Get bored? Right a Story

Alright well itz about 7 pm here and Im really bored so i wrote the first chapter to a short story that IM currently working on (cuz Im bored and like 2 write) If you feel like takin the time to read it could ya tell me what ya think and if you can think of a name 4 the story tell me it cuz I have no idea. thx (ps I had no idea where to put this thread so I put it here if this is the right place please have one of the mods move it to the correct place thx.)

<font face="lucida calligraphy" size="2">Moving over to Fiction/Poetry forum… (Original writings go there for future reference)