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Landlord of Sector 7
03-23-2004, 10:30 PM
Immortal or somebody told me to make this so I am but it prob isn’t too good cause I’m thinking as I’m going. Some of this stuff is based off of books though.

3 years after the true defeat of the Empire, all of the galaxy is in quiet peace. There are of course many small groups trying to regain control by bringing back the Empire but these groups are easily succumbed by the "Rebels" leaded by Commander Skywalker. There has been no revival of the Jedi and a new threat approaches. One who claims to be son of the Emperor, Trioculus. This Trioculus has been striking terror to numerous planets on the Outer Rim ever since before the mines were developed on Corellia. The Rebel faction is well aware of his whereabouts and status yet they let him go in hopes of luring him into……….something unexpected. Meanwhile, deep below the surface of Degabah, there is a city. This city is a technological marvel and has not been in contact with outsiders since the Clone Wars. It is the hidden city of the Jedi. There, all that remains are two droids and one child named Ken. This Ken is acceptionally skilled in the art of the Jedi and his future is still quite uncertain as he is found and his destiny is finally confronted.

Wow that was really bad but hey I don’t really care. Tell me what you think and if people thought it was interesting I will continue in the story.


Lightning Mage
03-23-2004, 11:49 PM
I read some of those books.
It seems like you’re changing them a little. Try a different aproach. The whole thing would be cool anyway, but add some Landlord stuff into it.:coolegg:

Kuro
03-24-2004, 01:27 PM
:DMe Likee:D

Landlord of Sector 7
03-24-2004, 10:03 PM
Gee thnx guys. I didn’t really think it was good at all:D

Raidenex
03-26-2004, 01:25 AM
Hmm, you’re ripping off the story of a bunch of Star Wars books aimed at kids that I read about, oh, 6 or 7 years ago…

And making them not cool. Trioculus was a damn nasty scary villain. I’m not sensing the fear.

And for crying out loud, it’s DAGOBAH! DAGOBAH!

Ok, i’m done.


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