Neiyani, 2nd Paladin of the White Order

Just a little thing I cooked up. I coloured it with PSP, but i’ve got too add shading and highlighting to her. She hunts Jiro in my story under the impression he is a demon.

nice pic 🙂

I agree, good drawing. R u starting your own RPG story sort of thing now?

more of a manga-comic really

how good it is really depends on how old you are. more detail would really improve it anyway.

yeah, im 17, but she aint finished yet. This picture is still flats at the mo.

well you can fix it from looking flat with colouring like you said you will do. you should also try varying the thickness of the lines-done well it adds tons of depth. Try looking at anatomy more, maybe use a reference to draw from as the proportions and things seem a little off.
although this is all advice/criticism, its not bad atall. keep it up, i’d love to see the end result

Just a little thing I cooked up. I coloured it with PSP, but i’ve got too add shading and highlighting to her. She hunts Jiro in my story under the impression he is a demon.

Wow, you’re a great artist. Nice job there.

Cool I like it. Keep on posting them.

yeah! my favourite fan, Crystal_sword! ^_^
Thnx peeps, I compared this with some bodies on figure drawing tutorials and I can see what I did wrong in terms of proportions. (waist narrower, breasts wider and firther apart, feet bigger, etc.)