CE
03-05-2003, 05:02 PM
This is dedicated to BB, Jacklynn and Angey. ^_^

Lie

Maybe its helping that you�re not there
To see me fail
And fall again
Talking, I seem fine. I can lie. Its simple that way.
But you�ll never know.
I won�t let you know.
Im too much trouble already.
Faking, I seem fine. I can cry. Its simple that way.
I make a big deal. Its not that bad anyway,
Talentless.
Screaming, I seem fine. I can lie. And I will.
I can lie.
Its so simple that way.
I�ll change the subject again. I don�t want to talk even though
Talking, I am fine.
I feel like I'm a lie.


Love you guys, but don't take this the wrong way.
You're my best friends, and you help me sooo much.

Deja
03-08-2003, 05:53 PM
I like that one :) I dont know what to say but that it hit me right *puts her hand over her heart* there! I've felt similar. Good job CE :D

Autumn
03-09-2003, 03:46 AM
Great poem CE. Very realistic and hard hurting. It's easy to see that you put a lot of thought into this poem, which is good.

Kenji
03-12-2003, 10:27 AM
Morgan, you can write some really deep poetry.

I love this poem very much, it was very emotional and sad...it reminded me of being a youngster to my teens.

I hope you can write some more poems, I'm inspired by them.

Great job!