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Tactical Error #5
03-20-2003, 04:11 AM
I do not know myself, I am no one.
No one knows me, I do not exist.
This world is a full place
and my empty shell only takes up space.

This life is trivial,
It is not a life at all.
I know not myself, my morals, my beliefs…
I am an emulation, a regurgitation,
not an original thought flows through me.

This life is all for naught,
existence is futile,
the world is brutal,
and the me that is not me, because there is no me,
is caught up in anomie.

I am soulless, a golem,
walking about doing the bidding of others,
My father�s, my mother�s.
But I can�t even do that right.
Every night,
always put up a fight,
Lie and defy as the days pass by.

I want to fly
away from this place,
away from the entire human race
so get out of my face.

But what am I saying
It doesn�t matter,
I don�t even exist.
Anomie,
There is no Me.

What you see
is a shadow, a shade,
and if I should fade
not a person would care,
�cause I was never really there at all.


Sylph
03-20-2003, 07:10 AM
Depressing, but beautiful~ I would love to hear you rap it :p

Kenji
03-20-2003, 04:31 PM
Nice poem you wrote, it is really nicely done.

I really like what’s it about…it’s shows so much emotion of the person who wrote it which is always beautiful.

Anyways, nice work!


The Dark Lord
03-20-2003, 05:51 PM
that poem was really depressing. It was well thought out and a well done. but kinda sad also.

Trajet
03-20-2003, 09:48 PM
Man, that was just excellent. It shows the reader a darkness and a depression that just lets the reader see everything their reading. that is really deep. *applaud*

Tactical Error #5
03-25-2003, 04:05 PM
Thanks for the comments. You don’t know how much it means to me. Well maybe you do. I wrote it the other day when my mom was all on my case about something or other and I got to thinking about what the point to any of it was. Maybe there is something to me, I just haven’t found it yet. Again, Thanks.

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