and dark deep green eyes. My height was not a factor for I simply never stood up to care. I remained quiet in school and never even looked at my classmates; I didn�t need attention but I always had that lingering hope that somebody soon would take interest in that passionate human being that was me. An interesting event, which remains in my memory as the starting of my wrath, was when a girl slightly younger then me attempted to converse with me. She sat next to me and asked me the questions I had answered to myself--thousands of times.
�Why don�t you talk much?� she asked, looking over my arm as I attempted to concentrate on my drawing. I didn�t answer, I cared not of this question and from whom it came. However, I was curious as to why she was talking to me - let alone looking at me. Pausing, I quickly began playing back my memory to hear again what was before her words. I realized those giggling idiots were watching her. They found me fascinating to waste their time on. Waving it by in my head I once again completely ignored the figure next to me and I continued to draw.
Then it struck my stomach as the words flowed from her mouth into my stream of thought. Bursting out laughing she corrupted me with the words, �You�re a fag boy.� I slowly turned my head and stared at her. Looking into her eyes I felt my anger rising and my blood boiling. My stomach felt like a raging pot, brewing the soup of my angry soul itself. A thousand thoughts flashed through my mind but one in particular stood out: jabbing my pencil into her neck seemed most forfeiting. Rather crude, but in my mind it worked well. I stopped to realize what I was angry at. A mere four words were enough to trigger me to these thoughts.
I gazed at her with a grin on my face � small, but noticeable. She laughed again and said, �Oh! I suppose the fag boy intends to use his DEPRESSED rage to brutally hurt me. That fucking look won�t get you anywhere but six feet under. My boyfriend would beat your ass till you were eating through a straw if he saw you looking at me like that, fag.� At this point it was the worst it had ever been. I was far past the point. All I was to do is thrust with everything I had and I�d have her eye on the end of my pencil like a shishkabob. Then something happened right there. My stomachache simply left. That pain holding me from doing the unthinkable stopped. No more did it sit boiling in my stomach. I was confused at first. My rage was still there and I wanted to rip this girl�s throat out more then ever but I wasn�t in pain. Then I realized where I had arrived. I had traveled far down that cold dark jungle river, standing in the brutally hot humidity, both sides equally evil. I had arrived at my destination but I was not there to destroy the only true evil left. I was there to stay, to learn and to use the painless darkness given down by those who attempted to pierce my heart. I was at home in my heart, and it felt more amazing then anything I had ever remotely thought of. There and then I managed to ignore this girl once again but only to wait for a better time.
As the days went on my knowledge of myself grew and grew. I was no longer afraid of anything. Not myself, not my enemies, nothing. My imagination was at its peak and I couldn�t help but wonder what I was going to do to them. So many choices; I felt like a kid in a candy store. I could stand them up and blow their brains out as they plead for my forgiveness, I could skin them alive and tie them up then throw pounds of absence salts on each one of them. What I would give to hear them cry right before I ended their sad lives. To feel their warm blood rolling down my pale white skin would be my body tasting heaven. No regret, no feeling whatsoever. I could do anything to anybody and end myself and never even look back.
With all the words rushing through my head I could barely contain my excitement. I quote, �I want to kill as many as you mother fuckers as I possibly can. I want to go to some downtown area and just shoot as many of you fuckers as I can and blow everybody up.� I wasn�t as crude thinking as him but it was close.
Then it happened. Around one month of my dark joyful experience and growth yet another girl arrived next to me. She was new to this school, but I had no interest in speaking with her. Amazing that her assigned seat was next to mine. Her name was Rachel Vishon. Even I was surprised at how incredibly beautiful she was. Just slightly shorter then me, long dyed jet-black hair, slightly full bright red lips. Colorful peach skin and a beautiful body. Nevertheless I had no time to even deal with her. I was busy in my newly created world and there was no time for anybody unless they were brutally murdered.
