The Power of Shadow

Filling my mind with complete serenity
I plow my way through the cold storms of my subconscious
Out into a fire-lit sky
Raging flames, licking and biting

I embrace the power
I embrace the filth, the delight
My blood is like lava through my vains

Crushing all in my path, I laugh to myself
But it is the laughter of another
Another from within coming out

The vileness and the greatness
I can not let it go
It has me now
I can not resist

The power within me can never be healed
The power of darkness
I am the power
And all shall bend to my will

I shall rule these lands
It is my pledge
My path
And the shadow eye will see again

Sounds like something a cool evil person would say, like on LOTR or something. It’s pretty damn good.

Heh, good poem Phill. Did you get your inspiration from Lord Of The Rings? It sure sounds like it =D

Keep up the great work! *Applauds* ^_^

Thank you guys ^_^; I am working on my technique. Trying to make use of words in a more constructive way.

You describe how that person is feeling very well, it makes you feel like your there, feeling what he feels. Very good job.