in need of critics

can you guys tell me what you think of this? There original characters for a crappy comic I like to draw for my friends. I post it on my site if you want to read it just dont claim it for your own. It may be total crap but it took me hours to do it. (I colored it all on paint, major pain in the ass.) Anyways tell me what you think.

number one
number two

so tell me what you think.

i like the first one..its not bad..second is ok hehe

The first one looks pretty good……the second one……..umm…I really don’t care for it much…….but they are both better than anything I can do.