Hello_project_girl28
02-08-2009, 05:47 AM
When I wanted to cry, you were there for me
I just gotta say thank you...You are my best friend
I only have 6 minutes to write this poem, I wish I had more time
But I have to say goodbye to you now...

Suji-Ookami
02-12-2009, 04:33 PM
Impromptu poems are good... I like... gj ^ ^

Blue Ray
04-20-2009, 05:14 AM
aww so cute

Purrr
04-20-2009, 08:43 AM
No offense, but learn Iambic pentameter.

Redbat
04-20-2009, 08:37 PM
Quite sweet, but not worth reading as a spectator.

"You Envied the Stars Their Height
Amy Blakemore

The day folded;
Like a Cabbage White closing its wings
On a windowsill.

With the old, worn-out risk,
the unexplainable, skewed
trigonometry
of drunkenness

you climbed the fire escape.

Got on the roof.
But once you were there, you
envied the stars

their height

and could not get back down."

It reminded me of this, for some reason.

Keep writing, I say!