Vengeance of Ganon (fanfic)

ok i started this one at a nintendo forum, i had to pick ganon because they would shred you to pieces if you didnt choose a nintendo character here the outlook of the story

this story ig going to consist of 5 parts

Prologue, Ch.1, Ch.2, Ch.3, and epilogue (Ch.1 being the shortest)

The story is of ganon avenging his wifes death(i know what your thinking, ganondorf has a wife?) well yeah its the only way my story will work
Ganondorf is going to have similar fighting as moves in supersmah bros melee

Characters: Ganondorf, Janus(wife), Link, Zelda, Epona, and the Kokiri people, and a cameo by Marth and Roy( fire emblem)

this story is not for the weak-hearted, but its not a gore-fest (ahem* Akira* ahem*)

ill be happy to hear your posts prior of after the story, happy reading!

timeto get you guys interested, here comes the the prologue

Duddadum duddadum duddadum came the galloping of Epona with the hero Link on his back. Link was heading to the ranch where he was going to give a checkup to Epona, for the side of her hoof had been chipped off of a stone wall. It was dusk, the sun was a third down, with about a half an hour til night. Link had dozed off, as he layed on epona’s back. Suddenly Epona stopped walking, as weird sounds came from afar. Link woke up in astonishment.

Link : What’s the meaning of thi-huh ?

A auburn glow came form the hillside.

Link : Giddyup (something is wrong as he mumbled to himself)

As he rode over the hillside, he saw the ranch, the huts on fire, and the field as well, he saw the horses fleeing form the entrance, scattering all over the land. He quickly urged Epona to go. Link rode through the granite entrance, only to find tat the caretakers had been lying on the ground. Link stepped down, the caretakers body lifeless as a dead leaf

Link : No… I’m too late, it must have been Ganon or that annoying hag of his.

Voice : Hag, eh? Ahahahahahahahaahha!

Link : Janus…

Janus was the lone survivor of the Gerudo Tribe and a wonderful magician, and Ganondorf took her in, only to become more intimate and they became seriously attached

Link : Why? Why commit such a foolish and wreckless act?

Janus : I needed entertained…

Link : That wasn’t a good reason to murder them

Link had been entranced he was focused as he could ever be. As Janus looked on with a smurk on her face. Suddenly, Link caught something blueish in the orner of his eye.

Link : Epona, go!

Janus just then threw an ice ball at the feet of Epona but missed. She kept hurling and throwing them, only to be outmatched with Epona’s outstanding speed.

Janus : Hahah you will never outrun my sorcery link!

Link had now become angry, he took and arrow out of his quiver, and placed it in his bow. Janus, only focused Epona, did not see what link had begun to do. As soon as Link saw Janus start to look towards the top Epona, he released his grip of his right hand. The arrow moving almost as quick as light, pierced Janus left side of the stomach. Janus then fell to her knees, and fell on her side, eyes closed, mouth shut, blood flowing down from the wound across her navel.

End of Prologue, Stay tuned for Ch.1

i’d really enjoy some feedback b4 i start ch1