sorry, that lastone sucked..heres a bit of adarker one..heh …heh..

YOU,
ITS WHAT WE HATE,
GIVEN THAT YOUR,A BIG DISGRACE,
AND YOUR FACE,
BRINGING SUTCH DISTASTE,
YOU, YOURSELF IS JUST A MADE UP LULLABY,
BY YOU TIS IT SUNG, YOU DESERVE TO BE HUNG,
I HEAR YOUR NAME, WATCH YOU BLAME,
BUT I DONT CARE, WHAT A SHAME,
AFTER ALL YOU MADE THE GAME.

TWILIGHT, TO NIGHT,
I AWOKE, I SAW A FRIGHT,
TWAS JUST YOU, ALL BLACK AND BLUE
FROM THAT BEATING I GAVE TO YOU.

SO SCREAM IN HORROR, I TELL YOU NO LIES,
DISHOHNER, TO YOUR RACE,
SO TAKE THAT, IN YOUR FACE,
WATCH IT BITCH, GO AHEAD AND TRY,
ILL BRING YOU PAIN YOU CANT DENY,
YOUR WISHS TO QUICKLY DIE!

THAT BEATING MUSTA DONE NO GOOD
HERE YOU WERE WEARING A HOOD,
GUN AT HAND, POINTED AT ME
I ONLY SAID "GO A HEAD, I MENT EVERY WORD I SAID"

WHAT DO YOU THINK,
SHOULD THIS BE THE END?
NA, I’LL COME BACK NEXT TIME,
MABEY DO IT ALL OVER AGAIN….

HAHAHA

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Again, horrific beyond the ability of words to adequately convey.

thus to the fact that you havent called me a cunt, and by judging your aditude twards art, i will take that as a complement,lol

Please don’t. I appreciate good poetry where I find it, but it very seldom appears here. Yours is awful beyond measure, as is most of the other garbage that gets posted on this forum.

alas, your tough too please…
please enlighten me,
how can i improve?
sencerly
~Zephiel~

I lol’d.

lolz.

CAPS LOCK IS CRUISE CONTROL FOR COOL!

A poem only Bobcat Goldthwait could love.

Thank god it rhymes though.

TWAS JUST YOU, ALL BLACK AND BLUE
FROM THAT BEATING I GAVE TO YOU.

Hahaha, this is a good bit. GO WRITE A POEM THAT COMPRISES ENTIRELY OF BEATINGS.

Lol who changed his name to Shakespeare?

!!!!!FTW, what hapendto my name!,if this is somekind of joke, its not cool !!!!

I beleive a admins laughing, somewhere.

Only admins can change names, actually. I’d have a lot of fun if mods could though.

whos the admin?i want my name back!!

This part of the forum is quite entertaining!

I did it! :p

Oh yes, like I said, I am enjoying this part of the forum more.

I motion Shade17 have his name changed to Edgar Allen Poe, cause lol.

oh god lawl

poems are fanfuckintastic btw [/sarcasm]

Your rhyme scheme is horrible, and equalivalent to a pre-schoolers level of work. Your words lack passion or drive, I don’t even think YOU, know what you are talking about. Darkness doesn’t equal Greatness, Dark poems suck because the desparity from the author is magnified by 10 when I read it, and lol at the Shakespeare pun.

SO SCREAM IN HORROR, I TELL YOU NO LIES,
DISHOHNER, TO YOUR RACE,
SO TAKE THAT, IN YOUR FACE,
WATCH IT BITCH, GO AHEAD AND TRY,
ILL BRING YOU PAIN YOU CANT DENY,
YOUR WISHS TO QUICKLY DIE!

That is the most pathetic, and sadly, funniest thing I’ve read here all week. :laugh:

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Shakespeare! Get back into that barracks! 5 demerits for you!

wasn’t hat funny. like it dark

This is all very amusing.

…..meow.
God is watching, most likely pissing his pants with amusement.

God is slapping his head trying to figure out why he created a such a retard

That is still the most pathetic, and sadly, funniest thing I’ve read here all week. :laugh: