Marceline
03-04-2003, 08:53 AM
As some of you know, I've had a horrible case of writer's block as of late, but tonight, I managed to spurn out something that wasn't completely appalling. However, I am now stuck, so I am posting my first paragraph to you, and hoping for some ideas for what direction I should take this is.
"Please�" he said, with a sort of quiet desperation. And so she relented, parted her lips, and allowed him to kiss her while she stood there passionless and cold. He never should have fallen in love with her, that was his first mistake. She was terrified and so alone, and that was all she understood about herself. Grasping something as complex as a human relationship was the furthest thing from her reach. And still, she let him kiss her, partly because she was terrified, but mostly because she was alone.
"Please�" he said, with a sort of quiet desperation. And so she relented, parted her lips, and allowed him to kiss her while she stood there passionless and cold. He never should have fallen in love with her, that was his first mistake. She was terrified and so alone, and that was all she understood about herself. Grasping something as complex as a human relationship was the furthest thing from her reach. And still, she let him kiss her, partly because she was terrified, but mostly because she was alone.