As the weeks carried on I sat next to her in my English, Math and horrid Business Tech classes. I sat and listened to the hundreds of guys flirting their charm to her and from her to me, not a word. It came to one day in English when she noticed a peace of dark poetry writing I had left next to my crippled notebook. Unaware due to being lost in fantasy I didn�t notice her leaning for my shoulder to read it. I only became aware when I smelt the scent of cinnamon and peach textured breath as it crossed my face. I turned slowly only to see that brown beautiful eyes staring back at me. She grinned at me and turned around, continuing her assignment. Sitting there I found myself quite stunned for some reason. Butterflies were in my stomach and I had no idea what to do, if anything. I tried to return my train of thought but before I could even dare I felt something on the top of my leg, grasping it gently. My stomach jumped but I remained calm and slowly looked down. Her right hand managed to move its way onto my leg. I watched as she squeezed gently and I found myself making a slight jump. I looked over to see her giggling at me and watched her slowly bring her hand back.
�Not many people touch you, do they?� she asked me as she looked back onto her paper. Still stunned I tried to bring my self-control. Quickly I became aware that I had given her my attention and my darkness had oddly stepped aside for those few moments.
As I traveled home I remained excited just from the thought of her touching me like that again. I thought more and more about it until I came to another depressing conclusion. In my situation in my world she was only there for her own laughter. Taking advantage of me like they all have done just to get a good laugh in the end. I couldn�t help but feel utterly humiliated by myself that I could even remotely find myself aroused by what she had done. Once again, my mind had returned to its cold dark train of thought. Feeling this way was the only answer, for I was protected by it. Nothing could harm me; I was invincible until death. That night was the same as always, sitting there writing away thoughts and ideas then using my lighter to burn them in my hands. Being the pyro I was I had disabled the smoke alarm in the corridor outside my room. I could burn what I wanted, and then open the window to let most of it into the open air. I had no more care of safety. I just practiced ways of hurting people. I found yearbook photos of those boys and girls I had loathed. I cut them out one by one and taped them to the wall. I gazed at them for hours, with that sour smirk on my face picturing how good it would feel to tear out each person�s organs one by one. I would gut the guys first and make the girls watch as I dug my way into each of those mammals with a dull hunting knife. I would throw what I could get onto the floor in front of each of them like they do in Sushi bar restaurants. Pallets of pathetic male human meat, being wasted for my entertainment.
After enough of thinking up these brutal fantasies they became worn down. More boring each time as they lost their edge. I was no longer achieving satisfaction from the games or the fantasies. I still yearned for blood but nothing was good enough anymore to satisfy my killer instinct. Eventually I began to throw in skirmishes making the killing harder each time. Making it as realistic as I could I was forced to fight battles in my own mind just to do the utmost damage each time. They became more realistic, and my mind was overwhelming with power. Building possible outcomes and predicted events I had to build strategies of how to achieve catastrophic damage. I had drawn out battle plans and found ways of prepping before the big battle each night: myself against society. I used a model of the real world to support my fantasies, which worked incredibly well. Questioning each act I went as detailed as finding out how I would gain the weapons necessary for the rampages, finding ways of keeping it all in secret so nobody would know about what I was planing.
The more powerful these fantasies became the more powerful my mind could calculate outcomes. I became incredibly fascinated in how humans and justice systems would react to certain events. Each week I took a visit to the public library, taking out books on historic military actions and how police ended rampages. The more I read the more I found ways of avoiding being captured.
The next week my mother informed me that she had to go away on a business trip for a month. This was not unusual for me since she had gone on these trips many times. This time she informed me that I was to take care of myself and the house. Each week she sent me a check for groceries and a little money for me to spend on what I desired. I remember how excited I was. Blasting heavy and death metal 24/7 and doing whatever I wanted. Fortunately we lived in an area where nobody cared how loud the other houses were. There was at least one shot heard each month, parties constantly, cops busting drug dealers and gang fights.
Once again I sat there in English class, trying my very best to ignore her scent, which continuously shot it�s way over to me. Every time I whiffed it I fell into paradise. I had decided not to write or draw anymore next to her. I had no need to be humiliated by her charms once more. Ignoring the assignment handed out I just sat there in my same old black outfit, cargo, baggy shirt and a shiny chain around my wrist.
