Here we go…
First off, let me say that I don’t like the eyes. That’s just my opinion and others may feel differently, but I thought it was worth noting.
The one on the left is the one with the most problems. The head is too large, which distorts the perspective on the rest of the body. Also, the spread fingers come off as a bit of a copout since it’s the easiest possible way to draw the hands. Another problem is the length of the arms. They’re too short, making the elbows look like they’re too far up. The forearms are probably a bit too long, but that may just be a perspective issue.
I didn’t like them. It’s partly just because the characters don’t appeal to me, but there are some technical issues.
First off, let me say that I don’t like the eyes. That’s just my opinion and others may feel differently, but I thought it was worth noting.
The one on the left is the one with the most problems. The head is too large, which distorts the perspective on the rest of the body. Also, the spread fingers come off as a bit of a copout since it’s the easiest possible way to draw the hands. Another problem is the length of the arms. They’re too short, making the elbows look like they’re too far up. The forearms are probably a bit too long, but that may just be a perspective issue.
Ahhhhh? Thanks? =/
Actually I took a second look and totally agree with you. I just started drawling in that sorta style hopefully I improve over time.
It looks to me like you drew them to have big, bouncy boobies, though. 😀
I really like the breasts. Really good.
good job, keep practicing ^_^
It looks to me like you drew them to have big, bouncy boobies, though. 😀
But, isn’t that par for the majority of female roles in the more popular anime?