Trivial Love

Its never complete
Nothing ever is
Til I talk to you

I don’t know what it is
No idea how you do it
You get to me like no one else does

I close my eyes
Your all I see
Being away drives me in sane

The stars in the sky
Shine like your eyes
And tears me a part inside

I’ve fallen for you
And Tears roll on by
Few things can feel like this

Theres nothing in the world
That doesn’t remind me of you
Its all I really have

A gentle breeze reminds me
Of your sweet innoscence
And I can’t understand

What could make you care for me
I’m not even sure
You will the way I do

All I know is
You make it alright
And I want nothing more

Then to be
In your arms
Tonight

That is a very powerful stanza. I think you should try to write more like this one or try to not make one like this in a poem that you aren’t really using rhymes with. It stands out too much and takes away from the rest of the poem if you do. Otherwise it was a very good poem, keep it up!