The scent got stronger and I heard her soft voice, �Where do you live?� My heart shot up into an uncountable amount of beats per second. My stomach did its same turn but I tried not to look at her.
��Near Paroth Station�the ghetto,� I replied, trying not to look at her. I finally gave in and locked my eyes with hers. Again I found myself falling into paradise as I gazed into her beautiful eyes. She was wearing a thin black jacket that was half-unzipped, revealing a white tank top and tight dark blue jeans. As I quickly gazed down I noticed that she had her stomach pierced recently, as it was red and inflamed.
�Me too. But I know I haven�t seen you down there ever, I would have remembered,� she looked over at my chest and noticed my necklace resting there over my black shirt. It was a silver chain like the one on my wrist but long and smaller. Hanging off of it was a small silver triangle with a sword through it. The one my father gave to me long time before he died.
She leaned over and gently balanced herself by placing her palm on my chest while her other hand held the silver triangle. Her eyes were fixated on it. My whole body was excited but I contained all of it to work up my next reply, �I don�t go out much��
She looked up at me, �I can tell,� she said, pushing herself back and letting go of the necklace. �Do you live with your parents?�
�My mother�she�s away on a business trip for a month. I have the house to myself right now,� I watched as she grinned.
�Kinky. Having a lot of parties are we?� she said, nudging me with her elbow.
I smiled softly then felt it fade away and then shook my head, �No�I don�t have any friends to have parties.�
�How does a hot guy like you not have any friends?� Once again she managed to turn my stomach over and I even felt my self-blushing. Feeling humiliated by the obviousness of how much I was turned on I pulled my heavy black jacket from the right side over my groin area slowly, trying not to let her notice.
I looked at the desk and noticed the writing �faggot� written multiple times in permanent red marker. Surprisingly enough, the quality of the writing they used was quite remarkable. Unfortunately it was incredibly memorable.
She nudged me again urging a response and I managed to slowly reply with, �People think I am a freak. I act weird and in return they are afraid of me being different. However; since they are power hogs they develop the urge to control what they are afraid of, and the only way to control what they are afraid of in their eyes is to attack it deeply. It�s not something they notice, it�s an automatic system built into their minds from their parents most likely.� I looked over again at her noticing her frozen, still smiling but paused with a look of pride.
Rachel began to use her fingers to twirl around her jet-black hair. Coming to thought she replied, �What an answer�I take it you think about this stuff a lot?�
�When you have nothing better to do but lay in bed for over 5 hours straight till you fall asleep, you attempt to make meaning out of what doesn�t make sense. I hate them� I really do� but I still am curious to wonder why they do what they do,� as I gazed at her I noticed how much she was marveling what I was saying. A deep excitement was jumping around inside of me, I never thought that anybody cared about this sort of thought.
�I guess over time you start to respect them more?� she dropped her hand down from playing with her hair and reached it over to play with the side of my jacket.
I began to make a slow laugh with a sinister tone then paused to say, �Actually I gain less respect for them and all human life the more I think about it. Eventually you start to realize how basic functioned humans really are. If a 123-page book labeled, �Psychological Labeling for Dummies� can narrow down every last possible function for a human to demonstrate then humans really aren�t that special.
��But a human being wrote that book.� She replied, moving her hand over to my leg.
