So, whatcha think~? ^__^ I like it, but the eyes seem so.. empty and cold. I wanted to fix them, but I'm too lazy. XD

Next one..




Quistis. Drawing is by someone else.. ack.. I can't remember the URL! >_< But I liked it so much, I decided to draw it.. whee~

Comments? ^_~

Well the porportions and the ideas are very good, but I think you could benifit from using a finer harder pencil, maybe a mechanical. If you just worked on the line thickness a little these would be amazing.

But dont get me wrong, I like them alot as is. Good work!

Very good! I would love to burden you with negative critique, but I can't come up with anything :) Great work.

Originally posted by Gehenna
Very good! I would love to burden you with negative critique, but I can't come up with anything :) Great work.

Lol, I'd like to criticize as well, but there is simply no reason too. Very well done.

I like the one of Quistis. It was very well drawn.

The first one was also nice, but I have to admit the angle her neck seemed out of proportion.

Nice job though, Serena!

These are good. They remind me that I've got to find some time to practice. XD

One thing you can work on is the confidence in your strokes. The lines are too light, and makes you seem unsure of yourself. Bolder, darker strokes will make your drawings look more professional. Everything else is perfect. XD