Here’s my poem…..(plz check it out…)

O.K…. this poem is something I wrote when I was thinking of this guy… it’s not FF orientated though…. but when I wrote it and I read over it again, it has a Vision of Escaflowne-ish kind of theme.
Here goez….

Eternally You
By Me

A gentle breeze touches my face….
Reminding me of your sweet caress.

Reminiscing of your tender kiss,
Your warm strong embrace I will forever miss.

You were the only one, the first and the last that I will always cherish and love.

Tears slide down my face for the one that got away, as I am now remembering that day.

You held me tight.

I gave you a necklace, a symbol of our love.

You kissed me then gently and promised you’d return.

I’ll never forget your wry smile as you said goodbye.

Then you spread your wings.

And you flew…..

Flew away to a distant world…..
The world above…in the stars, taking my heart with you.

Now as I’m looking up at the sky…. I think of you.

My love for all time, to who no matter whom I claim I love….. To you, I will always be true,

My love….. Eternally…..

You.

…. Well tell me whatcha think? (I only got one opinion so far and I want more feedback!!!)

So pls tell me whatcha think…tell me…..PM me….tell me your thoughts anything!!!

(Por favor!!) 🙂

I thought that was great and really well done. Lots of expression and detail. I hope to see more great work soon.:)

That’s absolutely beautiful, and I can relate bigtime.

Thanx SSJ and and Etheral… 🙂

Not bad…I don’t really write in that form too often so I can’t really give any constructive criticism…so I’ll just leave it at very good poem 😉

I got an FF8 vibe

it was touching and beautiful

I believe this is the same poem I read the other day? When you said that you could write, I wasn’t expecting anything like this at all. I was really impressed. Sure I was expecting something good but I never expected this.

oh wow, very good, keep up the good work!