I began to get even more excited but I attempted to keep my cool and continue the conversation. I tried to get my thought together and I replied with, �Yeah, but ask yourself why he or she wrote that book? He or she spent three years of their life studying psychology, then nine years in the same med school at a well-known university which ended up costing them over a hundred and twenty grand. Are they impressed with their education? No, they feel they�ve wasted their money so they decide to get that money back that their parents and him or her slaved for. So he or she gets a job as a psychiatrist just as he or she had dreamed of doing all this time.�
I paused for a second then continued, �But what does he or she desire even more? Money, of course. So he or she spends their time diagnosing people, and eventually one of the patients comes in and asks, �Tell me in English what�s wrong with me, dock.� So our friendly noble shrink described to the patient exactly what the problem is. The patient understands and by noble rights from our shrink, of course he charges money. The patient is charged an extra 40 bucks. Those 40 bucks were made slowly at a crummy job with a boss who in the first place generated this psychological problem through unhealthy environments. So in the end the patient pays money in which the exact money he pays with is what the base of his problem is. Not to mention he gets recommended some nice large pills to stuff down is throat. That�s an extra 94 dollars a week right there for some nice fancy drug manufactured in a US plant which imports 50% of its chemicals from their own labs and the other 50% of its chemicals from a Colombian licensed chemical drug plant which is paid through the bloody taxes of it�s people. These people make approximately 94 cents a day to make 44 marketing dollars of chemicals combined with American chemicals to create a 94$ drug. This drug is used by a man who is paying the very money that is making him go insane to make him better which the end fucks up his liver and gives him a food filtering problem.�
Again I took a short pause for a breath, �Now comes down to our shrink. He or she wakes up one morning and says, �Hey, maybe I can expand my knowledge like the decent person I am to the people of the world to make them understand what�s wrong with them.� So he or she writes a book with their 40 dollar an hour time. Then a company with the copyright name of dummies decides to publish it with a contract to the writer of $19.0456 a book sold. Next thing you know a 29.99-dollar book is out on the market. People are buying this book as a translator for high end English used by their shrinks because these people being treated don�t have a $100 000 dollar education. No irrelevant education means they don�t understand what the fuck their psychiatrist is saying.�
I noticed after my long sentenced speech that Rachel had stopped completely, gazing at me with this odd excited look. As if I had just spoken dirty to her. �How about this, Deronik�� Finally somebody had said my name right. As fucked up as a name it was she said it right, �Me and you can be friends. Me and you can have a party at your house, just the two of us fucked off our asses babbling on shit for hours.�
I gave her a confused look then asked, �Fucked off our asses?�
�You know�stoned, high�fucked off our asses? You�ve been high before, right?� she asked, looking at me strangely.
�Err�No I haven�t,� I replied slowly.
She laughed then lifted up her bag, �Then I guess tonight you�ll just have to have to smoke a lot.�
�T�tonight?� I stuttered feeling my stomach go crazy with excitement.
I watched as she smiled and noticed her putting on her jacket. She then threw her hair out of her line of site, �Yeah, meet me on the field and we�ll go right to your house. I hope you have a stereo system, a nice TV and a fuck load of food.�
June 4th, 1989. An easy estimate of over 10 000 protesters in favor of democracy stood in the Chinese made concrete Square in Beijing. The result? A division of the Chinese red Army named �the peoples liberation army,� liberated over 7000 protesters from their freedom seeking lives. Shot by the bullets they slaved for in their factories, or crushed under the steel treads they welded with their own sweat and blood. Leaving a landfill on the square of 7000 dead and another thousand or so wounded. I remember feeling the adrenaline rush as I fantasized about it, so many times. I fantasized being the ones in power, the ones who commanded it.
Unfortunately, much of my life I felt as if I was always being crushed by the steel tank treads of society; the last thing I would see before my sleep would be that thousand ton steel beast sitting on top of my newly rotting corpse. The only problem was the next morning I woke up in the same old uncomfortable ideally made Concrete Square, only to be crushed by the treads again, or shot down by the bullets I made.
These feelings were starting to slowly leave me as I spent time with Rachel. I halted fantasies more and more and I wasn�t as bloodthirsty. Still I remained with that cold blooded killer instinct which never felt sorrow, never saw regret and strained with its finger on the edge of the trigger, just waiting to fire at it�s closest target.
