My poem

This is very sad, but I wrote it a while ago to my mother. I’ll never show it to her though…
Profanities are used, so just a heads up.

I�m Gone (Your Little Girl)

I feel so hurt so unsure
And so damn confused and abused
Used again and again
I�m lying all alone in this great big world
You�re supposed to be there for your little girl but your not
You�ve got
�other problems� you said
�I�ve got to come out ahead, instead while I still can.
You�re pushing me back, you�re slowing me down.�
This isn�t the way its supposed to be
You see
You�re nothing to me
Anymore
I�ve shut the door
I�d say what I feel but you scare me you tear me you hurt me and I cry.
But you don�t care do you?
You love to see me in pain
God you�re fucking insane
Need help? Well, I can�t help
You�re nothing to me anymore
You blew that a long time ago, psycho and
I�m gone now
I�m not your little girl now
I�m different now and I don�t need your help
Your little girl is gone
And I feel so hurt so unsure
And so goddamn confused and abused
Used again and again
This isn�t the way its supposed to be, you see
You�re nothing to me anymore
I�ve shut the door
And
I�m gone�

Heh, I have already read that poem at FFD CE but it still makes a great read. *Claps* Keep it up! ^_^

Its a fantastic piece of writing, baby. Keep it up cause you’re the most talented person I know.
(Except for mabye that one man band, how does he do it?)
eh heh heh, just kidding, hun.
Beautiful, but try to cheer up.

wow

I like this poem very much, CE. You used a tiny bit a repitition and that’s good, because it shows how everything in your poem goes together. Good job. 🙂