Setsuna Yuna
01-26-2002, 06:45 AM
Here’s a poem of mine. Please tell me what you think:
This feeling is so hard
It weighs heavily on my heart
I feel like I shouldn’t have said what I said
I feel like I shouldn’t have done what I had done
But I couldn’t take it back
And I wish I could for all the world
Everytime I start thinking
This feeling comes to mind
And I become sad
I don’t know what it is
Perhaps it is regret?
…That’s as far as I got. I can’t seem to finish it though. 😮
Dark Messenger
01-26-2002, 06:51 PM
What do you mean "It’s not a very good poem", I’m sure it will be fine once its finished, infact it’s quite good allready!
Setsuna Yuna
01-27-2002, 06:51 AM
Thanks. 😀 I probably won’t finish it, but if I do, I’ll post it here.
Dark Messenger
01-27-2002, 07:19 PM
You should finish it, it allready shows you have real talent.
fflover2002
01-27-2002, 07:36 PM
That’s a good poem….way better than I could do!
SSJ
01-28-2002, 12:55 AM
Yes its quite good. I suck at poems but I know thats good. Keep it up!;)