After school I headed out to the field. My chains clanked as I walked through the boiling sea of green blades, with the scolding sun on the back of my neck. I looked forward and saw Rachel looking back at me, smiling. I returned the smile and picked up my pace. I reached her and then we continued to walk out of the field towards the bus stop. We chatted peacefully about her mainly. She had been expelled from many different schools from writing they continued to find on her. Depressed psychotic type writing, with no real propose but to plan out the different ways of killing people. Apparently she was much like me, just a little too careless with what she had been open about. Going to many different anger management classes she behaved herself and showed incredible signs of improvement until one of her shrinks had her re-inserted into this school. One of the lines that struck me hard is when she said, �I behaved myself like the good little girl I was. But the thing is, once you believe in violence no training or brainwashing will wipe that clean. It�s there, and you�re going to act on it one day.�
As she said this I stopped and I looked at her, saying, �That�s their excuse�or�his excuse.�
She looked at me with a faint grin, �Yeah�it is. I got caught so many times and I can never fulfill what I want to achieve.�
�For one thing what he did was foolish. He had no control; it was just crude planing with crude devices. I myself may have that in me but I also have the brains to know that there are other ways. I�m not one for killing innocent people; it�s just not my thing. I fantasize about it, I come close to it, but I have better ideas, which don�t involve killing innocent people. I don�t care to go down as the guy who lost his cool and went all out just because he was made fun of�not to mention, next time you read about him, look at his pictures. Look at his eyes, look at his smile - it�s so fucking obvious that he wasn�t just dark hearted and a cold-blooded killer. He was fucking insane. All murderers are labeled as insane, but in reality he had no control over himself. It was just constant fantasy, which always resulted in over 1000 people dying just by him running around shooting people.� I looked over and saw her nodding slowly in realization.
We continued to walk until we reached the subway and from there on in it was a quiet trip. All we did was look at each other and smile.
Orion was my creation. As insane as it was people followed and it worked. Perfectly organized by me and perfectly followed out by most of the players. It was flawless and untraceable for the longest time. I had written it down on 9 sheets of graphite covered lined paper and left it in my desk inside my room. She must have grabbed it after she voluntarily gave me a hand job. I was so fucked and after coming I didn�t even notice I was alive, let alone her grabbing all the papers in my desk. Amazingly she did not do anything treacherous, but she gave me a gift. She gave birth to my dream. My dream of all dreams was Orion, the game that fed all killer instinct with in all that wished to play. To my surprise, she found a lot of players.
I removed my jacket and knapsack then tossed it onto the shiny varnished wooden floor. Rachel followed my lead but bent down to neatly place her jacket out of the way. I threw my shoes off and walked over to the couch. I sat down and watched at the front door to see Rachel bent over untying the laces to her scuffed up black boots. She finally removed them and headed over to where I was sitting and placed herself directly next to me. Looking at her busy eyes I marveled at them not noticing the items she was pulling out of her bag. After a few seconds I looked over to the coffee table and noticed 3 tiny zip lock bags packed full of weed, a black box the size of my palm and a black velvet CD case.
�Do you have a brother, Deronik?� she asked me, letting herself fall back onto the couch. Slowly she began to move up into a cuddle with me.
Realizing what she had asked me I remembered just what the story behind that was. I looked down to see her head laid down over my lap and her eyes gazing back at mine. I made a brief sigh and tried to let the words escape, �My family is so fucked up it�s not even funny. My mom�s in her 50�s and she had me practically recently.�
Rachel nodded her head then moved her hand up to paw at my necklace, ��but�do you have a brother?�
I paused and felt my face going blank in memory. Not as if I was sad but as if I had just remembered what I was missing in my life, what I should have had. �I did�have a brother. He was killed in a Special Forces training operation in friendly deserts. Got hit by an anti tank round. He didn�t even have a corpse left; just fragments of him scattered around the desert,� I said, looking over at the shelf to see an old photo of my brother with his friends.
�Miss him?� she asked gazing up at me as she continued to run her fingers down the chain of my necklace. Rachel moved even closer to me and ran her other hand down my chest down to my stomach.
My breathing began to get heavier and once again I had found myself aroused, hoping she wouldn�t notice. I gazed back at her, trying to decipher through her eyes what her motifs were. �No. I�ve lost a lot of people in my life and eventually you get used to that telegraph showing up at your door.� I noticed her hand moving down the right side of my body. She moved it over my right hand, which sat on the couch and clutched it, like a baby. She then squeezed it in and locked her hand with my and squeezed gently.
�Just breathe, Deronik. You�re trembling,� I noticed that she was right and I started to monitor my breaths properly, keeping a steady rhythm. Eventually I calmed down. I looked into her eyes and then something incredible happened. I felt at peace, for some reason I had just melted right there and I was totally open to her. No more fear or nervous shakes, I just felt like I could lay there with her for ages. I gave a faint smile to her and noticed what she was waiting for.
