I really like the hair parts ^^
Reminds me with someone from the ring 1,2 and Zer0 ( Sadako ),Lol
I think you have done quite well with the shading, except around her "nose"
By the way, have you ever made a comic?
oh , and thanks. " 🙂 "
Anyway I think they are both very good (although I cant see alot of difference) I like the shading on the arm alot, very nice. Also, the body position is realy nice.
The only big problom I can see is that it looks kinda over exposed, the left side in places seems way to light compaired to the right.