a poem by me…i was in a bad mood so

BLOOD LUST by me melly

how could i have it?
the adrineline flows through these vains,
controlling me,my every move.
i crave a taste in my mouth.
what is it?
why,its the very essance we live by.
blood.
though i am not a vampire or some living dead being;
it calls me,it wants me,it wont let me go.
it teases and taunts my soul until i scream out in pure rage.
it drives normal happy people,into hellish demons.
beware mortal one of the blood lust.
its a monster that consumes all in its evil jaws.
i have been consumed,
its like a nightmare you cant wake from.
it hunts you in the night,waiting for that right moment in time when it will steal your innocense and replace it with its own will.
it wont let you go until your all used up.
then it moves on to the next hapless victim,draining happiness and causing sorrow.
it feeds off your hatrid like a snake strangleing a mouse to feast upon it.
if you cant shake it or hide,
yu will eventually die.
its too late for me i have been consumed.
i have been drained of innocense,my wil has been replaced by lust,
blood lust.

tell me what you ppls think thankies bye-byes

I like it. It’s slightly disturbing but it’s good. Keep up the good work.

It is good, although slightly dark. But I do like it!

*blinks* WOW! Likey that poem! Very dark but damn cool, even if it WAS a little repetetive… *thinks* Or was it meant to be repetetive?!? *blinks, then runs away*