r0x0rs and stuff liek that.

new thread.... I dunno, I just wanna get out to ppl, ya know? I was kinda pissed thinking earlier cuz I know alot of naive people and it annoys me. I hate middle school

Time of Day

Do you got the time to spare?
a moment of your life to care?
Can't you see the people living life with little hope?
they cant cope
they need addvice
they need a world without the lies
What's a little time of day to spend looking at the world today?

Moments pass and visions flash
so much new technology
babies are born, our future
and sometimes our future dies
we need advice
we need a world without the lies

Sometimes money pays for most things
but it cannot pay for everything
even love cant solve everything, but it helps
people come and people go
people want the best of things
before even seeing what it's like within the worse
people seek revenge and power
without trying to live the norm
they fight the fight and live the life
of a world full of lies and porn

Our future is dying and we're going down with it
because we dont got the time to spare
no moments free for us to care
we cant see the people living life with little hope
do we know how they cant cope?
we need advice
we need a world without the lies
dont you got the time of day to spend looking at the world today?

Great poem Desiree. Very truthful and heartfelt. I liked it.

But it's a shame when people treat you badly when you don't deserve it. Just keep hanging on, if that's what you need to do. Keep up the good work.

Nice-ish Dez Dez. I like poems with interesting schemes and topics, and this one definitely heads in that direction. Wicked :)