Techchild
11-26-2009, 10:22 PM
Howing winds and midnights charm do I find
Lazing amongst the stars it hides and we run,
Seeking a diamond amidst glass the persuers,
The demons, the liars, the churls - they all seek
to undo what I have done,
Allow my spirit to perish,
For all humanity in it's pestulance has but one
unfounded reasoning.
To destroy, to destroy, to destroy.

Any thoughts or criticsms welcome.

Red
11-27-2009, 06:05 AM
Mistake

What I once thought was a smile
Only disguised was a frown
You showed me your a deceiver
You're a clown

You're a loser
You're a disease
The infection is spreading
Eyes bloodshot, don't breathe, fall to your knees.

Burn in hell, you're a waste
You deserve nothing, you're a disorder
You're lonely, nobody cares
Out of order

I'm ashamed of you
You wasted my time
You are my nightmare
I feel stupid to call you mine

I hate you
More than you will ever know
I know you regret it
I let all of our memories go

It's time to get these feelings out
I finally found my cure
It's your turn to rot
What are you going to conjure

You are a mistake
Biggest I have ever made
You have no feelings
My feelings are gone, barricade.
___________________________
AM I DOING IT RITE?

Gentleman Ghost
11-27-2009, 07:34 AM
Paging Dr. Mambo

You need help pronto!

Techchild
11-27-2009, 02:32 PM
AM I DOING IT RITE?

That is fantastic.

Red
11-28-2009, 07:30 AM
Thank you ;o
and excuse to vent out some animosity I've had ^___________^

Techchild
11-28-2009, 09:51 AM
Thank you ;o
and excuse to vent out some animosity I've had ^___________^

Awww, don't worry about it.