Rinoa
01-08-2002, 09:27 AM
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Ra's betrothed wife
complexion of a deadly pallor
eyes of cool sadness
look upon the dark land
Beautiful and enigmatic
she's a goddess of the night
Her pale smile draws
draws many a thing near
Eudemons and caspers
to dance under her
But her wrath draws
the bounties of Hell and beyond
in endless floods of blood
All this is as earth rests
unprotected and weak
when Ra rises once more,
she hides her shame
Because her love has arrived,
he overcomes her power
and conquers the sky
Always a noble gentleman
beckoning forth all good
While she waits to live
once more
� Lysa Maiya Marrie Garza

galad
01-08-2002, 04:31 PM
why is apollo,
helios, ra and horus?

why hecate,
artemis and selene?

???

Amy
01-08-2002, 10:48 PM
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Thats a realy strange poem, a bit too confuzing o_O
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Rinoa
01-09-2002, 03:20 AM
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It's referring to a "Ra's" wife. Her overall character and appearance. What she does, how she acts; all when Ra is away. Suddenly he returns, and brings with him power much more complex than her's and somehow she becomes small or nothing at all again. While Ra's a noble gentleman, she's rather ruthless and wild. The part that's referring to "she waits to live again" really means she's waiting for Ra to go away again so that she make be her true self. The whole masquerade she holds is just to make Ra happy.

Bah, it's "strange," I know. But I was bored and just wrote away.

Rinoa
01-11-2002, 09:38 AM
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Obviously you all are still "confuzed" seeing as no one else replied... :o Fine. I'll write a different one much more appropriate to your standards. :p :p :p

Momonoki
05-20-2016, 02:35 AM
This is a beautiful piece of writing.

Dave999
06-22-2016, 08:13 AM
It's beautiful Rinoa, don't let others take you down because they don't fully grasp the poem's meaning :)

THOMAS TALLIS
07-30-2016, 03:40 PM
Thanks, Rinoa

B@d@pple
02-24-2018, 11:41 AM
I demand you give this a title. Now. Because if you don't...so help me, I will pout.