Top Cat
04-08-2005, 04:55 PM
here is a poem i rote LOL
it is called "passionate tears of sunset"
i am sad
i slit mi wrists
wen dis happen
i dont o wot 2 do
i dont slit mi wrists ne more
it isd like da pain of 1000 suns
wen i die i like 2 go 2 hell
were all da vampires live
iam a vampire
not a person
~*the end*~
what do u guys think lol
Pat
04-08-2005, 04:56 PM
oh man
mmm is going to rip u a new one, little newbie
Top Cat
04-08-2005, 04:58 PM
LOL do u think so
i hope he does not LMAO
chewey
04-08-2005, 04:59 PM
Wow man, it was really good, better than i could do
April
04-08-2005, 05:05 PM
Finally someone posts here with some talent.
That was beautiful, TC ;_;~
Prak
04-08-2005, 08:55 PM
Tears are streaming down my face as I post this. I have never been so moved by poetry in my entire life.
Shinryudan
04-08-2005, 09:01 PM
Well………….. That was enlightening……….
AT
04-08-2005, 09:02 PM
my life has been redefined
Top Cat
04-08-2005, 09:23 PM
i am glad to know my poetry has touched ppl
Slash
04-09-2005, 12:35 AM
yeah just reading that has changed my life completley
Dragoncurry
04-09-2005, 02:32 AM
Yo man. That was deep.
TheGreenRanger
04-09-2005, 02:38 AM
Rofl @ talking about slitting your wrists online where hundreds of people laugh at you like me.
Top Cat
04-09-2005, 11:27 PM
rofl @ not realising that this is clearly not serious poetry. =(
UNLESS THAT’S PART OF YOUR JOKE.
Dragoncurry
04-09-2005, 11:52 PM
I am pretty sure he wasn’t joking. It’s okay, some people are just slow.
Alpott
04-10-2005, 09:28 PM
I FEEL LIKE A NEW MAN
BellaMorte
04-28-2005, 05:35 AM
wen i die i like 2 go 2 hell
were all da vampires live
iam a vampire
not a person
~*the end*~
were all da vampires live
iam a vampire
not a person
~*the end*~
what do u guys think lol
i resent that…*sniff* vamps are people too!! rofl…good poem *standing ovation*
neosavedtheworld
04-29-2005, 10:53 AM
Top Cat we should about your book deal…
Pat
04-29-2005, 05:16 PM
Top Cat we should about your book deal…