She pushed herself up closer to me slowly, as if she was trying not to scare me. She got closer and closer till she was level with me. She had moved into a position where her left leg and right leg were spread out over my lap. There she sat, locked with my eyes totally level. I felt her hands moving up towards my upper body till she let her left hand rest on my chest. Her other arm moved around my back and I felt her fingers gently running up the back of my neck. She placed her palm on the back of my head and pulled me closer to her. I could now very much smell that unique breath she had as she pulled me closer. Once again I fell to her needs. I let my arms wrap around her and I gently held her. She pulled her arm out from between us and then placed it on my right shoulder, letting her hand dangle over the couch. Now I was the closest I had ever been to a girl. Not only that, I was as calm and mellow, as I had been when I laid in my bed all those long nights.
I looked into her eyes and now could see what I had begun to love about her. In her eyes laid how much she wanted me but also how independent she was. Right at that moment she had gotten me. She was one of those girls who just knew how she could have you fall in love with her forever. Right there I in my mind I fell to her like a slave. And I was from that moment on her protector. She moved in slowly and gently shut her eyes, placing her lips against mine. At first I felt in shock, but quickly I adapted to what she was doing. I too shut my eyes and focused on it. Without warning I felt her tongue slip into my mouth. Again I was in incredible shock and I felt for a second like I was going to into a fury of violent coughs but then once again I adapted. She began tracing patterns inside my mouth with her tongue, and I could only accept what she was doing. For the next twenty minutes I remained in paradise hoping for more and more each second.
Finally she pulled away from my mouth and smiled. Rachel then moved back and stood up, turning around to pick up the black velvet CD case. She walked over to the side of the room where the stereo system was and took out an album. I watched her finger press the eject button. The player�s mouth popped open and she slid it in. Pushing it shut she reached her hand over and turned up the volume.
There was a clicking noise in the player then the first song came on. Naturally I had figured she would play heavy metal and there I came on. Heavy metal with those heavy beats blasting through the house. I had just recently got a new sub-woofer and it was all worth the money. She smiled and dropped the case from her hand, letting it fall to the yellow tinted carpet. Her hand moved to her pocket and she pulled out a lighter and walked over to the table. I moved over to the table to see what she was doing. I simply marveled at her actions for the next five minutes as she carefully rolled a joint.
She stood up holding it in her hand and fell back onto the couch next to me. �You�re going to have to smoke half of this to get anything, Deronik. You ever smoked anything before?� she asked, pulling the lighter up under the end of the joint. I shook my head and she nodded in return slowly, adding a small laugh to it. She pulled back the wheel on the lighter and there was a loud click and nothing else. Once again she tried and then she finally got a large flame going. It quickly turned the end of the joint black, and I could smell very strong a scent I had never smelt before. Sitting up she placed herself over me and held it near my lips. �Do it slowly, suck it out then inhale it and let it rest, then exhale. Okay?� I nodded my head. I reached my hand up and took it, and tried to imitate how they did it in the movies. I placed the end of it on my lips and began to suck. Immediately there was this hot burning sensation on the top of my throat and I just as soon coughed it all up.
Rachel laughed at me and I let myself settle. Once again I sat up and tried again, this time I got it without any problems. I did as she said: I let it come down into my lungs and then waited. Then with a huff I exhaled all of it. �Okay. Keep going till half of it is gone.� I did as she told me, slowly taking it all in. Eventually I started to feel slightly sick after I reached the halfway point. I handed it back to her and leaned back, letting it all settle. Rachel began to do it herself, professionally.
Soon after I started to feel my eyes becoming full and heavy. Before I knew it my train of thought was not a train of thought anymore; it was an explosion of thought. I stood up for no reason, but then the funny thing was by the time I had stood up I was still getting up. I looked down at her and laughed for no reason. �Wow�fuck where am I going?� I said, looking down at her. She burst out laughing and I noticed her eyes were shiny and blood shot.