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Do you ever remember so much delight?
In the candlight
I wish you could remember those days we shared
Those were our days we bared

But something inside me was calling
Nothing could stop me from falling
All I need is for you to be here
We can make a new start
So don’t you fear

On that night we played together
I though that it could be forever
Never before had I felt this way
Never for another day
And these walls are all that stand in my way

To hold you, to feel you
To know you are here
How can I mend your shattered heart?
Go back to how it was at the start

But can you blame me?
What went wrong?
Our love was just so strong
We were always ment to be together
Walking in the light forever

So you see
This is how it’s ment to be
You are my love and my life
You are my angel tonight

Close you eyes and dream your dreams
I’ll be right here, so don’t you fear
You’ll never have a lonly heart again
Not while I have you near

Heh, your poem was a good read Phill. It’s nice to see you rhyming in your poems and you did it pretty well, too. Keep it up! ^_^

*Claps* =D

This would be good for a ballad song or something:P. Or something some girl in a movie would say to a guy. All in all, two good works 😛

The rhyming was superb, only a little sketchy in some parts. It was very romantic, I loved it. Good job, Phill.